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Sounds Like Science-Fiction, Right? (Fan-Fic)

Date: 11/24/12 8:18 PM
From: tmnt9568

Before I begin my weird story, I got a question. Do mutated turtles that know ninja skills, a giant rat, and aliens in robot stomachs sound like something out of Science-Fiction? I would say that, too. Untill I met some face-to-face! Here's how it happened:
"Zoey! School bus!" My dad called out to me. "Ugh! Comin!" I yelled back. Man, I hated school. It just takes away your freedom! High School is the Dungeon of Un-Freely Things! Anyway, back to the scene. I wasn't even ready. I just grabbed my dark skinny jeans, red tee, black leather jacket, and convers then left my room. Combing hair and brushing teeth was so over-rated! Besides, my hair still looked good. I popped a piece of mint gum into my mouth. Done.
"Oh, well! I missed the bus!" I said, not really caring. I was going to ditch anyway. My dad was in a rush this morning. Something about a two-month buisness trip. I decided to walk back home and watch some tv. It got late and I decided to go for a Late-Night walk.
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Date: 05/22/13 9:39 PM
From: tmnt9568

Cammy?s POV
Okay, today we are going to learn how to make a Beat Up Cammy Sandwich. First, punch the Cammy meat thoroughly. The, put the meat in a knuckle sandwich bun, spread a dab on mayo and mustard on it with a katana blade, and sprinkle the sandwich with some kicks. Enjoy your defeat. Best served cold. ?Ugh!? I yelled, all my rage coming out on Karai. I swung the back of my scythe at Karai like a crazed person till I got lucky. ?Ow!? She yelled. ?Oops,? I replied, grinning devilishly. Karai looked around for her ninja. That was shocking to me. I made Karai scared! Whohoo! Go, Cammy, go Cammy! As for the ninja, I guess when she said go away, they left her in the dust! They were nowhere in sight. Well, you never know. I mean they ARE ninjas. We are trained to use the shadows to stay out of sight and?Ugh! Focus, Cameryn!?What?s wrong? You scared, little Miss I?m a Skilled Kuniochi?? I asked, getting ready for another attack. ?You?re good. But savor you?re victory. You will see me, again. Count on that.? Karai warned me, using blinding powder for her escape route. I closed my eyes so I didn?t end up like Leo when he first encountered Karai. I coughed, trying to get the powder out of my system. After I thought it was okay to open my eyes, I noticed that neither Zoey OR Crystal were in sight. ?Zee?? I called out. ?Zoey?? I asked the air. ?That?s right, you coward! Run!? I heard Zoey?s voice calling out to Crystal?s back. ?Win?? I asked her, peaking down at the steel set of stairs she was on. ?Win!? She confirmed, smiling. Zee climbed up the roof to rejoin me. We high fived as soon as she got up. We were walking on air. It felt good to win. Especially against the Shredder?s daughters! It would be so cool if we could actually walk on air. It would come in handy if, oh I don?t know, someone scared you by interrupting and the sound of their voice startled you, causing you to fall of the ledge of a roof. Yeah. It would come in handy, because that?s exactly what just happened to me. Man, I really hate how silent ninjas are! I hate ninjas! Wait, am I just insulting myself? Oh, and did I mention, AAAHHH!!!
TBC
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Date: 05/20/13 11:17 PM
From: tmnt9568

Crystal easily dodged my shruikens. "You are so hopeless," she yelled. "I know you are, but what am I?" I replied, sai pointed right at her. "Well played," Crystal grinned delivishly. "I know." I couldn't help saying that! "You are just so full of yourself." Crystal says, coming at me with an attack. I moved out of the way at the last second, causing her to fall off the roof and onto the steel stairs below. "Ouch. That's gonna leave a mark," I say, flinching. I jumped down to the stairs. "It ain't ova, Crystal!" I yell.
~Cammy's POV!~
"You are going down, young one. You and your friends will be found and eliminated. You cannot hide. You cannot run. You cannot-" Karai went on and on and on. "Huh?" I asked, looking dumbstrucked. "You didn't hear me at all?" Karai yelled at me. "Well, I listened for the first part. You kinda lost me in the middle. Then, I completely zoned out on the last. Soo, technancily. No." I answered, shrugging. Karai then came at me, fist up and going. Uh-Oh...
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Date: 05/17/13 10:03 PM
From: tmnt9568

As I struggled to get my valuable air into my lungs, Cammy noticed my struggle. "Hang on, Ze." She yelled, fending off Karai's attacks. As she blocked a punch, Cam threw a ninja smoek bomb to the ground. I was surprised she had one. Donnie banned her from using them. Long story. She reappeared behind Crystal, gripping her scythe on the very end. I felt a 'whoosh', and I looked at my collar, or whats left of a collar. My shirt was cut clean off, revealing my gray undershirt. "Thanks, Cam." I tell her, gripping my sai. "Don't mention it." She replied, throwing another bomb, then disappearing. I smiled. "There's no reason to smile. You're going down!" Crystal yelled in my face, clutching a bedazzled sword. "Nice sword, princess bling-bling." I couldn't hold in my laughter. "Oh, like my sword? Wait till you see my stars." She yelled , throwing some dazzled shruikens. I was only able to dodge some much. The last one got my arm. I ignored the cut. I threw some of my own shruikens.
TBC
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Date: 05/15/13 6:24 PM
From: cariomario

INTEEEEEEEEEEEEEENSENESS!

~~mister man~~

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Date: 05/14/13 10:16 PM
From: tmnt9568

?I swear, Karai. If you don?t tell me what you?re planning, I will smack that horrible make-up right off you?re face.? I threatened. ?You don?t like it?? Karai fake gasped. ?Do you want me to list it alphabetically or totally stupidness?? I ask. Cammy giggled. Just as we were off our guard, a dozen, at the most, came rushing to Karai?s aid. They all waited on their command from Karai. She lifted a hand, and they came at me and Cam. ?Do you have all these ninjas to protect you from being beaten?? I ask, blocking a katana with a sai at my left hand. ?You want to fight me? You will get you?re request, but I?ll warn you now. You will wish you were still fighting my ninja.? Karai told me. ?Ninja, fall back.? She added. ?Cat Fight.? Cammy mumbled, gripping her scythe. My hands fell back to my mask, tightening it. ?But let?s even the odds, shall we?? Karai asked us. ?What do you??? I asked, but was cut off by a loud roar. Cammy elbowed me, looking at the sky above. I then looked up to see a huge black blob in the sky. ?What is that?? I yelled. As the thing came closer, I saw it more clearer. It was a? Dragon?! ?Cammy, please tell me you see that, too.? I whisper. ?If you see a giant, flying lizard, then yes!? She yells back. ?Aw, don?t recognize me? I?ll show you who I am.? The beast boomed. The dragon soon transformed into it?s normal state. And trust me, it wasn?t pretty. I caught a glimpse of black hair and greenish eyes. I got an even closer glimpse as Crystal can hurling from the sky and tackling me from above! ?Oww!? I yelled, shutting my eyes hard. ?Looks like you?re all I got, Scythe.? I heard Cammy mumble as I saw her running at Karai. ?Good luck, Cam. Get ?er, Tiger,? I?m thinking as Crystal?s leg intertwined with mine. ?Get off of me, Beast!? I yelled at her, trying to twist my leg out of Crystal?s. My arms extended and I pulled on her pitch black hair. Hard. ?Ow!? She screeches, backing off. I gripped her hair again, using it to throw her to the ground. ?I?m comin?, Cam.? I say, running ?Oh, no you don?t! You?re not getting away that easily!? Crystal yelled, gripping my shirt collar and pulling so hard, I was choking.
TBC
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Date: 05/11/13 1:13 PM
From: cariomario

Lol! Karai seems very sneaky, and Cammy is just old brainless Cammy!

~~mister man~~

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Date: 05/11/13 12:35 AM
From: tmnt9568

"Quit your complaining and help me spy on Karai!" I harshly whisper, looking right at her. "Fine." Cammy sat down by me at the ledge. But when I looked back to our target, she wan't there. "She's gone." I say. "Yea, I kinda see that." Cammy answers, sarcastically. "Man, my sarcastic side has really rubbed off on ya." I tell her. "I take that as a compliment." She said. "Whatcha lookin' at?" Karai's voice almost made me jump. "We are spying on Karai." Cammy said. "Interesting. Can I join you?" Karai asks. "Yea, we just need to see why she-" Cammy stopped. "Hey!" She yelled, getting her scythe. "What were you doing to that woman, Karai?" I ask, holding onto my sais. I decided to cut off on the bow for a little while after what Donnie made me test. I'm sorry, but I'm not taking ANY chances, mechanical bow or not. "Oh, you mean Amanda? She's apart of my plan." She says, grimly. "What plan?" I ask. "Now, that will ruin the surprise, now would it?" Karai smiled.
TBC
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Date: 05/05/13 11:54 AM
From: cariomario

OMG! You got Cammy's personality perfectly! Also, yellow and black masks... sounds threatening... hehe! I love this story! it's epical!

~~mister man~~

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Date: 05/04/13 6:59 PM
From: tmnt9568

Okay, the idea just hit me! I know what to write about! But if you still have any ideas, I?m still an open book!
Tonight we had a Foot sighting. It was by the Woman?s Community Center at Avenue A. ?Okay guys. Split up. Zoey and Cammy, stay here and keep an eye on the building. Raph, Donnie, go west. Mikey?s with me. We are going south. Report back here if you see anything weird.? Leo tells us. We separated into our groups. Meme and Dede couldn?t patrol tonight because they both had a karate tournament. They both were black-belts. Now I see why they beat me the first time we spared. I?m usually pretty hard to beat. I sat on the edge of the building we were assigned to, looking over my shoulder to the Community Center. ?Why do you think the Foot crashed this place?? Cammy?s voice broke my thoughts. ?Dunno.? I replied. We got our answer soon after. ?Cammy, look.? I whisper. I knelt down. I saw Karai leading a woman, who looked strangely like Amanda, out the door of the building. Karai told the woman something, which from my point of view, looked like a threat. ?Is she forcing that woman to be her fake mom?? I ask Cammy. ?That?s horrible.? Cammy whispered back, holding her scythe, just in case. She proved shortly after she was trusted with nun-chucks that we made a mistake. She hit herself countless times. After we took them away, she finally decides to tell us she?s better with a scythe. ?I know. She is so cruel.? I say. ?Not that. I mean that Mikey was actually right about something.? She tells me. I tried to hold back a laugh. So instead, I smiled, while rolling my eyes. ?Let?s go tell Leo.? Cammy says, getting up. ?Nah. Let?s handle this on our own. Leo would probably just make ga-ga eyes on Karai.? I point out. Cammy nods, tightening her yellow mask that Splinter gave her. Splinter thought the color represents her. Courage, happiness, cheerfulness. For as long as I?ve known Cammy, if she?s in a mood, she is NOTHING like her mask. He offered me one, too. A black one. He says it fits me. I looked it up once on April?s laptop. What was he thinking when he gave it to me? It mean death, sorrow, doom, and fear in Japan. Thanks, Splinter. As if! I still took it though. Better than nothing. ?So, how do you want to take her down? Option One.? Cammy said, as she did an overly dramatic scythe move. ?Option Two.? Simple attack, just not enough to take Karai. ?Option Three.? I cut her off before we get to Option One Hundred. ?How about, Option Zero?? I say, keeping my eye on Karai. ?Well, that?s no fun.? Cammy pouted.
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Date: 05/04/13 6:33 PM
From: cariomario

@tmnt9568:
GO TO MY ADVICE TOPIC!!!!!!! HURRY!!!!!!!

~~mister man~~

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Date: 05/03/13 11:35 PM
From: tmnt9568

Hey everyone! I need your help. I've hit that problem that every writer has faced on this board...WRITER'S BLOG!!! I had a lot of ideas on my kindle scratch pad app, but my brothers( Or, bothers, as I like to call them) DELETED EVERYTHING I HAVE EVER WRITTEN, OR TYPED, ON THE APP!!!!! So, I need the people to help me!! I'm open to any ideas you got!
TMNT9568 OUT!!
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Date: 04/25/13 11:32 AM
From: Blodwen

OMG, It's adorable, awesome. I love it! Please I get a heart attack if you do not write the next part.
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Date: 04/24/13 3:10 PM
From: tmnt9568

?If that lady is really Karai?s mom, I fell bad for her.? I say. ?Why?? Cammy asks. ?Would you want to marry Shredder?? I replied. ?Oh. I see your point.? She answers. ?So? What should I do?? I asked the guys. ?Dunno.? Mikey says from behind me. Raph is still furious with him. ?Seriously? The reason I came here was to get an answer on what to do.? I say. ?Well, until we can get an answer, Zoey, I want to show you something. ? Donnie tells me.?Just a heads up, I am not tasting anything you cooked up in your lab. You remember what happened last time.? I warn him. Once, Donnie told me to test a bubbly drink he made in his lab. I lost my sense of taste for a week. ?It?s a wepond.? He says. I nod, then follow him to the training room. Then, I heard a loud smack coming from the living room. ?Poor Mikey,? I thought. When I got to the training room, Donnie was waiting, while holding a bow. ?Donnie, I already have a bow.? I say. ?Not like this one.? He replies, handing it to me. He was right. It had a metal handle with wires going all around it for a decoration. It was really light, surprisingly, considering that it was made out of metal. The arrows he made were just the same. But the tips were sharper and more shiny. ?Wanna test it?? Donnie read my mind. ?Heck ya!? I say, loading an arrow. ?Just so we are clear, this won?t back-fire on me, right?? I ask, before letting go on the arrow in possession. Donnie says in a doubtful tone,?Sure?? I took a deep breathe and let go on the arrow. It spun around for a while till it went past the target, changed it?s course, and went directly towards me. ??Donnie! Is it on stalker-mode?!? I yell, running. ?Um, Zoey? You might want to run faster. Those arrows, yeah, they?re full of poison!? Donnie yells at me. He decides to tell me now?! ?Donatello, if I live, you are dead!? I yell. ?What is going on in here? I can?t hear my show.? Leo says. ?Yeah, this is a bad time. Bye.? He adds, walking out. ?Uh, hello? A little help?? I yell to his shelled-back. I kept on running, the arrow almost touching my back. I ran until I knew what to do. I faked a left, and the arrow went straight into a dummy, piercing it?s drawn-on-heart. I sighed with relief. ?Donnie. I?m not testing anymore of your inventions.? I tell him, walking out of the training room.
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Date: 04/23/13 4:48 PM
From: cariomario

Wow! Once again, Mikey is the genius.

~cario~

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Date: 04/22/13 6:14 PM
From: tmnt9568

So, I kinda lied. Instead of going to Cammy?s, we went to see the guys. When me and Cam were walking in the tunnels, she asked me, ?Who was she? How does your dad know that woman? Are they, you know, dating?? I looked at her. ?Well, I have been living without a mom for a long time. Maybe my dad finally felt so lonely that he stared to date Amanda.? I said ?Amanda? as if i was talking about The Shredder. ?But one this is for sure, I am not going to be a stepsister to Karai. Nu-Uh.? I add. ?Should we tell the guys?? Cammy asked. ?Why do you think we are here?? I ask, walking into the living room. I didn?t see anyone. Then I heard the yelling. ?Mikey!? Raph?s voice echoed in the sewers. I rolled my eyes. Mikey came running in, hiding behind me. Raph came in, holding bent Sais. ?Why would you try to use my Sais to fix the DVD player?? He yelled. ?I didn?t know that would happen!? Mikey yelled from behind me. ?Guys, shut up and listen. My dad is dating a girl.? I say. ?So?? Raph asked. ?And Karai is her daughter.? I add. Raph?s broken Sai fell to the floor. ?Hey, Leo. Donnie! Get over here!? Raph yelled. Leo came in right after Donnie. ?Leo, your girlfriend?s mom is dating Ze?s dad.? Raph told him. ?She?s not my girlfriend!? Leo yelled. ?Wait, I thought Karai didn?t have a mom.? Donnie notes. ?Well, she obviously does.? I say. ?What if that isn?t Karai?s real mom? What if she knows that your dad is dating that lady and threatened that woman into making you believe that she is her daughter to get to us?? Mikey asked from behind me, still hiding from Raph. We all looked at him. ?What?? He asked, clueless. ?I can?t believe that came out of your mouth.? I tell him. ?It?s called talking.? Mikey says. I rolled my eyes. ?that could be possible. A kunoichi?s most trusted weapon is deception.? Splinter?s voice made me jump. How long was he standing there?!
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Date: 04/22/13 5:46 PM
From: tmnt9568

Cammy. She seemed shocked that I happened to be the person she bumped into. ?Huh, small world.? I say. She nods, but doesn?t say anything. ?Cammy, I?m really sorry for what I said.? I say, softly. ?I?m sorry, too.? She says. ?Huh?? I ask. ?I should?ve told Donnie not to set up that camera. It was your date. It was yours, and yours alone.? She explains. I smile. ?So,? Cammy says, ?what?s a tomboy like you doing in the number one girly-girly hang out?? I laugh. ?I was trying to get you a peace offering.? I say. ?Oh, did ya now? Well, for the record, that necklace is to die for.? She says, eyeing a silver necklace on the rack. I laugh once more. ?Please. You look great without it. Plus, it?s way to much money. I ain?t rich.? I say. This time, she laughs.
~
Cammy and I hung out for a while till I remembered what my dad said. It was seven thirty. I was thirty minutes late. ?Hey, I gotta get home. My dad said that he?s having a guest over. Probably his boss. Do you think you can spend the night? If it is his boss, it?s going to be one boring night, and I don?t want to be alone.? I say. She nods. I put my hands in my pocket, as we got to my apartment door, to get my house keys. I finally find them and put the key into it?s slot. I opened to door to find a woman and, what I guessed, was her daughter. ?Oh, Zoey. Nice of you to drop in. Your thirty minutes later. No worries, but I would like you to meet Amanda and her daughter, Karai.? My dad says to me. I almost dropped my keys when he said Karai?s name. And I swear, Cammy?s mouth dropped to the floor. I couldn?t talk. ?Well, don?t be rude, Zoey. Say hi.? Dad scolded. ?Hi.? I say, but it was barely audible. ?Well, I see you have Cammy here. So, why don?t you invite Karai to see your room, while me and Amanda talk.? He says. ?You know, on second thought, I think we?re going to go to Cammy?s. Nice to meet you, I guess.? I say, rushing out the door. Dad was probably so mad that I ditched him. In front of his own eyes.

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Date: 04/17/13 2:11 PM
From: cariomario

wow! awesome last part!

~cario~

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Date: 04/16/13 3:04 PM
From: tmnt9568

I had enough of my dad. I really wish I went back to the lair. I was about to tell him that I'm leaving for a walk. "Before you go, remember that you need to get back here at seven sharp. We have a special guest coming over." He calls out to me. "No promises!" I yell back, closing the door behind me. I walked for a little while before I got to the mall. I walked around, not really knowing what to do. I kinda wanted to go back to the lair, but then maybe I should try to find Cammy and apologize. But its a one in a million chance she would be here. But, it never hurts to try. I walked into HotTopic, my favorite store, looking for a peace offering for Cam. Nothing spoke out to me. Then, I walked into Forever Twenty One.I found a cute necklace. But it wasn't her style. "Ugh!" I sighed. I walked out of the store, my head down. And you would NEVER guess who I walked into. Well, maybe you can...
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Date: 04/14/13 4:16 PM
From: tmnt9568

@tmntrocksm
I have been thinking. I know you sent your character, Nicole, a long time ago. And I got some good news! I felt bad for not using your OC, so I'm gonna make it all work. I changed the furture ideas a bit so your character can be in! (:
@kuniochi33
Same thing with @tmntrocksm. I tweaked the ideas so the OC's can be in! Yay! (
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Date: 04/13/13 1:02 PM
From: cariomario

Oh no! Zoey's in trouble!

~cario~

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