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Date: 07/31/12 2:25 PM
From: Artsity201

Chapter 1:The tournament
I was getting ready for the tournament,i knew i was going to win but i was nervose what if im wronge what if i dont win, what if i disapoint my family,espeaily what if i disapoint my grandpa goku......it was so much to think about but a second later i was inerupted in my thoughs by a fimiluar voice saying''Pan are you ready the tournament is about to begin''I turned around to see who it was it was my father,i stared at him for what seemed like forever i saw the happieness in his eyes i could tell he was proud of me.I walked out the door holding hands with my father,i felt so nervouse,espeicaly when i saw my granfather waving at me and calling my name.My face turned red but i stood stronge and went up to the fighting ring.

~Hoped you liked it!~Artsity201

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Date: 01/21/13 12:28 AM
From: db2612

I love all the work you did
Keep going
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Date: 01/21/13 12:20 AM
From: db2612

i like it. it's awsome
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Date: 01/20/13 6:36 PM
From: Artsity201

Chapter:186
Laying back against the rocks,Chad and Anshi relaxed,alowing Pansie to attend to their aid.Placing a rag into the pond,Pansie soaked it till it was drenched,then carefully placed it onto Anshi's head,then Chads.
"Chad,I told you this was a bad idea!"Scoffed,Pansie.She glanced at her wounded friend,who was grinning with a smile.
"What? At least we didn't get destroyed, plus we wouldn't of found your little friend here if we didn't.You should be thankful."Chad snapped back.
Pansie rolled her eyes and smiled,turning her attention back to Anshi."Im sorry about him,hes a hot-head."She gently took the rag from his forehead and squeezed it out beside her,dampening her dresse's trim.Rolling up her sleeves,she pulled the hair from his face.
Chads cheeks began to heaten as the jelously punched through his chest."Ya know,I need some attention to!"He said bitterly.
"Oh,sorry,got caught up helped our new friend here."Pansie studdered,blushing rather embarassingly."Hold your head up!"She said to Chad,who was being stuborn and not listening."Come on Chad,hold your head up!"Pansie forced his head up and put the rag on his cut neck."Thankyou,"She let out an exasperated sigh.
"May I ask,"Anshi started."Where we are?"He put on a bewildered look,showing Pansie how confused he was.
"Oh,"Pansie giggled."You see,when my mother and father were younger,they were just friends at the time,used to come here and relax,telling secerets and once....my mother took on a powerful person here,and she almost didn't survive."Pansie cleared her throat."This is the place my father admitted his love for my mother,and...this is also the place they were married."She smiled at the thought.
"Thats nice,"Chad said anoyyingly."Can I get more aid please!"Pansie glared at him and quickly slapped the rag onto his neck,making him flinch.
"As I was saying,"Pansie continued."This is a specail place,and it needs to be kept safe.Me and my parents are the only people who know about it,and now...you guys to."Pansie shrugged and stood up,walking slowly over to the pond.Fixing her hair in the reflection,she managed to get her hair back into a neat braid.Her black knee high dress was still neat,but it was damp and wet.Her white tights were fine,but they had slits in them.Her black slip ons were fine,but dirty.The only thing perfect was her hair.Giggling,she put on a smile and looked at her reflection once more,watching the water move around in circles as she dipped her thin finger into it.
"This is the place where I love you,"She whispered to herself,remembering the song her mother sang to her when she was a child.
One day,you'll become a great warrior,and you will accomplish many things,but...later in your young life,you will face a big decission.It takes risk and courage to face the power of enimes,and it takes a strong sayain,like you to make your dreams become reality......
Her mothers words echoed through her head as she spaced out,staring at the open pond.Touching her locket on her neck,she opened it and looked inside to see the little picuture.Her,her mother,father,and Nomu.I promise mommy,I will be as great as you were when you were younger! I want to be a super powerful girl! I want to fly and shoot colors out of my hands!The words she said when she was a child made her giggle.
"Pansie,you alright?"Anshi and Chad asked worringly.Pansie turned around and smiled.
"Yeah,just..lost in thought,I guess."She closed her locket and put her hands to her sides.I wonder what my mother meant by big decissions?
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Date: 01/20/13 2:55 PM
From: Artsity201

Thankyou for the wonderful comments db!
Chapter:186
Feeling her heart pounding out of her chest,Pansie watched as the darkness overwhelmed her eyesight.Creeping in more deeper,Chad and Pansie saw people walking through the Gorrin town,whispering and holding weapons in their hands.Terrorified,Pansie whispered,
"Can we please go!?"She tugged on Chad's arm,but he slapped her hand away and tightly grabbed her wrist.
"Shh,they might hear yo-"The men turned to look at the two children,readying their weapons."To late."Chad said shakily.Jumping up,he held Pansie's hand and rushed towards the entrance.One of the men thrusted his numb-chucks towards Chad and hit the gate,locking it sucure.
"oh no,"Chad said hesitantly."Pansie,whatever you do,don't fight!"He ordered.
"But-"Chad shot her a look and then rushed towards the men,kicking his foot up and throwing punches.Pansie stood in the shadows,watching for her dear life.Looking up,she noticed a pair of eyes watching her.Frightend,she kicked her foot in the figures face,hitting their cheek.Grunting,the figure came into the light,showing its face.
A boy,about 15,grey eyes and black spikey hair.His skin was pale and his figure was thin,but his arms were slightly muscular.Pansie felt her cheeks color as she looked at him carefully.
"I-Im so sorry!"She touched the boys hand,which was on his cheek and pulled it away,seeing a bruise."I was frightend!"The boy looked at her,never feeling this much hospitalty before.He watched as she intently touched his cheek gently,examining the wound.
"Wh-Whats your name?"He got to say.Pansie looked at him with a unsure smile.But she replied,
"Pansie."
The boy smiled at the name,picturing a field full of Pansies,a wonderful type of flower."My names Anshi."He said taking Pansie's hand away from his cheek gently,leaving his hand on hers.Pansie smiled and then glanced at Chad,who was busy with the men.
"Oh no!"She said standing up."Be right back!"Pansie winked and snapped her fingers,vanishing,quickly using Instant-Transportation,her grandfathers trick.
Coming up from behind one of the men that was about to punch Chad,Pansie kicked her hands up,punching all the pressure points of the man,bruising him fastly.He turned and looked at her,backing away and running off.
"Are you okay,Chad?"Pansie helped Chad up,looking at him.His lip was cut,bleeding slightly.Helping him over towards Pansie's new friend,Anshi,Chad looked at the boy and pulled Pansie close.
"Be careful,Pansie!"Pansie giggled and went over and stood beside Anshi."Its alright,hes a friend."Pansie looked at his cheek again,then at Chad's hurt lip."Folow me."She helped them down the alley and took them somewhere only she knows about.Well,other than her parents.
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Date: 01/20/13 2:14 PM
From: Artsity201

@db
Thanks,your comments really help!
New chapter coming soon!

Artsity

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Date: 01/19/13 6:34 PM
From: db2612

love it
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Date: 01/19/13 2:54 PM
From: Artsity201

Oh,thank goodness!
I thought it was gone forever!
Thankyou Nickfirefly!

Artsity

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Date: 01/19/13 10:44 AM
From: Artsity201

@Mods
Umm....what happened to the legend of korra and avatar fanfiction boards? Why aren't they here anymore,did something happen? Just wanting to know.

Thanks!
Artsity


Hello from NickFirefly:
Those pesky bots have been busy since we brought back the Bot board or maybe its the aliens from Alien Dawn? Rest assured the Avatar Fan Fiction Board is alive and well! You can find it under My Nick and it's the first board listed! Happy Posting!

http://www.nick.com/mynick/messageboards/viewboard.jhtml?bID=105146

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Date: 01/16/13 4:04 PM
From: Artsity201

Thankyou for all your wonderful comments!
Im so sorry for not posting sooner,I was at the hospital with my family because my mom was having a baby.Its a boy! Hes so adoreable! Anyways,I hope you all like this chapter as much as you liked the first one,thankyou for reading! I decided to start at the chapter I stopped at,so heres chapter 185! By the way,in this chapter you'll understand somthing about what Im trying to say,just read carefully.

Chapter:185
Her thick black hair smoothed out like silk as she brushed it.Looking at her reflection,Pansie relized how much she looked like her mother.Smiling,she gently put the brush down and stood up from her chair,walking over to the dresser.Rummaging through her cloths,she held up a pair of jean shorts and a green v-neck.Chad's not much of a fancy boy,hes more.....regular,Pansie thought to herself.In a couple of mintutes,she had to meet Chad at the park,to hang out.Of course,Pansie thought it was more than that,but she didn't know for sure.Slipping her socks on,she grabbed her white converse and put them on,tieing the lace in a knot.
"Pansie,"A knock sounded at the door.It was her mother,Pan."Deary,Nomu wants to say bye before you leave."A smile of joy curved onto Pansie's lips as she opened the door.
Nomu stood there,thumb in his mouth and his eyes filled with laughter."Ba!"He tried his best to say bye,but thats how he pronounces it.Besides,hes only 2.Reaching out his arms,he asked for a hug.Pansie held him up in her arms and tightly embraced him,kissing his forehead and then looking in the mirror.
"Look,"She said in a sweet voice,pointing to her and Nomu in the reflection."Right there is a strong boy."She said with a smile.Somthing that suprised Pansie is what Nomu did.He looked up at his sister and gave her cheek a kiss,then crawled down her leg and back onto the ground,as if he knew what she meant.
"Your so smart."She whispered to herself,watching baby Nomu crawl down the hall."Well,time to go."Pansie cheerfully stepped out the front door and waved back at her parents and little brother,walking down the hill.''Chad here I come."
Curving through alleys and walk ways,Pansie saw a figure sitting down on a park bench,stareing at her.Chad.Putting on a smile,Pansie made her way over to the bench and sat next to him."Hey,"She said.
"Whats up."Chad replied nochantly."Im suprised you got here so quickly,your usaully late."He nudged her side and laughed.Pansie raised and eyebrowl and joked,
"Oh,like your never late."Chad rolled his eyes and wiped his eyes as if he laughed up tears.
"No,I never am.Anyways,hows Nomu?"He asked.
"Oh,good.Right before I left he gave me a kiss goodbye."Pansie said trying to start a conversation."So,why'd you bring me here?"She questioned.
Chad smiled and said,"You'll see.Folow me,"He grabbed Pansie's hand and lead her over towards the most horrid place in town.The Gorrins,a part of town with only bad things in it.Shaking,Pansie paniced and asked,
"What are you doing!?"
Chad looked at her and replied,"Were goin in."
"What! Are you insane!?"Pansie caught her breath and slapped his hand away,taking a step backward,but Chad pulled her next to him and rushed through the Gorrins.
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Date: 01/13/13 10:51 PM
From: db2612

awsome keep going
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Date: 01/12/13 10:10 PM
From: Artsity201

Hello everyone,I am happy to present,the first chapter of season 2,Pan's story!
This chapter is dedicated to two people.One is Powder72,and my boyfriend,Chad,who always knows how to cheer me up and look at the bright side...........
Chapter One Book:2
The flowers blossomed closley together beneith the soft willow tree.Winds blowing,leaves around,twirling as if they were dancing.Children laughing and joking around,hugging and spending time with their familes,smiles apon their soft faces.
The grass prickled against the young girls pale white skin as she fastly walked through the grass,trying to reach her mother,who was waiting at the other side.Her blue crystal eyes met her mothers brown ones,and her black smooth hair fell in her face.Giggling,Pansie reached out her arms and tightly embracing her mother,feeling happy as the warmth flowed through her body.
Her father came up from behind and embraced the two,stareing into the eyes of his wife,Pan.He watched his eyes fog as his light purple hair fell in his face.Pan laughed at her little baby boy,Nomu,running over towards them on his little toddler legs.Pansie smiled and became the big sister,standing up and breaking from the hug,reaching her arms and clasping them around her little brother.Nomu smiled and clapped,looking up at his mother and father,then back to his sister.
"Mom,when will the new baby be here?"Pansie asked her mother thoughtfully with her blue eyes wide with wonder.
Pan extanged looks with her husband before answering,then replied,"Should be in 2 months,sweetie.Its so close to your birthday."She trailed off."I can't believe your going to be 14,Pansie."Her mother got teary and she wrapped her arms around her daughter again.Half of it was because she was getting older,and Pan will soon be 28,and thats a huge number.
"Mom,I'll be fine,Its just another number."Pansie looked down at her mothers stomach,patting it and then giving it a soft kiss,whispering to the baby inside,
"I can't wait till you come."She smiled and pecked her mothers cheek and then kneeled down and picked up her brother,pulling him up."Can I take him inside?"She questioned.
"Yes,you may."Pan replied,turning around and hugging her husband,Trunks tightly.Once Pansie was inside,Pan said,"Im worried,Trunks."
Trunks looked down at his wifes pleading eyes."About what?"
Pan sighed,knowing this sounded silly."Im getting older and I soon will pas-"She was cut off.
Trunks glared at her and shot her a look."Don't say that!"He then started to laugh."Pan,your acting childish.Your only 27,your not that old!"He kissed his wife and assured her that nothing was going to happen.He pulled away and put his arm around Pan,slowly walking inside of the house.Pan smiled at her husband and looked over at the kitchen,seeing Pansie holding baby Nomu and feeding him gently.
My baby girl is gonna be 13,and soon,shes gonna leave me.I can't believe this all happend.Why did life have to come to this?Why did the war come near? Its up to her once its time,Pan thought to herself.
Artsity
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Date: 01/12/13 9:17 PM
From: Artsity201

The first chapter will be posted on.....maybe Tuesday,or Monday,or this sunday.
Thankyou for all the comments,the first chapter will be dedicated to two people,and one of them is you,and someonelse,thankyou!

Artsity
Orgulloso autor de historia del pan(Proud author of pans story)

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Date: 01/11/13 6:48 PM
From: powder72

plz do plz do plz do plz do that was all i could say when i saw Artsity's post plz do plz do im so exited come on people say yes Artsity201 is so good at writing that she is able to work with the characters that are already made. a lot of fanfics have another character that they made as the main character but still plz do plz do plz do plz do
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Date: 01/09/13 9:35 PM
From: Artsity201

VERY IMPORTANT FOR ALL MY READERS!

Hello everybody!
As you know,I officially ended this fanfiction a couple of months ago...I think,and you all know that I made a new one based on Pan and Trunk's daughter,Pansie.Well,that one isn't going great as I expected,so I came back to this story and read all the wonderful comments.
When I saw Powders,I litarlly smiled and felt tears in my eyes!That was so sweet!
I relized that....maybe I should make more to THIS story,and just keep going until....well,I don't want to give out spoilers just yet.Anyways,I REALLY want to keep this story alive,but do you guys want me to continue this,or not??? PLEASE ANSWER AND COMMENT!

Artsity
Im just happy with this story,this is the most posts Iv'e gotten so far on any of my stories!

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Date: 01/07/13 12:23 AM
From: db2612

love it ......it was awsome
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Date: 01/06/13 1:03 PM
From: Artsity201

Opps!
I accidentaly said"How would guys like that?"
I meant,How would YOU guys like that?

Sorry if that didn't make scence.Im making the new chapter right now,but I still need your opinions.Thanks for the comments!

Art

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Date: 01/05/13 6:38 PM
From: Artsity201

Aww thankyou so much Powder!
That comment brightend up my day.I notice how much everyone loves this story,so I might as well continue it with a sequal.On this post.How would guys like that? Should I????

Artsity

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Date: 01/04/13 12:46 PM
From: powder72

come on people! continue to post on here. if posts arent made in a certain period of time, pans story will be gone forever. Artsity201 worked very hard on the fanfic and im pretty sure u dont want it gone as much as she does. let pans story live on forever and we have to make that happen. let other people read this fanfic or let other people read it again. just dont let pans story leave us on the boards
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Date: 12/11/12 8:04 PM
From: powder72

awww that's so sweet great way 2 end an amazing story
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Date: 12/02/12 7:39 PM
From: pulchrae

great ending!
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