Before I begin my weird story, I got a question. Do mutated turtles that know ninja skills, a giant rat, and aliens in robot stomachs sound like something out of Science-Fiction? I would say that, too. Untill I met some face-to-face! Here's how it happened:
"Zoey! School bus!" My dad called out to me. "Ugh! Comin!" I yelled back. Man, I hated school. It just takes away your freedom! High School is the Dungeon of Un-Freely Things! Anyway, back to the scene. I wasn't even ready. I just grabbed my dark skinny jeans, red tee, black leather jacket, and convers then left my room. Combing hair and brushing teeth was so over-rated! Besides, my hair still looked good. I popped a piece of mint gum into my mouth. Done.
"Oh, well! I missed the bus!" I said, not really caring. I was going to ditch anyway. My dad was in a rush this morning. Something about a two-month buisness trip. I decided to walk back home and watch some tv. It got late and I decided to go for a Late-Night walk.
"Zoey, you wanna do somethin' tonight. With me?" Raph asked, rubbing the back of his neck. He was nervous. I've seen this before lots of times when boys ask me out at school. I'm the top ten prettiest girl. If I turn down a boy, they are so scared to talk to me ever again. But this is Raph. He's usually so, well, brave! My answer was simply," I'd love to." I smiled. "Cool." He said, walking out. Then, I heard him yell," Yes!" A little to loud. I bent down to finish cleaning up my spilled water. After that was overwith, I raced to tell the girls.
~My Apartment~
"Ugh, were you blindfolded when you picked this out?" Cameryn threw one of my favorite t-shirts on the ground. Dede, Meme, and Cameryn were helping me decide on what to wear. Right now, they are just making fun of my clothes. My room was chaos. Shoes were all over the floor, a skirt on my windowsill, and a shirt in my goldfish's bowl! My dad would be so mad if he saw this.
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"Of course, Master Splinter." I said. "Man, Zoey, that ninja knocked you out cold! Raph had to carry you here!" Mikey said. "Wait, what happened?" I asked, looking at Raph. "Uh, nothin'." Mikey answered. "Well, if I could, I would give 'em a piece of my mind. But they all look the same!" I said, to change the topic. Everyone laughed. "Be right back." I told everyone, to get a glass of water. In the kitchen, I saw a little turtle eating a leaf. Why have I never noticed it before? "Hey, little guy." I whispered to it. He looked up at me. "I see you've met Spike." Raph's voice startled me. I dropped my glass of water. Oops. "Sorry!" I told him, ducking down to clean it up. He had the same thought. His head hit mine. "Ow!" We said together. "Sorry." I said, again. "It's fine." He said. "Zoey," Raph began.
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As we fought, Cameryn somehow got her mouth covering off. "Zoey!" She screamed. I looked over to see her, and Cheyenne's, cage one-foot away from the acid. "Just stay calm, Cammy!" I yelled. Too bad I didn't see the ninja behind me. Because they knocked me out, without me knowing if Cameryn and Cheyenne is safe.
~Lair~
"Ow, my head." I said, sitting up on the couch. "Dudes! And dudettes! Zoey's waking up!" I heard someone yell. Most likely Mikey. Everyone gathered around, making sure I was okay. "Stop, okay? Give me some space!" I yelled. Wait. "Where's Cammy and Cheyenne?" I asked, bolting up. "Right here." I heard a familiar voice. I looked over to see them. "Cameryn!" I yelled, runnung over to her side of the couch, hugging her. "Are you okay?" I asked, looking right into her eye. "Wait, did you guys get Splinter, too?" I asked. "Yes, Zoey. Thank you for caring." Master Splinter walked in.
@cariomario
Yes, the suspence. NOOOO! Wait, I'm writing it. Nevermind!! Hehe.
@DJmctmnt
Sure I will. I'll be sure to comment too!
@everyone
YAY!! You all like my story!! I feel so glad!! Thank you all!! Stay tuned for the new part, coming soon!!
TMNT9568 OUT!!
It does sound like science fiction! (Just making a pun with the title, sue me) I like it its cool. You should check out some of my fan-fics. I m not really getting lots of posts. Im just wondering if you would like to read some of em.
As I looked up, I lost my grip on Crystal. She escaped through a huge crack in the wall. Dumb run-down warehouse. I saw two cages above me. One, I assumed, held Cameryn, the other, Cheyenne. Before I could react, Foot Ninjas came in through every possible opening. I began to fight them off, as well as Raph, Leo, Donnie, Mikey, Meme, and Dede. I didn't see the cages lower into the acid. It was slow, though. They lowered to my head height, and I saw Cammy and Cheyenne. They were tied up, gags on their mouths. "Guys!" I screamed. They looked. We only had a matter of time. Before....You know. I grabbed Donnie's arm. "Can you try to close the acid filled pools?" I asked. He nodded, looking for the control panel. If they had one. I could only wait. My plan wouldn't work if Donnie didn't close the acid pools. I continued to fight off ninjas, worried.
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As Crystal made a run for me, I instinctivly ran to the side. I tripped her in the process. The guys were about to jump in to 'save the day', but I gave them a look. "Guys, she's a girl. You can't fight her." I told them, blocking a punch from Crystal. They didn't look to happy. "Aww, trying to save your boyfriend?" Crystal laughed. At me. Me!! I grinded my teeth. "What did you just say?" I asked, angry. "DogPound told me everything. You are in love with the freak in the red." She told me, making another attempt to pound me into the ground. "Yeah, but did he also tell you that he was the one who told us all of your darkest secrets? He was the one who told us where you were!" I yelled at her, looking for Meme and Dede. I spotted them with the guys. "Hey, a little help?!" I yelled back to them. They both flipped over, grabbing Crystal's arms to hold her back. "Now, down to buisness. Where is Cameryn and Cheyenne?" I asked. Crystal laughed. "Above you." She said simply.
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@Sandybell2;
Don't worry! I won't leave you guys hangin'! I'm just thinking of ideas for the next part.
@TMNTfan3;
I'm glad you sent Crystal! *Internet Hugs Back* She will make a great addition to my story!!
@everyone;
I'm so glad that you all love my story! I also have another in the making,"A Big Surprise, Right?". I think it's posted already! Stay tooned for more!
P.s. Sorry. I kinda posted 2 of the kinda same one. It's just that my computer was going slow, and I thought that it didn't post the first time.
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"Everybody's perfect in their own way. But on behalf that perfection there's slightly some things that makes our perfection incomplete. That's why we have to search a way to fill the gap in our perfection, but new things will break the walls of the perfections we built. So, nobody can be perfectly perfect..."
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! You put her in!!!!! *girly scream* *internet hugs you* by the way, your fan fiction is awesome, and I don't mean just because my character is in it, mainly because I only post my character for fan-fics that I like.
P.S you can call me MJO if you want
We circled the building that DogPound said Shredder was hiding. Looks like he changed it that last time we were there 'cause it wasn't the creepy chapel. It was an old, run-down warehouse. Creepier. I looked through a cracked window. I saw a shadowy figure. Bingo. "Guys, he's in there." I whispered. Everyone took a peek. "Okay, let's go in." Leo commanded.
~Warehouse~
"I've been expecting you, turtles." A voice broke the silence. "Stalker.." Mikey told us. I rolled my eyes as Raph hit his head. "Let my friend go, you tin can. We've beaten you before, and we can do it again." I said, full of courage. 'Shredder' laughed. "How? You've never battled me before." The figure stepped into the light. It wasn't Shredder. It was a girl. We all were shocked. "I'm," She started. "Shredder's daughter." She finished, running for her target. Me.
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We finally got to Shredder's hideout. I guess he changed it when we last saw him, 'cause it wasn't the creepy chapel anymore. It was a old warehouse. Even creepier. We each surrounded the warehouse. I looked through a cracked window. I saw a figure in the darkness. Bingo. "Guys," I whispered. "he's in there." They each took a peek. "Let's go in." Leo commanded.
~Warehouse~
"I've been expecting you, turtles." A deep voice broke the silence. "Stalker." Mikey whispered. Raph smaked his head. I rolled my eyes. "We've beat you before, and we can beat you again." I replied. "How? You've never seen me before." 'Shredder' answered. "What do you mean?" Donnie asked. The figure stepped out of the darkness. We expected Shredder, but there stood a girl. She had long dark hair with ripped jeans. She also had a crystal around her neck. "I'm," She began. "Shredder's daughter, Crystal."
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"Now, I'm gonna ask you one more time; WHERE ARE THEY?!" I yelled at DogPound. We finally got him tied up with Mikey's nun-chucks, and now we are TRYING to get answers. I've already been asking him for more than ten minutes! His only response was," I'll be dishonoring my master!" He is really starting to tick me off. Sorry, he IS ticking me off. I smiled. "Oh, we have ways to make you talk!" I said, motioning everyone to help me 'throw' him over. We were just bluffing(Or are we? Sadly, yes, we are.). "Dudes, this reminds me when DogPound was human and we did this with Xever," Mikey said. "but there are girls here." He added. I rolled my eyes. Our method wasn't working. Then I got another one. I whispered to Donnie my plan. He took it offencively, but agreed. He walked over to DogPound, then started Geek-Talking him. It took about twenty minutes of geekieness, until DogPound cracked. He told us EVERYTHING....
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