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Date: 11/09/12 3:58 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Part 1 Advice
Me: OK, follow me as best you can. Here we go. I am a mutant cat. My name is Moonblaze, Moon for short. My brothers are teenage mutant ninja turtles. Yeah, I think that this may get harder to follow. My sensei/father is Master Splinter, a human-sized rat. His arch-nemesis, the Shredder, has a HUGE army of ?foot? ninja, and he has tracked Master Splinter all the way from Japan to New York. My brothers and I are all that stand in his way from taking revenge on Master Splinter. How about I tell how this all began.
*Flashback*
15 years ago, Master Splinter was once known as Hamato Yoshi, and he lived in Japan. His friend, before they hated each other, was Oroku Saki now known as Shredder. Eventually they fell in love with the same woman, Tang Shen, but Master Splinter was the one she loved most. That was when Oroku Saki fell to the shadows. Their rivalry festered, until Shredder attacked Master Splinter?s home, and a fire broke out. They fought until they could fight no more, and escaped. But the battle cost Master Splinter his home, Tang Shen, and his newborn daughter. He went to America after that, and you all know what happened then...
*Flashback end*
10 days earlier...
Me: Meow?
Stray cat: Hissssssss!!!
Me: *backs up, sighs, and scents the air*
*CLATTER*
Me: Meow??*runs over to noise, sees glowing canister and thinks it?s water**LICKS ?WATER? AKA MUTAGEN!*
2 days later...
Me: Another day another meal! At least it was easier than usual to get this.*sets down tofu burger and takes off black cat sweater, jeans, and sneakers*
WOOSH!
Me:*whips around* Come out! I know you?re there! *unsheathes claws*
??: See, look what you did, Mikey! *WHAP!*
????: Oowwww! Raph!
??: Grrrrrr
????: *whimpers*
?: Ssshh!
???: Ummm, guys I think she knows we?re here.
?+??+???: ...
Me: No duh.
??: YYYAAHH
TBC...
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Date: 01/30/13 9:38 PM
From: Wildpaw1

I'm not feeling too happy right now... sad and depressed really. So if, you don't mind, I'm gonna write a poem.

Sadness, so lonely, so scared.
An aching chasm in your heart.
Tears spilling, heart crying.
Wishing for better days,
Wishing to be forever alone.
Roses wilting, forever gray skies.
Clouds coming, spilling their tears,
Joining the tears in your heart.

Yeah... I didn't really know what else to do...

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Date: 01/30/13 5:15 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Haven't had enough time to work on either of my fan-fics, sorry guys! CURSE YOU HOMEWORK!!
~Wildpaw1
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Date: 01/21/13 1:09 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Sorry guys, still working on next part! It'll come as soon as possible!
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 01/12/13 7:01 PM
From: Emorah

really? i love dragons!!!!!!!
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Date: 01/12/13 11:12 AM
From: Wildpaw1

Hey, has anybody been wondering WHY Moon asked for a book on dragons?? Just a little hint on what's coming...
~Wlidpaw1 out
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Date: 01/10/13 8:37 PM
From: Kunoichi15

Hey! Wildpaw1! Do you like the Warriors series by Erin Hunter? Cause I LOVE it! I just thought you might because your name sounds like one of the warriors. I like your story a lot.

~°~Kunoichi15~°~

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Date: 01/10/13 5:46 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Again-ANY SILENT READERS?? Please post if you are one!!
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 12/31/12 7:58 PM
From: Wildpaw1

HAPPY NEW YEAR'S EVE EVERYONE!!
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Date: 12/31/12 9:29 AM
From: flameso123

I'm reading! It's good! Write MORE!
~Flameso
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Date: 12/28/12 6:53 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Is anyone checking here? Any silent readers?
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 12/26/12 1:14 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Finally!!
Part 16 The Rescue Part 1
Moon?s dream...
Moon?s POV:
I opened my eyes to see the hunting grounds of StarClan. I looked down and almost hissed in surprise-I was a regular cat instead of a mutated cat! ?Moon.? called a blue-gray she-cat. Relief and apprehension washed over me like a wave. ?Bluestar?? I asked. ?Did my parents and siblings make it?? Immediately I saw movement in the bushes. I scented the air and joy and fresh grief swept over my heart as a jet-black she-cat and a pure white tom came out of the bushes. ?Mom? Dad?? I whispered, ?Is it really you?? ?Yes, Moonblaze,? purred Nightblaze. ?It is,? meowed Cloudblaze. ?Oh, I?m so glad to see you!? I cried. I raced to them and we stood together, purring. Finally, we came apart and I asked, ?Is there a prophecy or warning you?ll give me? Because I have a feeling that?s why I came to you so easily.? Bluestar shifted uneasily and said slowly, ?We cannot change what may happen, nor can we influence you. This is the prophecy we must tell you.? She closed her eyes and rasped, ?#Sun and Moon must unite with Dawn, and save the city from Shredder.#? Bluestar opened her eyes. ?That is the prophecy.? Murmured Nightblaze. ?You must fulfill it.? Warned Cloudblaze. ?But first, you must awake and tell your new family of the prophecy. It is the only way to protect them.? They spoke in unison. Everything started to fade until we were standing in front of the Shredder?s tower. ?We will watch over your new family with you until it is the right time.? Reassured Nightblaze. Then we stood watch, unseen to everyone while my family came to rescue me.
Leo: *whispering* All right guys, remember to STICK TO THE PLAN. And- Wait a sec. Is that a Kraang droid?
Donnie: *eyes widen* Umm... I think there?s more than one Kraang droid. And who-*points to a girl in long black dress with purple stripes, with long dark purple hair, red eyes, long cat-like nails, pointy sharp teeth, and dark blue eye-shadow with dark red lipstick*-is that?
Mikey: *shrugs*
Raph: Don?t know and don?t care. Let?s bust some heads.
Leo: I said stick to the plan!
Mikey: BOOYAKASHA!!
*Kraang droids turn and start shooting*
Leo: On second thought, stay in your team like we originally planned, except this time stick together and get into the building as quickly as possible. GO!!
*Here are the teams: Team 1: Leo, Ray-Ray, Era; Team 2: Raph, KK, Kelly; Team 3: Donnie, Mikey, Ily and Dani*
Moon?s Dream...
I gasped. ?They?re gonna get hurt!? I told Nightblaze. ?At ease, my child.? She murmured, ?From what you have told us, they will handle themselves quite well, despite the Shredder?s newfound alliance with the Kraang, and despite that Jerafona has joined his ranks.? My heart stopped when she said Jerafona?s name. ?Jera?? I whispered. ?She survived the explosion before she was made a member of the Council?? Nightblaze nodded and said gravely, ?Unfortunately, yes. We should have seen the evil in her heart, but she concealed it to well. Bluestar found out, but it was too late. She warned Cloudblaze on the night of the fire.? I looked at Jera with sadness, then anger washed over me like a red wave. ?She told the Shredder where I lived-where we lived-and let him burn down my home?? I snarled. ?She will PAY.?
With the Shredder...
?: All goes according to plan, Master.
Shredder: Very good. I knew I chose well when I chose you as one of my lieutenants, Jade.
Jade: *looks up* Father, I wonder if it is really necessary to drain the cat?s powers.
Fish-Face: *muffled* Of course it is girl! Do you dare question Master Shredder?s wisdom?!
Shredder: That is enough, Xever! *hits glass*
Fish-Face: Ahhh!! *swims around disoriented*
Shredder: With Jerafona?s help, as well as Bradford?s newfound strength, we shall set a chain of events in motion. The turtles will never see it coming.
Jade: Yes Master Shredder. *walks out* Thoughts: »Perhaps he is wrong. Perhaps they WILL see it coming.« *walks to Moon?s cell* »Shredder may be my father,« *breaks lock to cell with dagger* »But I will choose my own destiny.« *alarm starts to ring* »I have made my path clear. As of now, I am an enemy of the Shredder, and the Foot. I am an ally of the turtles.«
TBC...
## BTW, the prophecy is basically the prophecy of TMNT Meets Warriors!, only changed.
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Date: 12/26/12 12:49 PM
From: Wildpaw1

@AngelinaGL-Is it okay if I have Jade deciding to swap sides?
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 12/24/12 10:00 PM
From: Scout6776

Cool!
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Date: 12/24/12 9:30 PM
From: AngelinaGL

2!!! I think you know my answer. Also, I have a villain that is also shredders daughter, she eventually saves Moon though.

Name: Jade
Nickname: J
Age: 15
Traits: Outgoing, snarky, curious, carefree, perky, girly.
Weapon: Dagger
Looks: 5'5", dark chestnut hair, icy blue eyes, round face, flawless complexion, school uniform (for the look of innocence, navy blue and forest green plaid), white blouse, tan skin, infinity times infinity tattoo on wrist, tall white socks to the knees, black converse, and navy blue headband.
Behavior: Friendly, master of disguise, very full criminal history.
Others: Has only two weaknesses, butterscotch and fudge.

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Date: 12/24/12 12:46 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Anyone checking here? ANYONE?
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Date: 12/23/12 8:55 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Okay, I need SOMEONE, ANYONE to vote: 1-I skip to the Christmas Special; 2-I continue with Part 16 and post Christmas Special later than I would like. Polls are still open and I still need some votes for this.
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 12/21/12 1:49 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Ok, I'm just gonna give it to you guys straight. I'm gonna skip quickly to the Christmas Special because of a block in part 16. I know, I know, the excitement and suspense might be ramped up high, but I would like to jump to the Christmas Special, then jump back to part 16 and continue. Let me know what you think. If more people agree, I'll skip to the Christmas Special. If more people disagree, I'll still post the Christmas Special, just later than I would like.
~Wildpaw1 out
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Date: 12/15/12 2:34 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Part 15 part 2 Preparation (cntd)
Shredder: Well, one of my top lieutenants mentioned to me a rather surprising fact. So I decided to capture you and take your energy for my own, so I could have your powers and use them against your so-called family!
With the team at the lair?
Master Splinter: So, when you woke up, the Shredder and Moonblaze were gone?
Leo: Yes Master Splinter.
Master Splinter: Hmm. I am worried for what may await Moonblaze. In the meantime, tell the others to come in so you may read Moonblaze?s note to them.
Leo: *walks to door* Guys, Master Splinter said to come in.
They all walk in.
Donnie: *quietly*So, are we gonna be able to get Moon back?
Leo: Maybe if we can get an auma tracking GPS.
Donnie: *hopefully* Really?
Leo: I?m getting ahead of myself. *reads note to them* Mikey, are you going to willingly-
Mikey: *hands over T-Pod* Donnie can make another one.
Raph: Well, what are we waiting for? Donnie-
Donnie: *sprints to his room and muffled buzz?s can be heard*
Leo: Okay everyone, get some weapons, and start sparring.
With Moon...
Me: So, you?re going to drain my energy for yourself? How exactly will you do that?
Shredder: Well, you already know that blue moonstone is rare, red moonstone is more common, and white moonstone is the second most common, and black moonstone is the most common. I have taken the liberty to remove all traces of blue moonstone from the building, and to buy and drill as much red and black moonstone for myself. As for white moonstone, well, I took a portion from a recent auction, and it will put you to sleep during the draining process.
Me: *fur puffs out a bit* So, while you?re draining my powers, I-I?ll be able to share tongues with StarClan?
Shredder: *eyes narrow* I am not familiar with this StarClan, so I suppose. *turns to Foot Soldier (FS)* Begin the draining process, raise the white moonstone and increase the powers of the red moonstone.
White Moonstone rises from an open platform.
Shredder: Oh, and Moonblaze, I wouldn?t recommend attempting to escape. The effects would be quite... SHOCKING. *walks out*
Me: *takes a deep breath and whispers to self* Okay Moon. Be sure they won?t be angry, and be sure you don?t end up in the Dark Forest. *closes eyes, sits and touches white moonstone* *slips into sleep*
With the team...
Leo: *knocks on Donnie?s door* Hey, Donnie. You done yet?
Donnie:*muffled* Almost! I just need to add this one last piece and... DONE!! *bursts out of room excitedly* GUYS!! I finished it!!
Ray-Ray: WELL?!?! WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR?!?! Let?s go!!!
Master Splinter: Before you go, I would recommend a few things. Do you have shruikans?
Leo: *nods* Yes.
Master Splinter: Smoke bombs?
Mikey: *happily* Yes.
Master Splinter: Bows and arrows?
Kelly+Ily+Era: *in unison* Yes.
Master Splinter: Extra weapons and magical items?
Dani+KK+Ray-Ray: *somewhat enthusiastically*Yes.
Master Splinter: Exploding shruikans?
Raph: *grins devilishly* Yes.
Master Splinter: Auma tracking GPS?
Donnie: *solemnly* Yes.
Master Splinter: *nods* Very well. You may all go.
Everyone: Yes Master Splinter. *leave sewer*
TBC...
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Date: 12/15/12 2:33 PM
From: Wildpaw1

Part 15 part 1 Preparation
Me: *eyes widen* Thoughts»Oh no! Oh man, what was I thinking!? No, no don?t think like that. Just stay strong. You can go through this. « *starts to cry silently* *the crate suddenly lurches up* Nngh! *the windows suddenly close, the door seals up, and knock-out gas starts filtering through to the top* *starts coughing and eventually passes out*
Shredder: *insert super evil laugh here with ominous music* Finally, I have captured her. She will make a fine... supplier to our cause. Ready the crate, and take it to my tower.
Several hours later...
With the team...
Leo: Ugh. *sits up* What happened... *notices piece of paper and picks it up**reads it quickly* Oh, Moon...
The others start stirring and moaning. When they totally regain consciousness, they see Leo standing at the edge of the roof, looking out at the city and watching the sun rise.
Donnie: So, she DID give herself up?
Ray-Ray: Just to protect us?
Era: I hope we find her?
Leo: *looks at everyone* We need to get back to the lair.
Mikey: *tries to sit up, clutching his side* Ngh, if we have to-ow- face the Shredder again, we?re toast?
Leo: We NEED to get back to the lair.
Raph: Hey, did you find something out before us? Because if you did, TELL US, ESPECIALLY if it tells us anything that could help us find Moon, or kick the Shredder?s butt all the way to Japan, or better yet, into the galaxies.
With Moon?
Me: *groans slightly and sits up* Okay, I officially HATE knockout gas?
Shredder: Ah, you?re awake. Good, now I can tell you what I will do with you.
Me: Tell me what you?ve done to the others or- *runs to bars and grabs them, then jerks away in shock, clenching hands, or rather, paws*
Me: *scared* What did you make these bars out of?
Shredder: Ah, they are made of red moonstone, of course, your natural weakness.
Me: H-How did you know that was my weakness?
Shredder: Remember that organization you work for?
Me: *coldly* USED to work for.
Shredder: Ah, yes. I had forgotten that I caused your, shall we say, retirement. Well, I had placed a spy among the new recruits, and they had heard that your weakness was red moonstone. They also heard that blue moonstone strengthened you, and white moonstone sent you into a short yet strange slumber. And, *narrows eyes* that black moonstone drains your power and is even more deadly than red moonstone.
Me: *narrows eyes* So, you had a spy? What, were they a member of the Council?
Shredder: *laughs* No, they were close to the Council, soon to BE IN the Council, but an unfortunate? shall we say, ACCIDENT occurred.
Me: So, you were going to tell me what you were going to do with me?
Shredder: Well, one of my top lieutenants mentioned to me a rather surprising fact. So I decided to capture you and take your energy for my own, so I could have your powers and use them against your so-called family!
TBC...
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Date: 12/14/12 9:59 PM
From: Wildpaw1

@mvaleria12- Actually, I'm having it as a best brother-best sister relationship, but their each others faves.
BTW, for those of you wondering if I'll be doing a Christams Special, yes I will, but it might be a bit late. So I'll be posting as soon as possible for any and all parts. Still working on part, umm... 18, 19, or 20...? I forget...
~Wildpaw1 out
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