Chapter 1:The tournament
I was getting ready for the tournament,i knew i was going to win but i was nervose what if im wronge what if i dont win, what if i disapoint my family,espeaily what if i disapoint my grandpa goku......it was so much to think about but a second later i was inerupted in my thoughs by a fimiluar voice saying''Pan are you ready the tournament is about to begin''I turned around to see who it was it was my father,i stared at him for what seemed like forever i saw the happieness in his eyes i could tell he was proud of me.I walked out the door holding hands with my father,i felt so nervouse,espeicaly when i saw my granfather waving at me and calling my name.My face turned red but i stood stronge and went up to the fighting ring.
Days after,the young sayain,known as pan was well anough to go home and be with her family.Her husband,trunks,was so happy to have her hom again.Pan has returned back home normal,and she no longer looks sick,she looks like a healthy young sayain as she used to be.Pan no longer sleeps for 19 to 20 hours a day from her illness anymore,now she sleeps normally,but has to take 2 naps during the day,and she sleeps longer at night.Pansie,the two sayians daughter,loved her mother being home.When she saw her face,she clapped with her little puggie hands and smiled with her blue eyes.Pan was so lucky and happy to be home,she threw a dinner for her and her family,and made shure her grandfather goku was shure to come.
"Can you please pass the octopus,Pan."Said goku,smiling proudly.
Pan nodded,handing him the bowl of food,then turned to her daughter,which was clapping and filling her face full of baby food.
"No,no Pansie,lets clean ya up."Pan picked up the baby and walked her over to the sink.She quickly turned on the water,then put a rag underneith,cleaning the babys face.
Pansie threw a hissy-fit,but she made it through."Okay,now time to put you to sleep,Pansie."Pan said,slowly walking up stairs as her family laughed and joked.
Pan rocked her daughter in her arms,humming and quietly singing a laulaby to her baby.
"Hush little baby,dream real well,
You'll wake up to kisses and hugs,
Mommmy loves you,and daddy does to,
We'll take you to the meadow where the flowers grow,
you'll sprout and shout as you fralick and frow,
So hush my darling and lay down to sleep,
you'll wake up to kisses and hugs,you see,
Mommy and daddy loves you dear,
I'll see you in the morning,for fralick and cheer..."
Pan lightly and carefully put baby pansie in her crib,then kissed her forehead."Goodnight,my little angle."and with that,she went over to the window.It was a dark stary night.Pan locked her hands together and put them on her heart,staring at the stars above.
"Grandma,i miss you so.I know you would be proud of me,because im proud of you.I love you."She whispered into the night,walked away from the window.
She walked down stairs to see her family eating quietly.She smiled and went over to the sink,but someone stopped her.Videl,and Bulma.
"No,you just got back from being ill,you need a break.Let us clean the dishes."they said with thoughtfulness.
Pan smiled and sat down by trunks.He slowly put his arm around her and she layed her head on his shoulder.
What a family.....
And so it was said,that pan,the young sayain would grow up to be great as she is.Her life was memoriable,and she lived long.She married,had a child and lived a great life under her grandfathers wing.She is a fighter,that will never back down.Nothing stands in her way.And so it was done and dealed with that she was the sayain that became one with her love and family.She made many mistakes in her life,yet she has overcome them and lived without those mistakes she made.
That is Pan's story.......
THE END
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Im so emotional right now.I can't belive that iv'e ended this,this story that iv'e come to love so much.Iv'e read it all in one day,iv'e relized how i was a terorible writer,and then i became a good one with my writing styles.I am so thankful for all of you readers!
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Hours later,Pan and her two familys reunited at the hospital,vistiting the ill sayian.Trunks,her husband,has been out of her room,talking to the doctors,who were busy making the cure for her sickness.Pan has Sleephobia,to be exact,and its not moderate or popular to some people.But pan,shes like her grandfather,Goku.Goku had a heart failure once,while fighting,and he was hurt,but he was fine after a day or two.While trunks does that,pan is in the room talking to Bulma,and Vegeta.
Bulma sat next to pan's beside as vegeta leaned against the wall.Bulma smiled at pan."Your just like your grandfather,you know that,"she said with a smile.
Pan giggled and sat up as much as she could."I know,i know,"she said with a voice that was as soft as a kitten.
Vegeta sighed,"Bulma,im going to go check on Kackirot,he seems very down,and i want him to see his grandaughter weither he likes it or not."Vegeta slowly went out of the room,and out to goku.
Meanwhile,pan and bulma had a conversation."You know,i had a dream about you and trunks,and my daughter,Pansie.You cured me,by bringing me medicen."pan said as she coughed.
Bulma smiled,"Your going to be fine pan,trust me"and with that,she stood up and went out the doors,hurrying to the medical room,to see what she can help with the medicen.
Goku came frowning in,looking like he was down in the dumps."Hey,Pan"he walked over to her bedside to see the face of the once,pretty little well girl he knew to be his grandaughter.
"Hey gramps,i missed you."Pan looked at the sayains eyes,which were locked in hers.
"I missed you to,Pan.I know your going to make it,trust me."Goku touched her little soft hand,comforting her.
"Everyones been saying that,and yet...i don't think im going to li-"she was inurupted by alot of doctors,followed by bulma,rushing in holding a little capsule that said the words: Med.123268
This is it,thought pan,Im finally going to be cured.
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Hey everyone.
Im so sorry that this chapter took so long,i posted it and i fixed it,and here it is!
Im so happy right now,i can't belive that i went from chapter 1,to chapter 183 in this story,and guess how many chapters are in this FIRST book,yes,theres going to be a second book of this story,and unfortantly,im ending this story,and making one about pan's daughter,and her life.Trunks will be in it,and pan will be in it to,but only part of it.Im making this story go up to 200 chapters,and thats it.No ifs or buts.By the way,if i don't post like in a day or two,or more,im still going to post a new chapter.Don't think im giving up on this that easily! KEEP CHECKING!
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The airbender was so sad that day,she could hardly eat,or anything.
She layed there,motionless,not letting a single sigh come out of her mouth,only the
tears of sorrow.
Kai hated himself for talking that way to the girl.He has been that way
to her ever since they met,he didn't mean to,but somthing inside him told
him to hurt her.
"Alia?"asked hashu,shaking her lightly.The airbender sat up,sighing and wiping
her face.
"Yes?"she asked him,stareing into his eyes.
Hashu sighed with relife and said,"We need to find some more shelter"he said to her.
Alia nodded,laying back down,and feeling the wind blow her hair and touch her
face with its gentle cringle.
The bison and childeren landed on a street,somewhere where they didn't reconize.
They saw another tunel,but it looked like a swewer,that didn't make the airbender
as happy as she wanted to be.
"Lets see if we can hide in here for a while"kai said,taking the lead.
Once them,and the bison were about inches from the opening of the sewer,they
saw a mini village,with people inside.They all looked poor,like they were
homless.
The three childeren walked inside,turning there heads to each direction,seeing
more sad sights.
"Hello?"asked a voice from behind them.The childeren turned to find a
woman and a man,about 50 years old,or older.They smiled,"Welcome to our
underground city,where you can afford everything!"they smiled.
"Um...where exactly,are we?"asked kai with a sigh.
Alia looked at the woman,"Is there anywhere for us to stay?"she asked the
two.
They looked at the place and soon turned back to the kids."Folow us!"the
old couple lead the childeren and bison to a little house,fit for 3,which
was good.It was a good one,better than the houses they saw when they walked in.
It was perfect.The kids thanked the elders and unpacked their things,going
into the house.Alia went to the room she called and the other boys went to
their rooms they called.
Alia's room was a plae white room,with a brown bed cover,white pillows,and
a closet and a dresser and then a huge mirror,which was perfect.
The airbender sat onto the bed,looking at what she acomplished."Perfect"
she said with a smile.
"Alia?"said a voice from the otherside of the door."Can i come in?"it added.
The girl opened the door to find her friend,hashu,standing there with a smile.
They sat onto her bed,talking about the plan if Veck found them.
"Well,if he does,we evactuate."says the airbender with confedince.
Hashu sighed,"Yeah,but...what if he does"he lost his hopes,knowing that
veck would find them soon,and then kill them.
"He won't,belive me"said alia,pushing him out of her room."Now,go talk to
kai,he needs to talk to someone,ither than himself."and with that she
closed the door in hashu's face.
The airbender flopped onto her bed,face forward into her pillow.
She then stared at the ceiling,thinking of the statues again,but this time,she
wasn't upset as she was before.She then stood up,walked out the door and
went out of the house.She walked around the underground place,trying to
see if someone she was destent to meet was here.She then found a both,that
looked as if it could help her.
"Excuse me?"she asked the woman inside.The woman smiled and turned to the girl.
"Yes,deary?"she asked,stareing into the girl's grey eyes."How may i help you?"
Alia tensed,feeling her hopes about to crush,"Im searching for someone i know"she
replied.
The woman took out a thick book,filled with papers,full of names and information.
"Whats the name of this 'person'?"she asked.
The girl sighed,"Quin,hes my faince`"anwsered alia,feeling guilty of the words.
The woman congratualated her,then looked him up in her book."Well,im affraid not,sorry"the woman
said,putting the book away."Have a nice day!"she said cheerfuly,then turned
away.
Alia sighed,knowing this would not help her find him.
She loves kai,but he doesn't feel the same way,i mean,look at the way he
talks and treats her,he hates her.He only thinks and cares for himself,and
thats all that matters.
Once alia got back to the house,she opened the door and went to her room,
laying down back onto her bed.Letting more tears out,again.
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Trunks ran over to his wife,pan,who was smiling so bright,it could light up
a room.
"Trunks!"she said with joy.Her small pale hand touched his cheek,making
him smile."I had a dream..."she started."You,me,and pansie were in it,and i
was okay!"
Her voice filled with happniess."Thays great pan!''trunks said to his young
wife."But all we need now is to find out what your sick wit-"he couldn't finish.
"Sleepaphobia,i sleep day and night,without an awaking."pan said lightly.
THe two doctors came in,with a clipboard and everything."Sleepaphobia,eh"
said the oldest doctor,and probably the smarter doctor.
"What exactly,is sleepaphobia?"asked trunks,who was running his fingers through
pan's hair.
The second doctor spoke,"Its a rare illness that only comes to a person once and a while,
your wife,pan got it after the birth,so...."he looked at his clip board.
"Its an illness where you sleep mostly all the time,but pan,she has only
been sleeping for 19 hours a day,some get 20,not her.Thats somthing we
can fix in....lets say 3 to 4 days."the second doctor finished.Maybe he is
smarter than the couple thought.
"Thats wonderful"Pan said looking at the ceiling."I can finally go home"
she whispered.
"Yes,very wonderful"said the doctors walking out of the room.
Trunks put his head on pans chest."Im still worried,Pan"he said.
Pan patted his back."Don't worry,i'll be better in no time,Trunks.You think
on the bad side,come on over to the good side for once."said his wife
with a smile."Please,for me"she added.
Trunks smiled with a chuckle,"Fine"then he got an idea.
What if i bring the hole family over today,to see pan,he thought.
"Hey pan,im gonna be right back,okay?"he said walking to the door.
"Okay"pan replied back,laying back down onto her hospital bed.She closed her
eyes once again,not sleeping,but resting.
What she didn't know,is that the family is coming to visit.....
Pan slept that hole day,not eating or anything.
Her husband sat there,holding his daughter,waiting for a chance to see pan awake.
The young sayain was sleeping very quietly,until she dreamed.....
''Mom!''A voice called from the distance.Pan looked up from what she was doing to see a little chunky figure,her daughter,pansie.
''Baby!''she called picking her up into her arms.''Oh how i missed you,where were you?''the mother asked.
''I was with daddy and uncle vegeta!''she said with a clap,making her little chubby lips into a smile.
''Oh,what did you do?''the mother asked with wonder.The young sayian listened as her daughter told her about what her and her father,along with her uncle did at aunt bulma's house.The sayain giggled,making her daughter giggle to.
''Pan!''the woman and child heard a happy voice say.The voice belonged to the sayains husband,trunks.
''Yes dear?''she asked patting pansie's back while holding the little fat figure.
''My mom has the medicen you need!''he said with a smile.
''Oh! my gosh!''the sayain woman,which was pan,said excitingly.
The wife,and husband along with the child went outside to see bulma,holding a bag that said:Sleepaphobia
Pan's sickness,which she was getting better with.Pan clapped and hugged her husband with a kiss.''Im so happy!''she said.
''Here pan,take one at night,and one in the morning,you'll stop sleeping for 20 hours!''the blue haired woman said with a laugh.
''Thank you so much!''said pan,who was getting swung in her husbands arms.''Im so happy! ahhhh!''she screamed with laughter.
The child clapped with giggles,''Mommas gonna be all better!''she said with a jump,making her black hair flow in the air.
Pan and trunks looked back at their daughter,laughing and hugging.
But just then,the dream stopped.......
Pan awoke from her dream to find herself in the hospital,again.She put her head back onto her pillow with a thump.
''All i want is to be happy''she whispered with tears streaming down her cheeks.Her heart moniter went slow,making the beeping sounds every second.She looked at her left,seeing two doctors,talking deeply in a conversation.Pan didn't want to wait,she wanted this 'sleepaphobia' healed,and fast.She gulped and lifted her head up.
''Excuse me''she said softly.The doctors looked at her and one came over to her.''Yes mrs.pan?"he asked.
''When am i going to be cured?''she asked sorrowly.Her sniffles and tears were flowing fast.''I want my husband''she said.
''Well,we are close to helping your sickness,but it will take a while''started one doctor,''I will get your husband''and with that the two doctors went out of the room,through the white doors.
It was quiet.Pan's tears came down fast,she couldn't wiped them away,her hands and arms were to weak,they hurt.
Once her husband came through the doors,relife and happiness filled her face.
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