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Little thief''fanfic''

Date: 01/17/13 7:20 PM
From: fefecat801

moncia's pov
I ran as fast as I can. my white boots made a hard tink!tink! sound on the ground. I look back to see trey a S.T.O.R.M worker A.K.A my father. ''just give it up moncia!'' he said. I let out a sharp growl. ''ya right boo! you think am just gonna lay my cards on the table and call it a day? well you got it all wrong! even if you are my father I'll never give up my thefing ways!'' I said. I put my beatiful smirk on. '' I mean how did I get my thefing ways?'' I said. ''moncia if you won't come with me...then I'll take you by force!'' he said grabing my wrist. ''ah! what the heck are you doing!?'' I said. I bit hes wrist makeing him lose his hold. I jump on a pole to a window and to the top of the apartment. I put my boot on the up in victory. I use my victory laught to my prey. '' Don't you get it? Your my prey! No one can get moncia!'' I said jumping from building to building. hey I can't help it if am a little thief. I put a smirk on my face. to me everyone is my prey and am ready to attck them in seconds.TBC.
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Date: 05/23/13 2:18 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

A dire wolf who is half asleep!
RAFO, it's a way of life.

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Date: 05/22/13 8:44 PM
From: fefecat801

am back! I almost forgot!
chase's pov
I hurry over to get the girl.sure she was rude and mean and maybe cold hearted but no one should ever go that way. I fanilly grad the girl. I look closely at her. red hair in long ponytail. snake like eyes like dax but bigger, and sharp teeth like fangs. ''wow her looks matches her attuide.'' I thought. she open her eyes looking out me. she hissed and quickly push herself away from me. ''what did you think your doing!?'' she said. ''saving your life!'' I said. ''I didn't want to be saved!'' she said. ''didn't want to be saved! so you rather fall or be saved?'' I said. ''sorry but it's not everyday some strange boy comes up and saves me!'' she said showing her fangs. this girl was like a anger lion. she has alot of pride I'll gave her that. ''why!?'' I said. ''why what?'' she said. ''why do you hate everything!? it's like you hate everything you see! what is wrong with you!?!'' I said. she was about to rely when she her eyes change from anger to saddens. she growl under her breath. ''what do you want to know!?! gah am out of here!'' she said running. ''oh no.' I said. I gone to far. ''come back!'' I said running for her.TBC.
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Date: 05/03/13 5:32 PM
From: 65GOHANS

I also a character that is Trey's daughter, She's shy.

"If life is a game they say i can't win, I"ll never amount to nothing." (Line from Yu-Gi-Oh! Zexal theme song.)

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Date: 04/26/13 8:45 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

A dire wolf who loves this story!
RAFO, it's a way of life.

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Date: 04/26/13 3:05 PM
From: fefecat801

Sorry am late! Now where was I?
Chase?s pov
I look at the red headed girl, she look like she was close to tears hitting the ground hard. I felted so sorry for her. I look up at the building to see what was going on.
Monica?s pov
I stop hitting the ground and sob in my hands. This was too much for me to handle . It was an embarrassment to lose to a man who JUST started to use a core. I yelled at the sky as my pony tail whipped back. ??NOOOOOO!?? I yelled getting up. I laugh insanely at the man. My snake like eyes showing that am now in my insane mode. ??y-you think am g-going down THAT easily!? Am t-the queen o-of fire! No one will stand in my way!?? I said laughing insanely. ??but you lost.?? He said. I just laugh even more. ??you s-still don?t get it do you!? I?ll go down?BUT NOT WITH YOU!?? I said insanely. I step back a few steps. ??what are you doing!??? he said shocked. I just step back some more until I felted the tip of the building. ??Monica!? Monica stop!??? he said. ???bye bye daddy.?? I said falling back filling the cold air on my back. ?? goodbye daddy??? I whisper closing my eyes.
Chase?s pov
My eyes widen as I saw the girl falling down. I couldn?t believe she just fell down of a 4 stories building! She was insane! I ran over to get the girl. ??chase what are you doing!??? jinja said. ??I need to save her!?? I said as I haled my arms to get her. ??come one! Close!?? I said.TBC.
This. Was?THE BEST IDEA EVER!XD
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Date: 04/08/13 9:27 PM
From: fefecat801

DON'T WORRY THE NEXT CHAPTER STARTS ON FIRDAY!...IF I HAVE TIME...
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Date: 03/17/13 12:15 AM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Star Wolf
Edme
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 03/16/13 9:37 AM
From: fefecat801

well I forgot the moves to the core so I just with on the wiki. sorry for being late. oh and plus it only show two moves! :( well this is gonna be short.

moncia's pov
''thermal fireslash!'' I said. the monsuno rolled over turning into a ball of fire but blackbullet just fell up as thermal turn over into its normal form. ''ooh that is so wrong!'' I said. I jump up on a window then got up to the top of the apartment building. '' thermal come!'' I said. as the large bear/bat monsuno use its claws to come up. with she(yes I made it a she) got up I thought of a move. ''alright lets go with take down!'' I said. as the monsuno back up and jump of the building pulling blackbullet down with it. I look down to see blackbullet trying to get out of thermal's grip. ''you should have call a move old man just got to take on move blast and blackbullet is done.'' I said. ''thats what you thing. blackbuttet sonic rain!'' he said. thermal shot off blackbullet and slam into the ground. ''what!'' I said. she got back in her core in defeat. ''what!?'' I said. I fell to my knees shock. I never lost. even if it's combat I never lost. I then snapped. I but my hands on my head.''NOOOOOOO!'' I said. ''games over moncia.'' he said. ''you lost.'' trey said.

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Date: 03/15/13 11:06 AM
From: fefecat801

well I forgot the moves to the core so I just with on the wiki. sorry for being late. oh and plus it only show two moves! :( well this is gonna be short.

moncia's pov
''thermal fireslash!'' I said. the monsuno rolled over turning into a ball of fire but blackbullet just fell up as thermal turn over into its normal form. ''ooh that is so wrong!'' I said. I jump up on a window then got up to the top of the apartment building. '' thermal come!'' I said. as the large bear/bat monsuno use its claws to come up. with she(yes I made it a she) got up I thought of a move. ''alright lets go with take down!'' I said. as the monsuno back up and jump of the building pulling blackbullet down with it. I look down to see blackbullet trying to get out of thermal's grip. ''you should have call a move old man just got to take on move blast and blackbullet is done.'' I said. ''thats what you thing. blackbuttet sonic rain!'' he said. thermal shot off blackbullet and slam into the ground. ''what!'' I said. she got back in her core in defeat. ''what!?'' I said. I fell to my knees shock. I never lost. even if it's combat I never lost. I then snapped. I but my hands on my head.''NOOOOOOO!'' I said. ''games over moncia.'' he said. ''you lost.'' trey said.

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Date: 02/28/13 4:15 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter! And you spell business like that, and yes Trey's MONSUNO is Black-bullet, bullet is spelled like that, hope i helped!

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who wants to help and loves this story!

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Date: 02/27/13 10:13 PM
From: fefecat801

I sharply turn around. ''you! what the heck are you doing here?! this is my business not yours!''' I growled. ''I just want to see what my baby girl was doing.'' he said. I rolled my eyes. ''please. who do you think I am? you just track me down didn't you? you're always doing that! stay out of my life am old often to be on my own!'' I said yelled. ''what is going on..'' I turn my head to the boy. ''QUIET! THIS IS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS! STAY OUT OF THIS AND STAY OUT OF MY WAY!!'' I yelled. I turn back to my dad. if you want to know anything about me one thing is that when am really mad I go into anger mode. I took out my core thermal which was as you may have guess red and black. '' if you want play then face the fire!'' I said. ''thermal lunch!'' I said. ''find moncia. as if you'll want me to live without a battle. blackbuttle launch!'' he said as both cores hit each other. ''oh ya. this just got real.'' I said.TBC.
okay so I can't spell business and I forgot what core he had so I took a guess. is it black buttle? oh and I can't spell buttle either. am so bad a words. plus
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Date: 02/17/13 5:20 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Star Wolf
A dire wolf who loves this story!

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Date: 02/16/13 1:49 PM
From: fefecat801

Moncia's pov
I was scare I didn't know what to do. ''wait? am moncia! I can handle some dumb kids.'' I thought as I jump up and was now behind the group of kids. ''the names moncia trashbags! if you want your friend to live I think you should pick him up and take your trash. this in my city I own this streets. if you want to play ittle games then get ready for me.'' I said sharping my claws. ''listen red! you don't own anything! if you hurt my firends then your in a world of trouble!'' a long hair girl said all up in my face. my temper then with up as I push the girl back grading her by her hair and throwing her to the ground. ''and you don't own me either.now play dead sweety.'' I said puting my hand on my hip. ''your nuts! your just a thief!'' the boy with black hair said. I smirked. ''why thank you.'' I said with my head tilted. I started to say something until I here someone walking up to me. ''well well moncia looks like you got in a lot of trouble. beating up two kids has got your pride up.'' a man said. but not just any man...my father.TBC.
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Date: 01/30/13 5:17 PM
From: fefecat801

me:thanks! why do I miss that?
anna:I don't know its your stuff.
not poseing yet. DANG IT WRITERS BLOCK!
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Date: 01/29/13 4:29 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter! You keep spelling I'm and his wrong, not to bug you or anything, just thought I should mention it.

Star Wolf

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Date: 01/28/13 7:16 PM
From: fefecat801

Moncia's pov
I landed a sharp kick at his neck but he grab my leg and threw me to the wall but I jump allway from the wall and landed right on my feet. ''hm! you think you can mess with a thief? I've been kicking butt when I was just 4 years old you moron!'' I said pulling out my whip. ''hmm?'' he said looking right at me eyes. ''what so my eyes are dark blue got something to say?'' I asked. ''hmm.you look just like trey? is he your father or something?'' he asked. I put my head down. ''how could just a look in the eyes tell am his daughter?sure my eyes are big but its impossibe to see the puipls.'' I thought. ''so I am! I something to say about that!?'' I yelled. ''he..he mention you before. ya he said you were a trouble maker and you cut him on hes arm.'' he said. I rolled my eyes at my father's words. so he thought I was a trouble maker I don't care. he was the one who turn be into what I am. ''he also said he cares about your safey. he always with on about how proud he felt because of you.'' he said. my eyes glow with proundness. ''h-he said that?'' I thought. ''really?'' I said. ''yep...to bad he was wrong. your not beatiful as he said snakeeyes. he shouldn't be proud of you.'' he said with a smirk. my eyes then glow with anger. my claws then came out.''how...how dare you!?'' I yelled smacking my whip at hes waist then at hes face. he felled on the ground. I walk over to him smugly. ''get up fool!'' I said kicking hes back. he didn't move. he wasn't dead just knock out. I look down to see a large cut on his face. I almost cry alittle. ''hello..'' I said. I grad my whip and ride for it hopeing no one saw me untill I bump into his firends. this time I was the one who was corner.TBC.
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Date: 01/24/13 4:37 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Star Wolf

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Date: 01/23/13 8:50 PM
From: fefecat801

Moncia's pov
I had a close eye on my prey for a while. but want I was I did steal some stuff some kids left. my prey was very dumb to spilt up in this dumb town. I with after my prey. staking him like a cougar. he then with into a dead end. ''yes! if he can move like me he can never easape!'' I said. I quickly jump off the buiding to the dead end. he couldn't easape. ''hehehehe....my prey has fanilly been supid to walk into a dead end.hehehe....how shameful.'' I said. I took a good look at him. he look like any bad kid would look like but I could see something on his belt. there were monsunos. they were all blue execpt one green one. it look like it was metal. ''well well well look what we have here.'' I said. he look like he was a about to pull one out but I was quicker than he was so I grad the hole belt. I move it side by side. showing that I was more smarter then him. but if I was smarter I wouldn't be out in the sreets stealing stuff. ''now lets see what we got here? ooh! green was always my frv color.'' I said. I threw the belt on the ground I quickly left untill he grad my boot. I let out a little hiss for him to stay away. ''oh no. you not going any where!'' the strange boy said. I then jump back on the ground. ''then the names moncia! moncia stormfly!'' I said. ''dax.'' he said. TBC.
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Date: 01/20/13 12:12 PM
From: faloan123

Great last chapter!

Faloan123

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Date: 01/19/13 8:21 PM
From: fefecat801

Monica's pov
when I got home I threw my backpack on the couch and sat in my chair. I lot out a big sign. ''woof. what a day with stealing.'' I said. I with threw my bag of steals. all was in there was a 67 year old man's wallet, a dagger, a gold watch, and a hello kitty necklace I took right off a 4 year olds neck, a whip, and a lots more junk. I could use the weapons. '' hmm. worthless,trash, hmm good for a weapon but no, ooh look what we have here.'' I said pulling out my old mans old monsuno. I stare at it for a while. some how it brought my temper up. I want to throw it out of my 2th floor but I just put it in my belt. then my speakers caught up a group of people. ''hmm. wonder if there rich?'' I said I there up the speakers. they group of people said they were coming into town. one of them had a strange accent so I thought that he was the prey.''and now its time for the beast to chase down its prey.'' I said with a big smirk on my face.TBC.
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