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Just Like The Movies *MY FIRST TMNT FANFIC*

Date: 12/01/12 6:34 PM
From: cariomario

this is a fanfic about how I (the creator) met the TMNT.

PART 1
I am such a slacker. I had to finish my book report in one night that was assigned three weeks ago. When I started it was 9:30 PM. It's funny how time goes snail-speed during boring things but flies when you don't want it to. The next time I checked my clock it was 11:45. My fingers began to get clumsy. Good thing I made an outline before because I couldn't concentrate. 1:30 AM. Now I struggled to stay awake. Man, I wished I didn't have to go to school. I looked down at the keyboard and sat back in my chair. The sleep that hovered over me for the past three hours finally wrapped itself around me like a blanket. The next thing I remember is waking up to something dripping on the back of my neck. I was flat on my face on cold hard cement somewhere that smelled really bad. When my eyes finally adjusted I realized that I was in a sewer. A rushing wave of anxiety washed over me like boiling water. Where was I?

cario

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Date: 05/08/13 8:51 PM
From: tmnt9568

I knwo you already have a sequel, but I'm still going to post on this one so it could stay on the boards. I hate it when the board deletes fanfics! But that will not be the fate for this awesome fanfic!!!! Okay, BYEEEE
TMNT9568 OUT!!
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Date: 04/17/13 1:56 AM
From: kaileibear

ok once more OH EHM GHEEE OMG OMG ok I'm good HEY maybe you could add this character in your sequel and the reason I keep asking people to put her and a bunch of other characters I posted is because 1 I really like this girl ash and 2 I have really been wanting my characters to be in somebody else's fan-fic other than mine so here's ash!
name:ashton age:16
nickname:ash
personality:more of the strong silent type,silent, quick on her feet,gracefull,strong,good fighter,likes to read,keeps out of other peoples(her friends) buisness unless needed or asked to,good spy,hates loosing
looks:grey-black ash looking hair that goes down to the mid length of her back, bangs that mainly cover her right eye but when she looks down they block her face,when she's in battle she wears an all black kunoich suit except on her face, she wears a half mask and she keeps her hair down,everyday look-hair pulled up into a high pony,she wears a grey crop top tank and a black leather jacket over it,black flare jeans, and grey converse shoes, she also wears a black skull choker and matching earings
crush:raph
story: she was jumping the roofs and daydreaming when she crashed into one of the turtles but she didn't scream cause she wasn't scared, she just apologized and jumped away leaving the turtles confused.
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Date: 04/16/13 8:42 PM
From: tmnt9568

Oh nu ooh, girl! This fanfic CANNOT end. You gots yourself a gift! I got some advise: Kepp this fanfic going if you dont want a TMNT9568 tantrum!!! Hehee...
no, but I'm serious. Keep it goin!!!!!
TMNT9568 OUT!!
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Date: 04/16/13 4:59 PM
From: cariomario

SEQUEL TIME! WHOO HOO! SOMEONE RECOMMENDED A SEQUEL and I forget who SO I WAS ALL LIKE "WHOO HOO ALRIGHT-EE THEN ITS GONNA BE A SEQUEL! YEAH!

Look out for "It is definitely NOT just like the movies" coming out on FRIDAY!

LOL I sound like some kind of movie commercial, don't I? THAT GOES WITH THE TITLE!

~cario~

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Date: 04/16/13 1:51 PM
From: cariomario

@kaeliebear:
so sorry, I'm not accepting any characters! but please post a creator on my brother, TMNTchaz's fanfiction, Coming Home. He's accepting oc's that are fans of the turtles too.

~cario~

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Date: 04/16/13 11:15 AM
From: kaileibear

OH EM GHEE OMG OMG OMG OMG THIS IS.....THIS IS....
JULIPGA YEAH JULIPGA (joo-lip-gha)
oh and are you accepting any more creators?
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Date: 04/15/13 5:15 PM
From: Discovery7

Phew!
I didn't want to stay unconscious forever...

---> Dis <---

Just to say so, that last chapter was AYUGIPI!

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Date: 04/14/13 9:39 PM
From: mvaleria12

Yay, they're alright!
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Date: 04/14/13 4:41 PM
From: AcornTree

The End? Why does that have such an ominous ring to it??? I'm all curious! Will there be a sequel? So many questions!

****AT****

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Date: 04/14/13 1:13 PM
From: emorah

The End?like literally the end? I'm really hoping you don't mean LITERALLY THE END!!!!!
I DON'T THINK I COULD HANDLE LITERALLY THE END!!!!! NOT NOW!!!!!!! PLEASE SAY YOU DON'T MEAN LITERALLY THE END!!!!!!!(at least not without a sequel)
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Date: 04/14/13 11:29 AM
From: cariomario

WAIIIIIIIT NO ITS NOT OVER YET! NOT YET EVERYONE!

Sorry to scare anyone that thought it was over. This is merely about 2/3 the way through. trust me, the ending will be AYUGIPI!

~cario~

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Date: 04/13/13 2:57 PM
From: faloan123

Wait, is it over!!? *Shakes Cario* IS IT OVER!!???????????????? Great chapter!

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 04/12/13 9:24 PM
From: cariomario

SORRY THIS IS SOOOOO LATE!

Part 46
(Cario's pov)
Alright, do I need to go over the last few moments of my life? NOT IN A MILLION YEARS. I contempted myself with running over to get my frying pan and running back to the Shredder to give him a satisfying thwack in the chest. Mission accomplished.
Me: HA! I TOLD YOU SO, DIS!
That girl was still standing there.
Me: what the heck just happened?
???: ummmm, this is hard to explain.
Me: so explain fast!
???: okay... My name is Ariana and I come from a different dimension and I somehow ended up here and found you guys' sensei and he told me you were in danger so I jumped in to help and your sensei promised not to tell the turtles that we are from a different dimension but I used my execai powers of blood bending and healing that I gained from dimension travel to defeat the Shredder temporarily!
Ariana put her hands on her knees and breathed heavily. She finally looked back up at me.
Ariana: SO COME ON LET'S BOOK OUT BEFORE DIS RUNS OUT OF POWER AND THE FOOT ATTACK US INSTEAD OF HER!!!
I gawked. How did this kid know that much about us? Well I shouldn't care because this is some sort of twisted dimension so i'm just going to go along with her.
Me: ummm... can you heal my friends?
Ariana looked like she was in deep thought for a moment. She reminded me of someone I knew for a second.
Ariana: yeah, but this is going to be a lot of work.
Ariana immediately ran over and healed Snowy, who woke up and the two of them healed the rest of us. How did she know all this stuff about us? Slowly Ariana and Snowy healed everyone there. We all stood up, and Dis ran over to us, turning back into her usual self and then passing out. As expected, the foot was following her so we had to move fast. Donnie scooped up Dis and we ran for the sewers. NOT just like the movies. Certainly not. The Shredder wasn't defeated, the foot are still active, and i'm pretty sure that we'll be here with the turtles forever. Happily ever after? Eh, not really.
The End?

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Date: 04/09/13 4:14 PM
From: AcornTree

O.O I wasn't expecting that! But it was so epic!

****AT****

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Date: 04/08/13 7:06 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter! And I liked my idea, Shredder and Snowy having a tea party. MWHAHAHAH!!!!!! I'm hyper today.

A dire wolf who is too lazy to sign out!

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Date: 04/08/13 5:13 PM
From: mvaleria12

"Me: oh no you didn't!
Shredder: oh yes I just did."
LOL!
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Date: 04/07/13 12:07 PM
From: cariomario

Lol, everyone is wrong. I thought it would be pretty obvious, but ah well.

Part... 45?
(cario's pov)
Shredder's lair was... Empty. Searching around frantically, Mikey eyed a throne in the back with the Shredder sitting in it. We all turned to face him, but we were suddenly surrounded by the shredder's montage of foot soldiers. Dis looked at me and yelled.
Dis: GO! I'VE GOT THE FOOT!
Me: But you said I couldn't take down the Shredder with a-
Dis: GO!
I forgot everything and ran for the shredder but everyone was already attacking him. Karai was by his side, fighting Asari, Bell and Dez. The four turtles were attacking the Shredder. They've done it before in the series, but they got creamed. If this was some sort of twisted fanfiction, then I hope we beat the shredder and we all live happily ever after or such and such. I snapped out of my thinking to see everyone sprawled out across the Shredder's lair but the Shredder himself and his legions of foot soldiers that Dis was holding off. I grew angrier and angrier as I saw my friends unconscious, immobilized or dazed, and knew I had to do something about it.
Me: oh no you didn't!
Shredder: oh yes I just did.
I charged at the Shredder using my super speed and swung my frying pan at his head. He barely caught my swift attack and knocked me back as he flung my frying pan all the way out the window of the other side of the warehouse with the same velocity as I would.
Me: okay, so maybe Dos was right.
Shredder: you fool! I have Snowy, and her execai powers are now mine!
He threw one hand over at a glass chamber with many wires coming out of it. More importantly, an unconscious Snowy was inside it.
Me: oh... No...
I slowly backed up, away from the menacing figures that would haunt my dreams for a long time from now. However, like a breath of fresh air, my frying pan flew back in through the window and severed the wires coming from the glass chamber.
???: AIEEEEEEEWHOOOOOOO!
A girl with curly brown hair and brown eyes crashed through the window my frying pan flew through a second earlier. The girl landed perfectly and put her hands out, picking the Shredder off of his feet like Bell would. His arm wound back, and he punched himself in the face this knocking himself out. I fell back on my bottom, astounded by what happened.
TBC

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Date: 04/06/13 6:54 PM
From: AcornTree

Hahaha! Cario is awesome, I need a frying pan now! Hmm, I think they saw...A FOREST OF PEANUT BUTTER!! Or, maybe not. Sorry, I'm uber hyper 'cause I had ice cream and I don't ever have ice cream!!

****AT****

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Date: 04/05/13 9:29 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter! I think I know what they saw, Snowy and Shredder having a tea party!

A dire wolf who is too lazy to sign off.

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Date: 04/04/13 7:43 PM
From: cariomario

ALRIGHT PEOPLES! NEW CHAPPIE TIME!

Part 44
(Bell's pov)
In fact, the light wasn't the shredder OR the fact I was seeing 'the light.' It was simply the shredder's lair. We all stopped to get prepared for battle. I shook out my arms and legs and jumped up and down a few times.
(Cario's pov)
I took out my frying pan and twirled it in my hands a few times.
Cario: the frying pan assassin is prepared to take down the shredder!
Dis: oh, come on. You know you're not going to beat the Shredder with a frying pan!
Dis morphed into one person or animal after another like the flicker of a camera shutter.
(Rem's pov)
Asari: woah, that's amazing, Dis!
Dis: thanks, I've been practicing.
Leo: let's move before the Shredder finds out we're here.
Dis: don't worry, he's expecting us.
Me: as always.
We walked out into the Shredder's lair, where we DEFINITELY weren't expecting what we saw.
TBC

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