Story so far...
10 year old Tintin was simply returning home. But the trouble all starts when he meets a man looking for two girls. answering no, Tintin continues walikng, the wrong way that is! in the result, he got caught in a terrible storm! In a daring rescure, Tintin was saved. Taking shelter in a cave, he meets his rescuer, Rouge. Now someone has run in with a terrible temper. who is it? find out in part 4 of "Tintin and The Runaways"!!!
part 20...Tintin picks at his food.
M; the police will find her.
T;...i can't eat...
S; eat. you need strength to find her!
O; yeah. *gobs down food*
T; i'm going out...*leaves and goes to bazzar*
Tintin goes back to the place where Rouge was taken. He notices a Inn close by.
T; if i were them...i'd go there! why didn't i think that before!?
he sneaks inside and into the basement. he sees Zinny and Zavior. they had rouge tied to a wall.
Z; you wanna go? THEN TELL US WHERE IT IS!!!
R; I- i don't know what you're talking about!
X; does this make you change your mind? *press button*
They had put a shock collar on her. the button made it zap.
Z; WHERE IS- *passes out*
X; zinny?- *passes out*
T; the things you can do with a wodden board.
R; Tintin! i knew i could count on you!!!
tintin unties Rouge and leads her back to the hotel room.
part 21 coming soon...
part 19...it was Oliver and Madie! they were in much nicer clothes.
T; Guys! those goons, Zinny and Xavior! they kidnapped Rouge!
O; couldn't hurt to be a less "goons"....
M; where did they take her?
T; dunno!!! i looked all day! I'm really worried about her!
M; we all are ginger. now follow us! daddy has a table reserved for us.
Tintin follows them. He thinks of where Rouge could be. They arrive at a luxorius 5-star hotel. in a room; was Sackarin. he greets the kids with a smile.
S; madie! Oliver! where have you been!?
M; *is picked up by sackarin* we found tintin!
O; he says Rouge was kidnapped!
S; Why rouge...why rouge?....*puts down madie*
T; What is wrong with you!?
T; NOW YOU DO SOMETHING. some family rouge has. no wonder she dissaperes when you're around...
M; hmph! let's just eat something!
they go to the downstairs retraunt...part 20 coming soon..
Part 18...It was Zinny and Xavior!!! They try to grab them, but Rouge pushes Tintin out of the way. He falls into a cart. Xavior and Zinny grab Rouge and dissaper.
T; Rouge! *getting up* Rouge!!!
R; *off in distance* over...here!!!....
T; Don't worry! i'm gonna find ya!!! *runs off to find her*
Tintin serches the entire bazzar, but there was no trace of Rouge or the others. By The afternoon, he was tuckered out.
T; man... where...are..they?
someone taps on his shoulder...part 19 coming soon...(sorry it's so short!)
part 17...Tintin searches all over the ship, but can't find madie, oliver, or mr. sacharin. it's night now...
T; puff...pufff...GUYS!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?
R; What's the matter Tintin?
T; madie's been kidnapped by her dad! oliver went after them. i've looked, but they di- hey. were've YOU been???
R; umm...i went to get a bite.
T; you really need to stop walking off like that. it's kinda creppy when you pop out of no where...
R; sheesh, fine. we'll look for them tommorow.
the next day...they wake up early. the boat is just an hour till it reaches it's destination; Cairo, Egypt.
T; we still can't find them...
R; maybe they're going to the city! come on! let's go!
Rouge and Tintin escape the ship and into Cairo.
R; this is a big market place. i've never seen so many colors in one place! i'm glad i decided to come...
T; wait... you've never been to Cairo?
R; nope! not at all!
T; oh great...
a shadow looms over them...part 18 coming soon...
part 16... Sacharin takes madie away. Tintin and Oliver are too bafalled to do anything. Rouge runs in. She slaps them both and runs off to rescue madie.
T; hey! what was that for!?
O; MADIE'S BEING KIDNAPPED BONE HEAD!!! *runs off*
T; Madie's b- wait, did he just call me a bone head??? oh, that's right. MADIE!!! WE'LL SAVE YA!!! *chase them*
Tintin sees Sacharin and trys to catch him, but fails to do so. Instead, Allan catches him!
A; where do you think y-
T; *kicks Allan* can't you see I'm trying to rescue my fr-
A; ya. I know Madie. her dad hired me to get her and Rosa
T; rosa? who's she??? I know rouge but-
A; Rouge! Rouge IS Rosa, bone head!!!
T; what's with the bone head? wait. LET ME GO!!! *bites allan's arm*
allan drops Tintin. little Tintin runs off to rescue his freinds...
part 17 coming soon...
part 15... The kids were taken to the deck of the ship.
T; leave us alone you big creep!
A; first of all, my name's Allan. second, what were you doing in the cargo hold anyways?
M; we were kidnapped!
R; by two...men.
Madie gently pats Oliver on the back. he looks at her and smiles.
A; hmm...I'll have to report to the captain. *leaves*
R;...nows our chance! lets hide untill tommorrow!
the kids runaway and hide in Mr. Sacarins cabbins. delighted at the sight of her dad, Madie runs up and hugs him. Rouge sighs and walks away.
M; daddy! could you hide us???
S; let me th- no. I'm taking you home once and for all!
part 16 coming soon...
part 14...Zinny and Xavior throw the kids into the cargo hold and leave. Tintin looks at Oliver.
T; Oliver...are you ok?
O; OK!? DO YOU THINK I'M OK!? My brothers betrayed me! *sniffle* they're bad guys!
M; it's ok...I'm sure they still love you as a brother...
T;Rouge? is something wrong?
R;...nothing. So! when we arive in Cario, we go to the golden destert ball.
M; there, we blend into the crowd. steal the headdress of Cleopatra. get out. then leave!
T/O; O_O......are we gonna pull that off?
R; yes! we can do anything as a team!
someone barges in and grabs madie.
???; what are you three little rats doing down here?!
the three kids are dragged out of the hold...
part 15 coming soon..
guys. I need an idea. I know what the main parts of the story will be; the next big part is when Tintin, Rouge, Oliver, and Madie arive in Cairo.
I don't know what to fill in when they're on the boat...