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Date: 06/15/14 12:31 PM
From: sawsara

In this fanfic Raph is in a band called Dark Star. So keep your eyes peeled for names like Lacey(Raph's girlfriend), Zeni or Zenadiya, Vici, Eli, Gordon, Derek or Mitch. This also includes other characters. So keep your eyes peeled for other OC names.
(Raph just showed up for band practice)
Raph: Hey guys.
Lacey: RAPH!(runs over to him)I GOT SOME GOOD NEWS!
Raph: Okay! Lacey, calm down! You look like your having a heart attack.
Lacey: Read this!(gives him one of the seven letters)
Note: Dear Raphael Yoshi from Dark Star,
You and your band has been entered in the Manhattan, New York, Teen Band, Music Contest! On June 16th, you and your band will perform on stage to compete against other bands in New York! The prize...the title for "Best Band Of The Year!" We wish you the best of luck.
Host, Richard Benson.
Raph: WHAT?!? OH MY GOSH! THIS IS AMAZING!
To Be Continued...
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Date: 07/14/14 12:16 PM
From: sevenellev

yeah I like it but raphy poo is already mine!!!
oh and continue it is awesome!
Seven Ellev Raph
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Date: 07/11/14 3:35 PM
From: Kunoichi12

KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SUSPENSE-FILLED
AND YES! I KNOW I'VE JUST POSTED LIKE, 5 MINS AGO BUT PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!
Kunoichi12 out!!!! :)
#APRITELLO4EVER!!!
#CAPRIL4NEVER!!!
#BEANOPTIMIST
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Date: 07/11/14 3:30 PM
From: Kunoichi12

Ok, I like it but one thing. RAPH IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kunoichi12 out!!!! :)
#APRITELLO4EVER!!!
#CAPRIL4NEVER!!!
#BEANOPTIMIST
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Date: 06/27/14 8:01 AM
From: sawsara

(later)
Eli: So what song are we gonna do for the first round Lacey?
Lacey: Hm...I'm think maybe we could do Error.
Mitch: Wait, isn't the new song? Don't you think we haven't practiced that one enough?
Raph: Come on Mitch! We all practiced all night for this and you haven't had time to do Error?
Mitch: I was too focused on Love Is War and Remote Control!
Raph: Dude, you mastered those already!
Lacey: Guys! You don't have to fight about this! Lets just try to win so me and Raph don't have to break up, okay?
Richard: Okay, time for Round 1! Dark Star and Wishing Well please come up!
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/20/14 4:00 PM
From: sawsara

Daniel: You know you said that backwards right?
Raph: I wasn't saying it backwards Daniel! Me, Lacey and the rest of Dark Star are gonna make it, ALL, THE WAY, TO THE END!!!
Daniel: YOU KNOW WHAT?!? LETS JUST GO RIGHT NOW!!!(takes off his shirt ands gets ready to fight)
Raph: (rips of the sleeves of his disguise shirt and gets ready to fight)
Vici, Zeni, Mitch, Lacey, Eli, Gordon and Derek(Raph's best friend): (pull Raph away)
Gina, Gregory, Brock, Nathan, Miranda and Tammy: (pull Daniel away)
Daniel: SEE YOU LATER RAPHAEL YOSHI!!!
Raph: WHATEVER DANIEL STEELFLEX!!! YOU ARE SO GOING DOWN!!! I HATE THAT GUY SO MUCH!
Eli: Raph, hate's a strong word dude.
Raph: Sorry. It's just what he did in the past. And I think I made a huge mistake on making that bet. How am I gonna be able to break up with Lacey with I lose the bet? We have to win this.
Derek: And we're gonna win this. 'Cause we're Dark Star!
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/19/14 2:52 PM
From: sawsara

Raph: You really think you can beat us? We've been practicing ever since we got the note saying we've been entered! What have you been doing?
Daniel: We were practicing all NIGHT for this! Okay, if we are so stoked about this, lets sweeten up the deal.
Raph: What do you mean "sweeten up the deal?"
Daniel: Let's do a bet. The loser has to break up with his girlfriend.
Raph and Lacey: WHAT?!? DO YOU EVEN HAVE A GIRLFRIEND?!?
Daniel: Actually I do.
Raph: Who?
(a girl pops up from behide Daniel)
Girl: Me!
Lacey: (gasp)Gina?
Gina: Lacey? It's been so long!(hugs her)
Raph: No way! There is NO WAY I'm breaking up with Lacey!
Daniel: Okay, either that or he has to face his worst fear.
Raph: (wide eyed)Fine! Loser breaks up with his girlfriend.
Daniel: Deal! But until then, I don't want you and your band anywhere near Dangerlicious! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?!?
Raph: Oh your clear alright, your clearly gonna lose! To me and Dark Star!
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/19/14 11:53 AM
From: Yuppy23

This is so interesting. Go Dark Star!
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Date: 06/18/14 8:13 PM
From: sawsara

(still in the flashback)
Ivy: Hee hee hee! Nice one Raph.
(outside)
Daniel: (talking with the people in his band)So what should I do?
Gregory: What I did with this girl named Raina I split them up by making one or the other think that they did something terrible to them. All we need is a turtle costume and another girl.
Daniel: Greg, that's genius!
(two weeks later)
Raph: Ivy! It's not what you think!
Ivy: I-I can't believe this! Are we just playing? IS THIS A GAME TO YOU?!?
(end of flashback)
Raph: Thanks to him and his friends I almost lost her. But then she had to leave for college. Four days later I found you.
Lacey: I can't believe he tried to split you and Ivy up. Because I mean if he tries to do this with us, he won't know what hit him.
Daniel: I'm just here to beat you and your STUPID band and win this contest!
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/18/14 2:52 PM
From: sawsara

To karai6353: Don't you see the names Leo, Donnie, Raph and Mikey? If you didn't those are the turtles nicknames! Plus a lot of weird stuff happens in my fanfics.
Raph: Uh. Hey Daniel.
Daniel: So I see you found yourself another girl, eh? What happened to Ivy? Break-up?
Lacey: Wait, what's he talking about?
Raph: You see my previous girlfriend Ivy Levy went to college and then I found you. But when I was with Ivy I wasn't the only one with the crush.
(flashback)
Raph and Daniel: (in the middle of a fight at Ivy's house)
Ivy: Guys! I know I can only pick one-
Daniel: How about I pick HIM up and throw him right out that door?
Raph: Oh I would love to see you try!
Ivy: GUYS! Look, you see...(blushes)I really had a crush on Raph from the start so...I guess I choose him.
Daniel: YOU ONE THIS TIME RAPHAEL. BUT I SWEAR, I WILL-
Raph: (pushes him out of Ivy's apartment)You'll what? Get a face full of door?(slams the door)
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/18/14 3:34 AM
From: Raphfan17

Please make more its freaking me out!!!Who is Daniel!?!?!A
band arch enemy?!?!?PPLEEEAAAASSSEEEE MAKE MORE!!!!!
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Date: 06/17/14 10:43 PM
From: karai6353

what does that have to do with TMNT???
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Date: 06/17/14 4:40 PM
From: sawsara

To Elsa596: Thanks for the support. Plus two things. One, awesome name. Two, if you are a Leo fangirl, you don't wanna know what happens near the end.
Raph: Anytime Lacey.
Richard: Hey there! I'm your host Richard Benson, and welcome to the "Manhattan, New York Teen Music Contest!" This year we have eight bands. Two bands will compete against each other and which ever band gets the most points from our judges will move onto the next round. In the third round the two final bands will compete and which ever wins gets the title "Best Band Of The Year! Here are the names of the eight bands: Wishing Well, Extreme Exterminator, The Magic Wands, The Dreamers, Dangerlicious, Rap Attack, Dark Star and The Black Holes. We wish all the bands best of luck!
Raph: Wait...Dangerlicious? That means...!
Daniel: So Raphael, we meet again.
To Be Continued...
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Date: 06/17/14 3:59 PM
From: arks123

me:MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE?
person on tv: TMNT fans are going on a rampage because they want more of a fanfic created by sawsara run for your life it will only be a matter of time until they get in the sewers!
me: *looks around sewer tunnel* uh oh
fans: *runs in screaming*
me: AAAAHHH!!!!!*runs for dear life* please make more! so they calm down!
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Date: 06/16/14 6:59 PM
From: Elsa596

More!
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Date: 06/16/14 3:33 PM
From: sawsara

(later after practice)
Raph: Guys! Come look at this!
Donnie: (comes out of the lab)Look at what?
Raph: (shows them the note)
Mikey: (chokes on the pizza he was eating)
Leo: (whacks Mikey on the back to stop the choking)
Leo, Donnie & Mikey: WHAT?!?
Raph: I know! Lacey got these in the mail this morning.
Donnie: It says that the contest is on June 16th. That's tomorrow!
Raph: WHAT?!?!?(runs over to his drumset(remember in "Slash & Destroy"))I GOTTA GET PRACTICING!!!
(the next day at the contest)
Lacey: (looking at all the people out there sweating like crazy)Oh my gosh. How are we gonna do this?
Raph: What's wrong?
Lacey: We've never had a crowd like this before.
Raph: Lacey, you can do it. I know you can.
Lacey: Your right. Thanks Raph.
To Be Continued...
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