Ever since I was little, I hated every minute of my life. My parents are passed away and I have to live with my uncle. But he didn't help me one bit. Instead, he has sent me to a private all girls, boarding school, and left me there for two rotten years.
One day, I was just outside the school courtyard, sitting right under the cherry blossom tree. It was no difference to me. People won't bother to play with me , or talk to me. All the girls at school ever want to talk about was the different legends , they heard from the past, about the Night Shadow Ninjas. I groaned every time I heard them talk about it. Give me a break. Mika, the meanest girl at school, is blabbering as always, "I heard that theres a rumor that the last Night Shadow Ninja passes down NSN(night shadow ninja) job to the very next person that is worthy to be it." I groaned. Here we go again. " But it's definitely not Hataru, she's nothing like a NSN." I glared up. Who said that? TBC
@friend1640- The color for her controlling electricity and fire was the color of the fire+electricity. Moon could help Hataru with balance by explaining how she struggled with that same problem when she was mutated, and how she trained herself to balance with her feet instead of with her back. Hope this helps!
~Wildpaw1 out
I would love to add her, Wildpaw1. And there is a part I don't get. By her power, like controlling fire(like that), what was the color about? Also(sorry if I sound a bit bossy) can you tell me how Blaze can help Hataru with her balance training?
Thanks! -Friend1640
Here's mine:
Name:Moonblaze(Moon;Mikey calls her Blaze)
Age:12 moons (1 moon=1 month)
Personality: Sweet, nice, bit hotheaded, thoughtful, shy, EXTREMELY WARY, protective of friends (has no family), jumps from short tempered to slow tempered, and mood swings quickly
Weapons: Claws,teeth,bow+arrow
Eye Color:Cat Form=Left eye-light blue with a tinge of gold;Righteye-dark blue with a tinge of gold & When a mythical creature{unleashed form}=Left eye-Golden with a tinge of light blue;Right eye-Golden with a tinge of dark blue
Looks:Silvery blue fur has crescent moon on forehead that can be seen when looking @ her from right side has crescent shaped scar going across left eye(NOT blind in either eye),when moon shines on her, she "blazes" as bright as the moon + looks like a piece of the moon.
Powers: Can control fire (color=blue), electricity (color=blue), +water. Can also shape shift in2 mythical/extinct animals (can only be done in EXTREME cases of danger because it drains most of her power to 10% is knocked out + vulnerable 4 several hrs until 90% of energy is back)
BTW, I think I 4got 2 put that she?s a mutant about half the size of Donnie
Extra Part: Moonblaze freezes in panic/fear when about to be seriously injured or WORSE.She can cry(sometimes)easily as well:for example when there is a small chance of surviving or one her friends is seriously hurt.Oh,and she would also give herself up if one friend is captured and the captor is asking for someone even more valuable/threatens that friend with worse.
Sorry if too long. Heh heh, whoops. Don?t mind if you tweak anything,or don?t put me in.(If there?s a part you don?t understand, lemme know)
~Wildpaw1 out
Oh yeah. I forgot. I'm accepting one character for the next part of the fan fic. That character is going to help Hataru with her balance training. All I want in the character is:
1. Mikey called that character to help Hataru.(cuz he really wants to help her and stuff)
2. She must know anything to help with balance.(like balancing on balance beams.)
3. And the character can be a mutant(if you want), but she must be able to make herself look human.
Fisrt character I get will be put in the next part. Other characters recieved? I promise I'll try to put them somewhere in the story.Thanks!
-Friend1640
It seemed like forever to wait for Splinter to finish with everybody. After everyone left the training room, he motioned me and Mikey to come towards him. We stepped in front of him. "Hataru," he looked at me," I would like you to spar with Michelangelo." I just nodded, and got in position. Same with Mikey. We waited for Splinter to tell us to begin, then he did."Hajime!" I didn't have my daggers, but at least Mikey didn't have his nunchucks. Somehow, I still struggled. Every time I tried to kick or punch, I stumble backward. As Mikey tried to duck my kick, I made the wrong move and fell. "Ya me!", I heard Splinter shout. THANK GOD! Mikey helped me up, then Splinter told me," Hataru, I believe you are unbalanced. That is why you are always stumbling." I heard that before. My old Sensei told me the same exact thing, he said I wasn't "weighted" right. That's probably why I was always so clumsy. Splinter thought for a moment, then said," Come with me.You too, Michelangelo." Mikey and I followed Splinter into, what looked like an obsticle course. He led us to a part where a bunch of poles sticked out from the ground. "Now, I want you two to fight on top of these poles. And remember to keep your balance." I gulped when Splinter said that. I knew, right away, that I'll fall right off. I got up and did my very best to stay steady. Mikey, just simply stood there waiting. Why can't I do that? "Hajime!" I froze, right on the spot. No way was I ready. I demand a redo! Mikey went from pole to pole, right to me. He did a steady kick, and I ducked. I hopped off to a different pole, and a voice inside my head went, " Is this how a Night Shadow Ninja fights like? Face your opponent and FIGHT!" I groaned and tried to hit back at Mikey. Of course, I was off balanced, so I fell off the pole.On the floor,I muttered,"Yup. That was not a good move."
TBC
As soon as everybody was done training, Master Splinter motioned us to come towards him. We walked up to him and he told me and Mikey to spare. I left to get my daggers, then went back to the training room. I got in position, then Master Splinter(I still call him that because I'm not used to calling anybody else Sensei) said,"Hajime!" I did everything to dodge Mikey's attack, but whenever I tried to attack him, I seem to fall backward ."Ya me!", Splinter said. Mikey helped me up, then I approached Splinter. "Hataru, I believe you are unbalanced." "I am?" "Yes. When you're not balanced, you won't hit your target exactly where you want to." I remember Sensei, telling me the same exact thing, back in Osaka. He told me I was keeping my weight in my back, which is why I'm always so clumsy.Master Splinter suddenly said,"You two, come with me." Mikey and I followed Splinter to what looked like an obsticle course. He lead us to one part where a bunch of poles were sticking out of the ground. Splinter turned to look at us. "Now, I want you two to spare on top of these poles. And remember to keep your balance.", he instructed. We got up, and waited to begin. Mikey was simply waiting, and I was struggling to not fall down. "Hajime!" Uh oh. I'm doomed!
TBC
Me: Your fanfic is so AWESOME!!!!
Mikey: What ya doin?
Me: Nothing....
Mikey: Let me see!!!
Me: Okay I will let you see if you walk into the hallway for 5 seconds.
Mikey: Okay! *he walks into the hallway*
Me: *i shut the door behind him and lock it* Idiot.
Mikey: Hey, I heard that!!!!!
Me: Good that was kinda the point.
Mikey: ......
Me: Anyways your fanfic is awesome keep goin!
THUD! I got up from the floor and sighed. Mikey was doing his very best to teach me how to skateboard, but all I achieved were bruises. Mikey came over to help me up. "Come on.Soon, you'll get it.", he encouraged me. I smiled at him, sympathetically, and shook my head."I don't know. You make it look so easy while I make it look like it's impossible to do.How about we do this some other time and... go train?", I suggested. Mikey's eyes seemed to show disapointment in them, but he nodded, anyway.As we walked off to the training room, I wondered what Mikey was thinking of. I already knew he likes me, but I'm just not ready for a relation ship.
Once we reached the training room, I realized that we couldn't train. Probably because everybody was there,practicing.Master Splinter was the first to spot us."Where have you two, been?", he asked us. I saw him look, directly, at Mikey so I stepped in front of him and said,"Please don't punish him, Splinter. I was the one who asked him to teach me how to ride a skateboard, so it was my fault that he missed training." Master Splinter looked at Mikey and said,"Michelangelo, is this true?" Mikey just nodded. "Very well. I'll train you two after I'm done here.", he went back to Leo, Raph, Donnie,Sky, Alex,and Kit . I saw Alex pout. That's how I know she really meant to turn Mikey into a "mutant turtle pretzel". Looks like I just saved him, right? As we waited for Master Splinter to finish with everyone else, I felt like Mikey was staring at me. I narrowed my eyes at him and he stopped.Please tell me Splinter will train us, soon. I don't want to keep waiting while somebody is staring at me the whole time.
TBC
Sure, PINKninjaz. I would love to check out your fan fic.Here's next part of the story.
After breakfast, everybody seemed to have scrambled off. Donnie went into his lab, Leo turned on the TV to watch his favorite show, Raph is sparing with Alex, Sky is playing a video game with Kit, and Mikey... well I don't know where he is . I sat down and noticed a skateboard by the wall. Oh my gosh , the turtles are lucky. I always wondered what it was like to skateboard and even they can do it. If only Mom and Dad were here, then I could've had one. I shook my head. No, I'm not going to think about my parents. I closed my eyes and tried to wipe away the experience. "What are you doing, Taru?", someone asked me. I opened my eyes to see Mikey, standing right in front of me. I ignored his question and asked, "Did you just call me Taru?" I didn't mean it in a bad way, it's just that nobody ever gave me a nickname before and this was a pretty good one. Mikey nodded, "Yup, naming things is what I do." I smiled and joked,"I'm not a thing, just to let you know. I'm a who." Mikey turned a bit red, then asked,"So do you wanna do something? You can choose." My eyes fell on the skateboard. I desperately wanted to try it out, even though I don't know how to ride. Mikey caught sight of my eyes and said, "You wanna ride?" I hesitated. "Yeah, but I don't know how." "No problem, I can teach you.", he told me. I brightened up. Wow, he really wants to teach me."Okay!", I said. Mikey handed me a board and we raced off to a tunnel where we can ride. For the first time ever, I feel like I'm at a home that is perfect for me.
TBC
I was having a hard time, sleeping. There were nightmares about my parents death and me, watching it. My whole mind felt like its going to burst.Why do I need to remember this?I woke up to hear a knock at the door.It was Mikey."Are you getting up, breakfast is ready.",he told me.I gave him a small smile."Yeah,I'll be there.",I replied.Mikey closed my door and I got dressed. All of my clothes were black so it wasn't hard to choose.I'm not goth or anything, black is just...me.I don't think I need my daggers, so I left them. As I walked down to the kitchen, Kit rushed over."You seem moody,"she told me.I shrugged.I'm usually like that . How would you handle,being a child with no parents?I don't know where the heck is my uncle,so does that mean I'm an orphan? When we reached the kitchen,a strange looking food was on the table.Every body had a slice and the box in the center is empty. I guess they ate it all. "What are you guys, eating?",I asked."Pizza. Ya want some?",Mikey asked me and Kit. Kit and I nodded. Mikey gave me an extra slice from his plate and snatched an unbitten slice from Alex! I wouldn't take a pizza from anybody and Alex took it the hard way."You are gonna be so sorry you did that,Mikey.When training comes, you'll be the world's first mutant turtle pretzel."she growled. I don't know what she said next, I was too busy, eating my slice of pizza.It was so good! When I finished eating,I asked Mikey if there's any more. He stole a slice from Raph(It wasn't bitten) and handed it to me."Thanks."I gushed and ate it. I just didn't notice Mikey,running from Raph. TBC
P.S: Thank you, seawolf101!
I love this Fan-Fic!!! I hope she starts dating mikey or it will break his poor heart. And please id love for u to check out my fanfic please its calle My Boyfriend is a Turtle... (my first fan-fic) Thnx!!!! Love this story!!!!
Did Mikey just...compliment me?Mikey seemed to be blushing and quickly said,"I mean black seems to be a nice color on you." I looked down.Yes.Black is definitely me.It shows my life experience:sadness and sorrow."So,Sensei.If Hataru and Kit are staying,shouldn't we show them to some empty rooms?",Mikey asked.Master Splinter nodded,"Very well.Why don't you show them to some spare rooms?"Mikey smiled, widely and lead us off.Mikey told Kit where one room was, then Mikey showed me to another.When I walked in,I have to admit it was pretty nice.The only thing that bothered me was the mirror.I stared at my reflection.A voice inside my head was asking,"Why?Why did you have to change?This isn't like you." I blinked, then took down the mirror."Thanks,Mikey.I'll start unpacking my things.",I told him.Mikey hesitated, then walked out. "So close,"I heard him mutter outside my door.Huh?Why does it seem like Mikey wants to hang out with me?Does he...like me? TBC
@Readers: Sorry, everyone if my story is going at a short pace.I wish I can type longer paragraphs cuz it's taking me forever.I'll try to write any time I'm free.This time, I'm sticking to one fan fic at a time.
I stared at Donnie.Did I really sound like Raph?It was weird, I had this same feeling in boarding school, before I recieved the pendent.I stared down at the pendent in my hand.Master Splinter caught sight of it."The Night Shadow Ninja.",he whispered.I stared at him.How many people knew about the NSN?Alex seemed to be reading my mind."There were other Night Shadow Ninjas before you.It's passed down from generation to generation." Master Splinter added,"The pendent is a special charm to help the Night Shadow Ninja become a success.It gives huge strength to many things.Fighting techniques, bravery.I also believe it gave you the strength to block your anger." Is all of this true?Maybe the NSN isn't just an ordinary ninja.Sky seemed to be laughing,"Not only are you the NSN, but you're dressed like one." I peered down at my outfit.Everything I ever wear is black."Either way,I like it,"Mikey told me.I stared at him. What did he just say to me? TBC
I just found this and I'll tell you what I think... It's TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!! You better continue because if you don't I will cry. This story is really different from ithers I've read and I like it.
I felt like yelling for help, but Kit was the one freaking out. "OMG! A GIANT RAT!!!!!", she shrieked. I had to cover my ears for how loud she shouted. Then, I said,"Um, I don't think he's going to hurt us." Kit calmed down then said, "Okay, but still, who is he?" I don't know the answer to that.At least the orange masked turtle told us,"That's our Sensei, Master Splinter." I couldn't help wonder why it looked like he was mostly talking to me instead of Kit. Oh well.
Man,I've only been here for like three minutes, and I learned all their names. It was a lot for me to remember, but I think I can manage it. "Hey, nice pendent. Can I see?",Donnie asked.A hand went by my neck and my pendent was gone. A weird feeling rushed over me, and I felt my strength drain out of me.I glared at Donnie and yelled,"GIVE IT BACK!THAT'S MINE!" Do people really enjoy teasing me? Donnie dropped it on the floor, then I picked it up."What the...you sounded just like Raph." Did I? TBC
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