This is a crossover between MMPR, PRNF, PRDT, PRMF, PRJF, and PRSS. So here goes nothing.
AT COMMAND CENTER WITH MIGHTY MORPHIN'
Jason: Hey guys, we got an invitation.
Billy: An invitation for what?
Jason: I don't know, I haven't opened it yet.
Kimberly: Well open it then.
Jason: Ok, I will.
Trini: So what is it?
Jason: It looks like an invitation for a some type of party.
Zach: A party, we're so there!
Jason: I don't think we should.
Billy: Why not?
Jason: Because I'm pretty sure whoever wrote this, sent this to the wrong place. I mean there isn't even a return address on it.
Zach: Snooze they lose.
Jason: We can't Zach.
Kimberly: Is there any other way to contact this person?
Jason: Yeah, a telephone number.
Trini: Call it then dude.
Jason: Let's ask Zordon, on what we should do. Hey Zordon.
Zordon: Yes Jason.
i like how you r writing it now it shows who is talking u can write how ever u want no offense to the person who says otherwise but its bgs12's story let the author write it the way they write it dont tell them otherwise unless its an idea
I am a big fan of the Power Rangers. And I understand that you want to write the story the way you want to. But the first rule of writing fanfiction is that you have to get your facts straight. You've missed crucial seasons, such as Power Rangers in Space, Turbo, Lost Galaxy, Lightspeed Rescue, Time Force, Wild Force, SPD, RPM (Which was an amazing season). And just because rangerak, has been botheriing you about his concerns doesn't mean you need to rude about it. You have to be able to accept constructive criticism in order to write better.
1.) I like how you want to make everyone related to each other. But you have to make sure its cohesive and blends together. Like Conner and Casey we have no back story. You just pushed them together. Same with Tommy and Zander.
2.) Grammar. It's fanfiction not a play. So use apostrophes "" and create a setting. It's just too broken up and really not nice to read.
Its my opinion. I have been reading and writing fanfics for 3 years.
Sorry, i know its been a while, but i've been really busy. And i'm here with a new chapter. So its all good.
Power Rangers Reunion part 64:
Back at Kira?s house.
Conner walks into Kira?s room with a glass of water.
Conner: Here?s your water.
Conner: Sure thing. (he sits down) So how are you feeling?
Kira: Fine I guess. Maybe a little tired.
Conner: And how do you feel about the whole Trent situation?
Kira: Honestly I don?t want to talk about it, because at this moment I never want to see him again.
Conner: I?m sorry. Is there anything I can do to help?
Kira: Just keep Trent as far away from me as you possibly can.
Conner: I?ll try my best. (he says while smirking)
Kira: (now changing the subject) So why did you stay here until I woke up?
Conner: I couldn?t tell you.
Kira: How come?
Conner: I don?t know.
Kira: Well you must?ve had some reason to stay.
Conner: I really didn?t.
Kira: Oh come on, Conner you know you had a reason, what is it?
Conner: Fine if you must know, I stayed because I knew you would need help when you woke up.
Conner: Yes. I mean being attacked by puddies, kelzacs, tyranodromes, and a break up?!? That?s a lot for one night.
Kira: And don?t forget winning Reefside Idol.
Conner: Even more! That and the fact that I?m maybe in love with you?
Kira: ? What?
Conner: You heard me.
Kira: I know I heard you, but seriously?!?
Conner: I wouldn?t tell you anything that wasn?t true.
Kira: Oh my.
Conner: Yeah, sorry.
Kira: Don?t be. Because if it helps I kind of like you too. At least the past couple of weeks anyway.
Conner: Really? Why didn?t you say anything to me?
Kira: You had Crysta and I had Trent, so I didn?t think about it. I do know now though.
Conner: I would hope so.
@saracates1, Magic189, EvilVampir. Ok. I will continue to post the story. But i can't right now. I'm a little limited on time so.... I'll try posting a chapter tomorrow night. And if not tomorrow night, definetly monday morning.
Conner: I better let Dr. Oliver know that kira is awake.
Conner dials Dr. O's cell number.
Ring ring ring.
Tommy: (more than half asleep) Hello?
Conner: Hey Dr. O, it's Conner.
Tommy: (now half asleep) Oh hey, what's up?
Conner: I just wanted to let you know that kira woke up.
Tommy: Thats great. Tell her I'll be over to check on her tomorrow morning.
Conner: Uh... It is tomorrow.
Tommy looks at the time.
Tommy: Fine later today then. Now if you could please excuse me, I'm going to head back to bed now.
Conner: Ok, night, Dr. O.
Tommy hangs up.
At Tommy's house.
Haley: What did Conner want?
Tommy: He just wanted to let me know Kira was awake and ok.
Haley. That's good.
Tommy: Yep. I told him to tell Kira I'll be over later to today to check up on her.
Haley: Ok, I'm heading back to bed now.
Tommy: Me too. Good night, Haley.
Haley: Night, Tommy.
Hey guys, sorry my chapters have been so short recently, it's just the fact that i haven't been able to update my fanfic on my word document. Because i usually copy and paste a chapter off that, but i haven't had the time. And to be honest this is the last time i'm going to be able to post until school starts back up. That is unless i get access to another computer, which i might be able to. But i just wanted to wish all my fans and other nick.com visitors happy holidays, and hope they're happy, safe, and fun ones. Also can we please give a big thank you to all the people who work on posting our messages on these boards. Just imagine how many of these messages they have to look at. So thanks, and happy holidays!
Congratulations everyone! You have now caught up to where I stopped writing on my word document. If you've been reading this since the beginning you now know you have read 55 pages with over 15,000 words. As soon as I get a break from homework, I promise I'll add more to my word document. I do have the finished copy of "Power Rangers Reunion" in a notebook that I don't have with me right now. I am trying my best to finish it on word. I promise I'll have a new chapter posted at the end of this week.
Also if you don't mind, please help me create some monsters for the sequel of this story. Thanks!