"Where exactly is Dessarae gonna be?"I asked Sierra as we traipsed through the dark, creatures of the night at ease. The shores of the city appeared in the distance as we left the tall skyscrapers and streets packed with parked cars behind, golden dunes planted among the wavy sand, the waves lapping against the shore in gentle grace. Our mission was soon to began.
"Dessarae said to meet her in the place of my dream,"she replied, pulling the strap of her sack higher upon her shoulder. "It was the beach."
"The beach?"Leo asked, carrying his own sack."Are you sure? Beaches are symbols of fun and relaxation, not departure."
"I don't know,"Sierra answered."I'm not much for knowing lately." She scanned the horizon for any signs of a six-foot-tall mutant angel. She would've been easy to spot.
"Did we pack for nothing?"Maggie asked."My back is sore."
"Maggie, you didn't even do anything,"Jenny retorted, rolling her eyes.
"Nothing is worth something right now,"Donnie said, pointing."Look."
We all turned, facing the hues of the deep blue sea. A figure stood, her back arched, her head held high, in the way of a proud mother, or loyal king. She turned her head slightly towards us, and beckoned,"Come."
I shared a glance with Leo before we stepped forward. Dessarae gave us each one acknowledge-filled look before opening her delicate lips. "I am truly greatful for your effort on behalf of my world,"she said, giving a smile. "You have no knowledge of my feelings of gratitude towards you."
"We're glad to help,"Leo said respectfully.
"I have assured you that your passage to my world would be covered, nourishments and shelter included, correct?"
"Yes,"
"And I have given you enough knowledge about my world's terrain in advance, correct?"
"Yes,"
"Then we are set to depart,"she said, turning away from us and towards the open sea. She raised both her arms elegantly and stressed the force in her fingers. "What's she doing?"Mikey asked, and we all shushed him, except for his girlfriend, Maggie, who was probably wondering the same thing.
"Close your eyes,heroes,"she said, still facing the water.
I watched everyone, one by one, shut their eyelids. After a second, I joined them, my vision enveloped in even more darkness than before.
~***~
"It is safe to open your eyes now,"Dessarae's voice rang out from the piercing silence. I forced my eyelids to open, blinking a few times before seeing the scene clearly. It was a warm color themed-room, with red floors, orange walls, and wooden furniture arranged tastefully. It was all we could see.
Leo was next to me, gazing at the room in confusion."How are we gonna get out of here?"he wondered aloud.
"I am here, heroes,"Dessarae called, a doorway opening in the wall.
"Guess that's our way,"Raph said, and we entered through the doorway, spilling into a large control room with an extra-large windshield painting the scene outside. At first, I saw a starry landscape with a pitch-black backdrop, but after I blinked a couple of times, I knew we were actually flying among the stars. "Are we in...?"
"Yes, we are in the place that humans call 'space',"Dessarae answered. "We will arrive in a few minutes."
"Minutes?"Donnie said."But it takes months for a rover to reach Mars. Isn't your world in a different galaxy?"
"Yes,"she said."But if I were to arrive at Earth, I must have advanced technology,no?"
"I guess so, but-"
Eight chairs popped up from the floor. "Have a seat,"she said, gesturing towards the chairs.
I tentatively edged into my seat, and a seatbelt flew across me to click into the buckle on the other side. Everyone else was adjusting into their seats as well, with a few comments to add.
"Hold on tight, heroes,"Dessarae said, and waved her arms, vanishing.
"Tight?"Mikey asked.
Before anyone could respond, everything went into super fast-motion. I felt every cell and being of me being stretched like taffy, into little bits and pieces of atoms. Everything gained a slanted appearance, making me feel as if I was running through the starry scene before me. I was sinking into the back of my seat, unable to move a single muscle.
I tried closing my eyes, but to no avail.
Please be over soon.
Macthepig, you're writing a book?? That's epic awesomeness! I urge you in that direction, writing books is a great endeavor and if I can find it I will definitely read it! You have a talent!
I love writing my fanfic, but my parents seem...disappointed. They say I'm a good writer, and that I should use my talents for a better purpose. I disagree, I think giving something back to you all IS worthy endeavor, but yet they're right. I don't know, I feel like I let them down. That's why I'm also going to be starting a book soon, maybe this fall. I have no idea what about, so I'm open to ideas from my dear friends! If I do write a book, I will definitely dedicate all of my friends on here. You deserve it!
I've been working on a book for a while now, too! It's called 'Unravel', and I really hope it gets published! All I can say is, it's about three eighth grade girls who have serious problems, either self-esteem wise, emotional wise, or simply to stay safe. They don't know about each other until they are paired in a writing group in English class (their homeroom). Throughout the year, a bond begins to form.
All I can say...
---> Dis <---
Alert: By the way, this 'fic is ending soon! Probably eight or nine more chapters, and it is done!
I remember the drafting days...
I love peanut butter. Boston is still shooken up. OH! Guess what i'm doing! GUESS! Okay stop guessing. I am writing a BOOK! Yes I am writing a book. It's going to be called the "The boy and the birds" I can't really tell you guys what it's about because I don't really know. But I am going to do the cover. I all ready have 2 chapters written out. As I go along I can put some snips of the words in here. It will be so COOL if I get it published. If it does can you guys read it. I am going to have a picture of my pigs in the back
Yeah, I thought it was really funny when you used his account, Cario! I did see your signature, though, so that helped! Hmm, we all seem to be getting coughs...that's not good!
@AT:
LOL! I accidentally used my brother's account! We both share the same computer, so whenever my brother goes on I sometimes forget to log out
But you can always tell who is writing by the signatures! Mine says ~cario~ and TMNTchaz's is chazzles or something like that.
@Dis:
Yeah, I just got a cough about a half an hour ago! It's really strange because I was laughing so hard I started coughing, and I wouldn't stop coughing until I fell over, and now I have a cough. Ugh.
Oh, not you too, Dis! We do live in the same state, though, so it's possible we're getting the same thing! Nooooo!!!
Hehe...I just love seeing your Ramen Noodles (what?)! It makes me laugh every time, and I'm happy you're using it!!
@Dis
You watch Regular Show?! Dude, I love that show! And, same here, I prefer chicks WAY MORE than geese ever since that episode! I also love Adventure Time.
TMNT9586 OUT!!
@cario
I like duckies...more than geese. Especially since I saw that one Regular Show episode...
I make a lot of references to Regular Show, I bet you know that by now.
@AT
I'm coughing too! Ugh...wonder if a bug is going around?
---> Dis <---
Ramen Noodles....wait for it....wait for it... (WHAT?) out!
That's hilarious, TC1! I think ducks are so funny, we get some every year who want to swim in our pool! They just sit there and quack at us. I'm watching birds at my bird feeder right now, and I saw a cardinal and a mourning dove! And lots of chickadees and sparrows! We named every single one, most after Lord of the Rings characters.
Cariomario, I did that once with a frog, but it was fine! Some snakes can swim, so maybe it was ok, too! Oh, my goodness, the first time I typed in 'snakes' it came out as 'snacks'! Hahahaha!! And cario? I think you accidentally used your brother's account! At first I was confused when you said you eat peanut butter because I known Chaz is allergic to peanut butter!
Ugh, I'm getting sick, I keep coughing! I don't like getting sick!
@macthepig:
woah, you hit a duck in the face with a piece of bread? That's HILARIOUSO! I once poked a snake with a stick, but I didn't know it was a snake. It then jumped at me, and I used the stick to knock it into a river. And then it sunk. It was really scary! I also like llamas. Have you seen Llamas in hats? LOL! So you're really good at baking? I WISH I were. The only thing I'm good at is dipping a spoon in a jar of peanut butter then eating it.
Cariomario, my spring break was at the beginning of April, but I didn't get to write at all either! My life is way too busy...You do a lot of sports and stuff! That takes skill, I can only play one instrument and do one sport! That's also a great inspiration story, cario; mine started from a daydream!
I love banana bread, macthepig! My sister makes it with chocolate chips sometimes and it's soooo goooooood. Mmm, now I want it!
Hehe, I like reading about your piggies! I have two hamsters, chinese dwarfs, and they're over 2 years old! That's old for a hammie! They're still very hyper, but the one is blind in her left eye now...poor little thing, at least she still likes the yogurt drops I give her!
Yeah, I heard about the bombings in Boston. I have an adult friend from karate, and her daughter sometimes runs in the marathons. We don't know if she was there this year, but I'm praying she wasn't. This world is so messed up.
That, it was, Macthepig. We all have our sympathies with those who were affected.
One time, I was at the park with my uncle, and we were throwing bread to the duck. Then he started chasing them and he accidentally kicked one into the pond. The duck was fine. . . but I swear I got stomach wounds from laughing so much!
I just hit a duck in the face with some bread. The other duck is eating the facebread. You hear about the cop who..you know in that standoff on the bombing suspects. That guy didn't deserve to go like that. HE WAS A HERO!!! The marithon thing was awfull. Those poor people. No..No..I am going to be positive so shut up voice in my head in the form of Elvis. I have a feeling this story is coming to an end. It better not. Biggie his hair cut shorter for summer and he looks so cute. Biggie is an american long-haired sliky so his fur needs to be cut sometimes. Okay I don't want to brag but I ROCK at baking. Trust me if you don't like banana bread then you haven't had mine. It's chocolate.
@macthepig:
wow, your spring break is in April? mine was the second week of march! Wow, I didn't write at ALL this spring break. but now I'm back into the writing groove and all. Anywho, it sounds like you do a lot! Well I don't exactly have a free schedule either. I get out of school at 4 on normal days, 6 when I have play practice. I also play the piano and the clarinet, and I'm on the lacrosse, basketball, and tennis teams. whenever I'm bored, I write or watch tmnt marathons with my friends. Yerp, that's me.
@Kunoichi15:
Woah, that's how you got inspiration for your fanficion? That's so cool! I never get inspiration like that! I always just let my thoughts wander and they end up in a story or something I decide to write later. Well I watched the 2003 version when I was little and came up with characters with my friends. Originally, Cammy's name was Camille and Jen's name was Penny. One day I just decided to write everything in a journal and the whole story just came to me. Two years later, I find out the new TMNT is going on TV and I decide to dust off the old pen and journal to start again.
Sorry about the short, tactless chapter...I'm in a hurry! Jenny
I was beyond relieved when I saw Ella and Leo hugging.
Okay, the hugging part was a little too much for my taste. But I was glad to see them both, lovey-dovey or not.
Raph seemed excited himself, but backed down when Ella leaned forward and gave him a kiss on the cheek." Thanks for taking care of my little sis, "
I glared at her, but she only smiled. She wrapped her arms around me, and all angry thoughts faded. I admit, silent drops of single tears escaped my eyes. Come on...give me a break, will you?
~*~*~
" It's supposed to be here...somewhere,"Mikey muttered. We went on through the tunnel, expecting nothing more than similar designs of tactless home furnishing and décor.
"Should've remembered,"Leo muttered. After happy-time reunion, it was all business, to find Sierra and Donnie, or at least join up with them. When we reached the intersection we split at, something told me they hadn't made it through.
"I think they're down here,"Raph said, noticing my expression. "They said they'd meet up with us."
"I hope they're not in trouble,"I grumbled. When I saw Ella's face, my annoyance faded. She seemed worried, and scared, as if something was hidden in plain view, something valuable.
Gosh the boards are taking a while tonight...Oh well.
I can't sleep, guilt it horrible! Never get into a argument with one of your best friends...Even if they do tend to get a little off with you at times.
@ Mikaracat
I think the name Laura is beautiful! My names Liliana, but i don't exacltly like it.... I wish my name was Laura!
Kunoichi15, that's so awesome! I'd love my name to be in my fanfic, but it doesn't quite fit. That's also super cool how your story was formed! I like hearing fanfiction origins, they're all unique!
macthepig, glad you're back! You play a lot of instruments, that takes talent! I can only play one, and not that well! Oh, and hello Piney and Biggie and Mac! My hammies, Joon and Jellybean, say hi!
SPRING BREAK!!!!!!! Whoop Whoop! I haven't been around due to a two and a half week mythology project. I had to write three papers and design a poster. My mind is numb. I play the hermonica(Is that right?) drums, flute and guitar. The flute and guitar are not my best instaments but they are fun to play. I like to play b flat really loud to get my sister out of my room. Very effective. CAN YOU WRITE MORE???????????? PLEASE! The piggies and Piney the lovebird say hi.
TC1: You knew!! I kinda expected people to guess but.. Oh well! You know the very first chapter? Well, that's how it started, actually. I was sitting on the porch, using my vivid imagination when the idea hit me. I was actually reading that book too! It was cold, it was Sunday, and I had a HUGE headache from all of my siblings arguing and the adults talking. So I came out here. The idea for this fan fic build up for weeks, it seemed like. I finally decided to put it to words and thus, a fan fic was born! I can't believe how much better I've gotten! I reread the intro and I was like... Wow! I wrote that!?! I guess practice DOES make perfect!
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