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Date: 07/31/12 2:25 PM
From: Artsity201

Chapter 1:The tournament
I was getting ready for the tournament,i knew i was going to win but i was nervose what if im wronge what if i dont win, what if i disapoint my family,espeaily what if i disapoint my grandpa goku......it was so much to think about but a second later i was inerupted in my thoughs by a fimiluar voice saying''Pan are you ready the tournament is about to begin''I turned around to see who it was it was my father,i stared at him for what seemed like forever i saw the happieness in his eyes i could tell he was proud of me.I walked out the door holding hands with my father,i felt so nervouse,espeicaly when i saw my granfather waving at me and calling my name.My face turned red but i stood stronge and went up to the fighting ring.

~Hoped you liked it!~Artsity201

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Date: 05/06/13 8:04 PM
From: sadface5

This isn't gonna fall off the boards is it?
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Date: 04/19/13 11:53 PM
From: petro11

MUST..........HAVE...........MORE.............
Pan is sorta my fave
PIE
PEOPLE
STUFF
I like to miss spell stuff on purpose
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Date: 03/29/13 11:24 PM
From: powder72

where r u Artsity201???
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Date: 02/27/13 11:12 PM
From: powder72

when will u be posting more to this story?
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Date: 02/05/13 12:05 AM
From: gliter3002

love your story soooooooo much artsity201 thank you for making it hope you be back within a week! :)
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Date: 02/04/13 8:02 PM
From: powder72

i will not let pans story leave us. if it is on the fourth(or so on) page, i will post. even if its a totally random thing that doesnt even relate to the story a single bit.but i cant do this by myself, so all of you other people who love this story, help on with me.PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
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Date: 02/03/13 11:43 AM
From: Artsity201

Hey guys,This is super important that you read this!!!!!!
I'm going to be gone for a little while,and I won't be able to post any chapters for a while,so......I'm posting one last chapter today or tomorrow,but I need YOU GUYS to keep this story ALIVE!I would panic if it was all the way back there on the board!So,please keep commenting and keeping this post alive! Please!

Artsity
Goodbye for a little while......

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Date: 02/01/13 8:06 PM
From: Artsity201

Chapter:189
Pansie smiled as Anshi admired her posters of her great-grandfather,Goku.She grasped her hands together with a silent slap and said,
"Cool,huh?"She put her hands on her hips and smirked."Thats my great-grandfather,Goku.He saved the world so many times in his life,and he's an amazing martail artist."She acted as if he were a hero from thousands of years ago,which he was.
"Sounds cool,"Anshi stared at the posters and then back at Pansie."He sounds amazing.Is there any chance that I could meet him?"Pansie smiled broadly.
"If you stay for dinner,sure!"
"SISSY!"Pansie's baby brother,Gomu came in the room and clasped his little chubby arms around Pansie,laughing with a cute sound of his voice."I miwwed you!"He said cheerfully.(A/N:He said "I missed you".)
Pansie giggled and picked him up,rocking him in her arms."I did,too."She turned around to Anshi,making Gomu face him.Gomu smiled and clapped.
"Fend!"He said,"Fend!"He repeated.(A/N:He said "friend")Anshi smiled and said,
"Who's he?"Smiling,Pansie grabbed Gomu out of her arms and handed him gently to Anshi,who adored him in seconds."He's adorable."Anshi tickled Gomu's nose,making Gomu laugh.
"Hes my little baby brother,Gomu."Pansie smiled at the two,then said,"Wait one sec,okay?"Anshi nodded and kept playing with the baby.Once in the kitchen,Pansie approached her mother.
"Mom,can Anshi stay for dinner,he wants to meet grandpa."Pansie gave her mom a puppy-face and a tear eye,making her mother sigh.
"Alright,"Pan said with doubt."Thats fine with me."Pansie smiled,calmly on the outside,but partying on the inside.Once out of sight,Pansie rushed up the stairs jumping and smiling from ear to ear.
"Anshi,you are welcome to stay for dinner.That way you can meet my grandpa,Goku!"Pansie said,grabbing baby Gomu from Anshi's arms.Anshi nodded and smiled,replying,
"Sure,I'd love to."He smiled and watched Pansie take Gomu down stairs,then watched her come back into the room.
"I can tell your going to fit in with this type of place real well."Pansie complemented.
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Date: 01/31/13 8:20 PM
From: Artsity201

Hey,ya'll!
I have the new chapter made,and I've checked it and re-checked it and I think its good so far.Anyways,before I post it,can you peeps comment,please?
I want some comments peoples!

Artsity201
Comment you gorgeous popsicles!
YOU'VE BEEN HAZED!

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Date: 01/27/13 10:15 AM
From: DBZloveLRP

This is really good!
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Date: 01/26/13 10:06 PM
From: Artsity201

@Trunksgal
Your welcome,Im glad I could help!

@Everone!
Im so sorry,I meant to post the next chapter but I haven't gotten to it.Please,comment!

Artsity

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Date: 01/25/13 8:46 PM
From: Trunksgal

@Artsity201

Thank you!!

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Date: 01/24/13 7:08 PM
From: Artsity201

New chapter coming soon!


Artsity

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Date: 01/23/13 10:51 AM
From: Artsity201

@Glitter
Thankyou so much!
I've been wondering where you went....
Oh,and Im 13!

Artsity

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Date: 01/22/13 7:25 PM
From: gliter3002

Hey Artsity201 thank you for continuing ~Pans Story~ it's a great story. I've been really busy figuring out my new kindle that I got for Christmas! Sorry about not commenting much! You are an excellent writer! Good Luck on ~Pans Story~ I might not be on for a few weeks of months. But if I do get on the computer the first site I will go to is: ~"Pan's Story" dragonballGT fanfic!~ How old are ya? I'm 10! :)
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Date: 01/22/13 6:27 PM
From: Artsity201

@Trunksgal
Oh,thats easy!

So,do this,but WITHOUT the dots,periods.Also,when you do this,DON'T capitalize the letters!

<u.>Underline</u.>
<i.>Italic</i.>
<s.>Strike Out</s.>
<b.>Bold</b.>

Then,they all look like this:

Underline
Italic
Strike out
Bold

Artsity

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Date: 01/21/13 9:21 PM
From: Trunksgal

@Artsity201

How do you underline like you do your chapters? Thanks

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Date: 01/21/13 2:41 PM
From: Artsity201

Chapter:187
Taking Anshi towards her house,Pansie watched as Chad slowly walked home.Walking inside her house,she told Anshi about her parents,but she didn't get far,'cause her baby brother,Nomu came running towards her and holding out his arms.Pansie laughed as she swung him around,kissing his forehead sweetly.
"Where you go?"He asked gentley.He held his little arms on Pansie's neck,barely wrapping them around her.
"Oh,I just went with friends to..the park.Nomu,this is Anshi.Anshi,this is my baby brother,Nomu."She introduced each of them to eachother.
"He's cute,"Anshi smiled,gently rubbing Nomu's cheek."How old is he?"
"Three,but he seems more like a five year old to me."Both of them started laughing,and thats where Trunks and Pan come in.
"Why hello,"Pan said,hands both on her stomach."Who is this,Pansie?"
Pansie blushed and replied,"Anshi."Pansie smiled and said,"We met at the park."She lied through her teeth.
"Oh,thats nice."But,thats when Pan noticed the boys cheek."Oh dear,what happened!?"She touched his cheek,acting as if it were broken or something.
"Mom,its fine."Pansie bit her lip,trying to think of a lie."He said it was from falling on the ground,and....so I helped him."
Trunks eyed down his daughter,knowing that she was lieing."Pansie,why is your dress wet? Why is your tights ripped? What on earth happened?!"
Shaking,Pansie replied,"Okay,maybe we were running around the park,and we sorta...fell into a ditch."She knew they wouldn't believe this.Anshi was white,knowing that if he spoke one word,Pansie's done.
"Pan may I see you in the kitchen please?"Trunks told his wife,motioning for her to folow.Pan did so,making her way slowly over towards the door.
"You'r not a very good liar,"Whispered Anshi with a smirk."I could've done better than that!"
"Yeah,yeah,"Pansie giggled and took his hand."Lets go up stairs."
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Date: 01/21/13 10:52 AM
From: Artsity201

Thankyou!

Artsity
~*Pan's story*~

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Date: 01/21/13 12:39 AM
From: db2612

i'm excited to see what you write next
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