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Just Like The Movies *MY FIRST TMNT FANFIC*

Date: 12/01/12 6:34 PM
From: cariomario

this is a fanfic about how I (the creator) met the TMNT.

PART 1
I am such a slacker. I had to finish my book report in one night that was assigned three weeks ago. When I started it was 9:30 PM. It's funny how time goes snail-speed during boring things but flies when you don't want it to. The next time I checked my clock it was 11:45. My fingers began to get clumsy. Good thing I made an outline before because I couldn't concentrate. 1:30 AM. Now I struggled to stay awake. Man, I wished I didn't have to go to school. I looked down at the keyboard and sat back in my chair. The sleep that hovered over me for the past three hours finally wrapped itself around me like a blanket. The next thing I remember is waking up to something dripping on the back of my neck. I was flat on my face on cold hard cement somewhere that smelled really bad. When my eyes finally adjusted I realized that I was in a sewer. A rushing wave of anxiety washed over me like boiling water. Where was I?

cario

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Date: 03/15/13 12:43 PM
From: cariomario

INTENSE CHAPTER TIME!!! BOO YAAAAAAAH!

Part 40
(Leo's pov)
The shredder. I got in my fighting stance, but then realized that Snowy had no weapons.
Me: Snowy, here!
I threw Snowy one of my katanas. She willfully joined the fight this time, and we both attacked the Shredder at once. He was powerful, enough to hold us both off, that is.
Shredder: you are no match for me!
The shredder threw Snowy backwards and slashed at me. I fell to the ground and couldn't get up.
(Snowy's pov)
I looked at Leo on the ground and ran to him.
Me: Leo!
I shook him, and the cuts on his arm and plastron started to heal.
Leo: woah!
Me: did I do that?
Leo: I think so...
Nothing prepared us for what happened next.

(Leo's pov)
The next thing I knew, Snowy disappeared. I jumped up to see Snowy being dragged away by the shredder as the forcefield shattered and disappeared before the fragments could hit the ground.
Me: SNOWY!!!!!
I ran after the shredder, but he disappeared into the darkness. I didn't know what to do. For the first time, I actually had no idea what to do.
TBC

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Date: 03/14/13 10:07 PM
From: mvaleria12

It's getting more and more interesting and mysterious
So, the force field doesn't have a light spot. Their all trapped in the same force field, except for Leo and Snowy who are currently stuck in another force field. Hmmmm....oh and I think the Shredder is in the same force field as Leo and Snowy, right? I wonder what will happen next
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Date: 03/14/13 1:43 PM
From: torrosH9

Oh man this story is great I can't stop being all giddy! >v<
Keep going your doing an awsume(I'm a bad speller, so sorry TT .TT) job! LOL
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Date: 03/13/13 6:21 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Star Wolf
Edme
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 03/12/13 7:33 PM
From: cariomario

sorry if I'm posting this twice, I have a pretty bad short term memory.

Part 39
(Asari's pov)
I didn't know where I was running, but I ended up in another room with Donnie close behind me. As I looked around, I saw that I ended up in a forcefield with Mikey, Dis, and Bell. A few seconds later Donnie appeared, too.
Donnie: oh come on!
Mikey: awww, man! Now we're all stuck in here!
Bell: this place is starting to get crowded.
Just then, Cario and Raph appeared in the forcefield too.
Raph: darn it! Another forcefield!
Mikey: a what now?
As if they were on cue, Rem walked in carrying an unconscious Dez.
Rem: *sarcastically* great, another one!
Me: *clears throat* Guys, I know how to get out. Find a light spot on the wall.
We all started scouring the place for a light spot. After a while we still didn't find one.
Dis: I'd hate to break your spirits, but this forcefield doesn't have one.
TBC

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Date: 03/09/13 1:08 PM
From: faloan123

Epicness.

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 03/09/13 10:12 AM
From: cariomario

Part 38
(Raph's pov)
Cario and I continued walking until we came to the place where the open space turned back into a tunnel that went straight up.
Me: Cario, can you get through here?
Cario: ooh, this looks fun!
Cario got off to a running start, jumped, and then jumped off one side of a wall, then turned in midair and jumped off the other side, and kept on going until it sent her flying all the way up, about 30 feet, to the top.
Me: how did you do that?
Cario: playing video games, no duh!
Me: well I have to admit, that was cool!
Cario: why thank you.
Me: but how do I get up?
Cario: I have an idea!
Cario jumped all the way down and landed perfectly. She picked me up, slung me over her shoulder, and started jumping again. I felt like a rag doll being flung around helplessly, and more embarrassingly, by a girl. We eventually made our way up and back out into the rest of the warehouse.
TBC
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Date: 03/08/13 9:53 PM
From: cariomario

THE NEXT PART WILL BE SOON! I PROMISE!

~cario~

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Date: 03/03/13 2:25 PM
From: AcornTree

I keep forgetting the girls in here were transported from a dimension where this was a TV show! If I was in their situation, I'd think it was fun, but would want to sit back at home for the scary parts, too!

****AT****

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Date: 03/02/13 8:30 AM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 03/01/13 5:33 PM
From: mvaleria12

I would be sitting on the couch, too lol
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Date: 02/27/13 8:17 PM
From: cariomario

Part 35
(Dez's pov)
Rem and I were meditating, we were faced away from each other but we were leaning against each other.
Rem: Dezi, have you seen the ground?
Me: uhhh, yeah. We are sitting on the ground.
Rem: no, the weird box thing doesn't cover the ground. The ground is made of dirt.
Me: ooooh, now I see it!
Rem: do you think we can dig our way out?
Me: i'm gonna try.
I pointed my finger towards the ground, and shot a laser at it. The laser formed a five foot wide crater that went about three feet deep. I shot another three and the hole in the ground was about 10 feet deep.
Rem: now all we have to do is shoot our way out of here!
I jumped down and shot a tunnel past the side of the box, and then back above ground.
Me: Rem! I have our way out!
Rem: thanks, Dezi!
I climbed out first, and then Rem. I looked back down at the forcefield and saw there was a giant ditch where it was. I suddenly felt really tired, and everything went dark.
(Rem's pov)
Dezi was amazing. She started to look weak, and her bracelet glowed red as she passed out. The bracelet and the forcefield then turned bright blue, then faded away. Unsure of what to do next, I walked back up the tunnel I came from, carrying Dez.
(Snowy's pov)
I actually didn't mind being stuck here with Leo. I knew we had to get out somehow, but we were stuck for now.
Me: Leo?
Leo: yeah?
Me: do you think we'll ever get out of here?
Leo: I don't know...
It must be tough being a leader. We were stuck, and he had no idea if everyone was okay or not.
???: prepare to meet your end, Leonardo.
Me: who's that?
A menacing figure stepped into the light. We all knew the infamous shredder. If I was at home, watching this from the safety of my couch, I would have been excited. But this was real. And I have a bad feeling about it.
TBC
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Date: 02/27/13 4:44 PM
From: faloan123

Great last two chapters!

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 02/25/13 8:14 PM
From: AcornTree

I love moments like that, cariomario! I still haven't a clue how to end my fanfic in a way that goes along flowingly (hehe, not a word but I still like it! Thanks to my awesome best friend, TC1 ) And I have chewed pencil erasers before, like when I'm drawing. They taste bad, but it's an unconscious habit! Yes, the evil pencil organization is a good idea. Er, I mean AGAINST evil pencils organization; hehe, but that was pretty funny! Or not...hmm. Anyways, we are now the..."Graphite Grinders"! Oh, my gosh, that was terrible. Wow, just wow...Um, ok, how about the "Erasers of Evil"? Hahaha, that's even worse!!! Ok, I need to stop before I get out of control...

****AT****

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Date: 02/24/13 7:11 PM
From: cariomario

O. M. G. I just figured out how I'm ending this! EEEEP! GIRLY SCREAM! YAY!

wait, isn't that supposed to be bad?

OH WHATEVER THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!

AYUGIPI!

cario

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Date: 02/24/13 1:13 PM
From: cariomario

AT:

we should form an organization against evil pencils! That would be really fun... especially when I don't have to be afraid of pencils anymore! I've cracked enough pencils and pens over my knee... especially mechanical pencils!

~cario~

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Date: 02/23/13 10:23 PM
From: AcornTree

Lol, making up words is so much fun, cariomario! I thought you did a good job, though; it made perfect sense! I'm bending the laws of physics a bit for my story too, hehe

Sandybell2, maybe all our pencils are part of some super secret evil organization...*looks at my pencil* I'M ONTO YOU, PENCIL!!

****AT****

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Date: 02/23/13 6:16 PM
From: mvaleria12

@cariomario
Oooohhhh
So she is an execai? Cool!
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Date: 02/23/13 5:23 PM
From: cariomario

Part 35
(Bell's pov)
Waiting. That's all we could do. Dis was thinking, I was walking in circles, and Mikey was playing video games on his Tphone.
Dis: I've got it!
Me: what?
Mikey: a way out of here?
Dis: no, but morpher forcefields are in the shape of a cube, but they only have five sides. That means that there's no forcefield on one of the sides!
Mikey: great, but which one?
Mikey started tapping and looking at all of the sides.
Dis: ummm, Mikey, it's the ground.
Mikey: oooooooh. Right. But then how do we get out?
Dis: Bell, have you ever tried moving this forcefield?
Me: well, no, because it's a forcefield.
Dis: then try it!
I was at first surprised, but then I put my hands out and slowly tried to lift the forcefield. It was extremely heavy for some reason, or it could be that my powers weren't working as usual. I could only lift the forcefield a few inches and it fell back down to the ground.
Mikey: what was that?
Me: I can't lift the forcefield!
Dis: wait, what is that?
Dis pointed to a glowing red bracelet on my wrist.
Me: whoa, how did that get here?
Dis: I think it's using your powers for the forcefield!
Mikey: how does it do that?
Dis: it uses your chi to power the forcefield.
Mikey: that's... Understandable.
Bell: it's not really, is it?
Mikey: nope.
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Date: 02/22/13 10:59 PM
From: cariomario

@mvaleria12:

actually, an execai defines someone with large and controllable amounts of chi. It's not that snowy has an execai, it's that she IS an execai. It's totally made up, by the way. I just liked that word.

cario

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