Part 1 Advice
Me: OK, follow me as best you can. Here we go. I am a mutant cat. My name is Moonblaze, Moon for short. My brothers are teenage mutant ninja turtles. Yeah, I think that this may get harder to follow. My sensei/father is Master Splinter, a human-sized rat. His arch-nemesis, the Shredder, has a HUGE army of ?foot? ninja, and he has tracked Master Splinter all the way from Japan to New York. My brothers and I are all that stand in his way from taking revenge on Master Splinter. How about I tell how this all began.
15 years ago, Master Splinter was once known as Hamato Yoshi, and he lived in Japan. His friend, before they hated each other, was Oroku Saki now known as Shredder. Eventually they fell in love with the same woman, Tang Shen, but Master Splinter was the one she loved most. That was when Oroku Saki fell to the shadows. Their rivalry festered, until Shredder attacked Master Splinter?s home, and a fire broke out. They fought until they could fight no more, and escaped. But the battle cost Master Splinter his home, Tang Shen, and his newborn daughter. He went to America after that, and you all know what happened then...
10 days earlier...
Stray cat: Hissssssss!!!
Me: *backs up, sighs, and scents the air*
Me: Meow??*runs over to noise, sees glowing canister and thinks it?s water**LICKS ?WATER? AKA MUTAGEN!*
2 days later...
Me: Another day another meal! At least it was easier than usual to get this.*sets down tofu burger and takes off black cat sweater, jeans, and sneakers*
Me:*whips around* Come out! I know you?re there! *unsheathes claws*
??: See, look what you did, Mikey! *WHAP!*
????: Oowwww! Raph!
???: Ummm, guys I think she knows we?re here.
Me: No duh.
@GhostlyOwl- Yeah, I thought it could be sort of like a "side effect" from contact with the black moonstone. That was much better than the other side effect... -.-'' Anyway, since our computer's not working, I might be able to work on my fan-fics on Tuesday, Thursday, maybe Friday, and whenever Dad lets me use his Netbook(like right now)and provided he brings it home.
I grit my teeth, not letting the pain get to me. It?s been two days since the failed rescue, and things haven?t been going to well. Era broke an arm, Ray-Ray sprained an ankle, and Raph broke a couple of ribs. As for me, well? Let?s just say I got the most injuries. So did Jade, who apparently is Shredder?s daughter. According to her, she decided to destroy Moonblaze?s cell lock to help us, but she got captured. Anyway, Shredder has been ?interrogating? each of us, so our injuries have gotten worse. Especially mine. Shredder just finished with me, so some Foot ninjas shoved me back into the cell. ?You okay?? asked Raph. I nodded, but the pain must have shown somehow because Raph narrowed his eyes and muttered, ?When we get outta here, Shredder is going to pay.? Ray-Ray shrugged half-heartedly, and told Raph, ?Which brings up the question, when are we gonna get out of here?? I opened my mouth to answer, when we heard someone hiss, ?Guys, over here.? My gaze swung over to where the voice came from, but I only saw a shadow. My eyes narrowed, and I was about to turn away, when the shadow flickered and Moonblaze came into view. ?Moon!? cried Ray-Ray. Some Foot ninja rushed over, but by then, Moon had melted into the shadows. When they left, she flashed back into view. ?Don?t do that!? she whispered. ?How did you do that?? I inquired. ?It?s one of my powers,? Moon replied. ?I can turn into a shadow.? ?So, are you gonna get us out?? Raph prompted. Moon nodded, took a step forward, then recoiled like something stung her. ?What?s the matter?? Era queried. ?The cell bars. They?re made out of black moonstone. It drains my power, and has deadly consequences if I touch it or am near it for too long,? came the reply. ?Which is why I told you you shouldn?t go in alone,? said a familiar voice. I blinked. ?Donnie?? ?Who else?? ?Hey, don?t forget me!? I smiled and answered, ?No one could forget you Mikey.? Donnie tossed a shurikan at the cell lock, breaking it. Mikey crept towards the two Foot ninja-who had, amazingly, not heard us-and knocked them out. Donnie opened the cell door. ?What injuries do you guys have?? ?Well,? Raph began, ?Era?s got a broken arm, Ray-Ray a sprained ankle, for me a couple broken ribs and, for Leo... Let?s just say he got the worst.? ?And I?ve got a couple broken bones,? Jade called. Donnie nodded curtly, and asked over his shoulder, ?You can fix those, right?? ?Yep.? ?Good.? Raph helped me out of the cell, towards the window Moon was near. Era helped Ray-Ray over, and Donnie helped Jade over. A full moon gleamed dully through the clouds that were gathering, but a shaft of moonlight broke through and touched Moon. ?Well, this?ll help,? Moon remarked. We looked at her curiously, and she waved her hand like batting away a fly. ?You?ll see.? She began to glow softly, and she closed her eyes. ?Quibus mederi vulneribus nova et vetera. Lunae et cum aqua, quatenus meam curare amicis.? Water slipped through cracks in the floor and seemed to move with minds of their own. When moonlight struck the water, it turned to silver and began healing us. ?What was that?? asked Jade when the water faded. ?A healing spell.? Answered Moon. ?What language were you speaking and what did you say?? asked Era. ?I said, ?Mend these wounds, new and old. With moonlight and water, heal my friends? in Latin.?
Working on the next part! Same with TMNT Meets Warriors!, and I've also gotten a mind bomb! It's for another crossover fan-fic; TMNT and Young Justice: Invasion. Tell me what you think about that.
Sorry for not posting recently! I hit a snag a few days back, so I personally banned myself from the computer for a few days. Thankfully, I am bursting with ideas now(but I think I accidentally let a few slip away into the void of forgotten ideas), and am working as quick as I can on the next part.
9 lives, huh? Cool! I know I'm a silent-reader type most of the time, but I think this is a really GREAT fic!
So, quick question for you: Originally, I did'nt need any OC's for the Fanfiction I'm writing now, (And Into My Fire, You Shall Fall), but I think Moonblaze would fit into it beautifully in a part I'm working on now. Would it be OK if I used her?
This is just...AWESOME! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! You like warriors? Me too, okay, next fanfic i read shall be TMNT meets Warriors, for certain!
Can you add my OC?
nickname: Owl (named by Mikey)
Looks: She has long blonde hair, and unnaturaly big blue eyes (Where the name comes from) pale skin.
Personality: She is very secretive, but at the same time never lies. She doesn't speak much and is quite shy. Nice when you get to know her.
Crush: More likely not to have one, doesnt talk about that stuff.
Human/Mutant: She is a human with phychic powers (She can see ghosts)
Part 19 Donnie
It?s been two days since we rescued Moon from Shredder, but she hasn?t woken up yet. Oh, the irony. I haven?t slept for two days and Moon hasn?t woken up for two days. Anyway, we?re all pretty badly injured, and morale is pretty low. Even Mikey hasn?t been joking around. That really worries me. ?Donatello, are you all right?? Master Splinter asked, jolting me out of my thoughts. ?Yes sensei.? I lied. Master splinter gave me ?the look?. I sighed. ?I?m just really worried.? ?About what?? I hesitated, not really sure where to start. ?Well, I?m worried for the others and what Shredder might have planned for them, worried about everyone here because of their injuries, worried about Mikey because he?s hasn?t been joking around, and I?m worried about Moon because I?m scared she?ll never wake up!? Master Splinter studied me for second, then said slowly, ?That is a lot to worry about for one so young. But I have a hunch for the reason Moonblaze has not woken up yet.? I looked at him hopefully and he continued, ?Her spirit may be watching over the others that have been captured, making sure they are safe. And-? he looked at me meaningfully-?Perhaps she did not answer Kelly?s question about cats having nine lives because she has nine lives.? Master Splinter let that sink in for a moment before saying softly, ?Thankfully, there is a solution to one?s spirit watching over captured family, while her escaped family awaits for her awakening.? ?Really?? He nodded. ?However, it takes a long time. It may take well over an hour.? ?I can wait.? He smiled. ?Yes, you have shown that you can have endless patience at times.? He walked out of the room, while I just sat there. My heart was pounding as I struggled to absorb what Master Splinter had said. Moon has nine lives? I thought, trying to comprehend how she could even get nine lives. I checked over everyone once more while waiting for Master Splinter to finish. Everyone noticed my quietness, so they decided to be quiet as well. When I went back to Moon, Master Splinter came out from meditating. I looked at him hopefully and he nodded with a small smile. My heart leapt and the others seemed to notice that something was about to happen when Master Splinter walked out. There was a few moments of silence before Ily exclaimed, ?I can?t take it anymore! What?s gonna happen?!?!? I smiled a bit and explained as quickly as I could, and in a few minutes, there was an immediate change in the atmosphere of the lair. Everyone was more cheerful, and Mikey finally rigged up two or three pranks. Normally, I would be a little bit annoyed, but for once, I was actually happy when it was my turn for a water balloon to the face because that showed that Mikey felt better. Sure enough, Moon eventually woke up. I was kind of dozing off for a few minutes when she woke up. ?Donnie?? she whispered. I jolted slightly and looked at her guiltily. ?Sorry. I must?ve dozed off.? ?It?s all right. What happened exactly? All I remember was Shredder?s ray draining my energy, then nothing. Sort of.? ?Well, first off we rescued you.? ?I can tell. But I mean what are we going to do about rescuing the others?? I must?ve done something that showed my surprise, because she let out an unsteady purr. ?Oh, come on Donnie. I can watch over people that I know and trust when I?m asleep. With a little help. ? she added. ?So, do you really have nine lives?? I asked. ?Yeah. How?d you know that?? ?Master Splinter.? I had the oddest sensation that I was being watched so I looked over my shoulder and sure enough, I saw the shadows of eavesdroppers. I stifled a laugh. I gestured for Moon to be quiet and when she noticed the shadows, she grinned and nodded. I walked slowly to the door, and when I reached it, I waited a moment or two, then yanked open the door. There was several surprised yelps, a loud thud, and small groans, a ?Get off of me!!? and a ?Why am I always on the bottom?!?!? Moon snickered, trying to cover up her laughter. ?MOON!! YOU?RE AWAKE!!? Mikey yelled in a slightly strangled voice. I helped everyone up, and explained very quickly what Master Splinter told me. ?So, you really have nine lives?!? asked Ily in wonder. Moon nodded, not sure how everyone else would take this.
Sorry guys for not posting on this lately!! I'm on a shortage of books to read, have HW, PLUS I have gotten like, a dozen ideas that have caused me to write several fan-fics that I'm unsure of posting!! PS: I'm at school right now at the library during enrichment. -.-''
Part 18 The Rescue Part 3! (I know, it?s just that I made the overall rescue too long so, there MIGHT be a Part 4)
Donnie: Okay. Let?s get Moon out of here guys. *picks up Moon and runs with Jade, Ily, Dani, and Mikey*
With Team 1 and Team 2...
Leo: Okay guys, just stay calm and try not to freak out. *dodges Foot Ninja (FN) and knocks him out*
Ray-Ray: Hey Leo, what happens if we get overwhelmed and captured?
Leo: Well Team 3 will escape with Moon, and we?ll try to escape as well. If we can?t escape, we?ll just hold the enemy off until Team 3 and at least one or two of us should escape with Team 3.
Raph: Well, glad that?s cleared up. *takes down ten FN* Kelly! 3:00, 6:00, 9:00 and 12:00!!
Kelly: *jumps up while Kraang and FN try to charge her, making them crash into each other, and she lands on top perfectly* Ta-da!!
Leo: *sees Team 3 moving out of the building* ?Kay guys! Gotta go now!
Leo, Ray-Ray, Era, and Raph get blocked by Dogpound, the Foot and Kraang while trying to escape. KK, Kelly, Donnie, Mikey, and Ily manage to escape.
When they?re in the sewers...
Donnie: Wait one sec. *stops with the others behind him* Where are the others?
KK: They got blocked by the enemy.
Kelly: Leo said to keep going.
Mikey: Are we gonna be able to get ?em back?
Donnie: We HAVE to.
Sorry about it being so short. Dinner?s almost done, so I have to make it quick.