I stop at a river. pouring water on my face leting it drip into my hair. this can't be happen! I look down at the water. long red hair,dirt on my face and now rip jeans.I shook my head. ''this stinks.'' I said. ''hello?'' a girl said. I turn my head to see a girl with red short hair in a mowhawk with blue streaks blue tanks top, rip jeans, and red sneakers. on her head was a red and blue cap.''who are you?'' I said. ''alice ace just call me AJ.'' she said. ''ace? oh your john ace's child? you don't look like it.'' I said. she took off her hat and she pull back her hair to see a blonde hair under her hair. ''I dye it.'' AJ said. ''why are you here AJ?'' I said. ''am looking for my dad. I miss him.'' AJ said. ''well his not here.anna.'' I said. ''ya I know anna I saw the inferno.'' AJ said. we both just laught it out. I was happy to see someone like AJ. ''anna!'' chase yelled. I turn around to see chase and dax and Aaron comeing. when chase come up to us he stop and look at AJ. I could red on his. ''oh looks like chase is in love.'' I thought. ''Aaron his the fire out?'' I asked. he shook his head. ''no not yet. but don't worry he'll be okay.'' Aaron said. ''hey whos flare?'' dax said. AJ rolled her eyes. '' my name is not flare its AJ.'' she said. ''I move my hair. don't worry I'll get over it Aaron. right now we need to get out off here.'' I said. ''am comeing with ya'll.'' AJ said. I took her hat a put it on. ''don't worry you'll be sorry soon.'' I said. AJ took back her hat a laught while I laught to. I have a feeling we're gonna be good firends.TBC.
I don't like this to much but I hope starwolf would help on this. soon I thing dax will kiss anna and maybe chase will kiss AJ soon. just hope I can think of a better chapter.
Chapter 16
Anna?s POV
?You can?t win,? Marcus laughed again.
?Yes I can,? My voice faltered, my throat burned.
?Smoke-fire!? Marcus commanded, and Wanted sent out a thick blanket of smoke. It made me choke even more, and my eyes stung.
?Blackmist, Air-clear!? I could barely utter the words, my voice was getting quieter and quieter. As the smoke cleared, Wanted attacked Blackmist, pinning her to the ground and letting long claws dig into her shoulders. ?Blackmist!? I cried as she returned to her core in a blue mist.
?Weaker than I thought,? Marcus smirked.
?I?m not weak,? I growled, barely able to speak by now.
?Weakling,? Marcus enjoyed seeing me on my knees.
?I?m not weak!? I managed a little louder.
?Yes you are,? Marcus grinned cruelly.
?Stop it,? I growled, my voice hoarse and weak.
?You?re weak, and you know it,? He smirked.
?NO I?M NOT! STOP IT!? I shouted with enough ferocity to make him fall back. I reached to my belt, but I realized both of my cores had been exhausted for now, I had to give them an hour before I could send either out again. Marcus took my moment of distraction to attack. He tackled me to the ground and tied my hands.
?And by the way, your precious friends aren?t still alive, we knew you?d send them to help AJ, and caught them,? His breath was hot on my ear and his words sent chills up my legs and spine.
?No, they can?t be dead,? I trembled, fear, exhaustion, pain, and hunger finally caught up to me. I hadn?t slept or eaten in two days, I was scared out of my mind, and my throat hurt so bad I could hardly keep from crying.
?Better get used to being alone, your father is dead as well, and your brother, and AJ, and Chase, and Bren, and Jinja, and your boyfriend Dax,? Marcus laughed hauling me to my feet and harshly shoving me forward.

''you jerk!'' I choaked out. I got out my new core this time. ''blackmist launch!''I choaked out. ''wanted launch!'' marus said. as both cores hit eachother. lights or red and orange with threw the buliding. suddenly marus just fell out laugh. I glared at him. seeing him holding his head laughing. ''what the heck!? what's so funny blondie!?!'' I choaked out choughing by trying to make my voice sound firece. ''that you thing you can win! I mean look at you! look at your clothes! my sister's hair is more cleaner then that!'' he laugh. I growled. this boy was trying to make me mad but I won't let his taunts get in my way! ''quick talking you morn!'' I choaked out. trying to clear my troat. ''if you say so.'' he said before chuckleing. ''blackmist use tailwhip!'' I said. the large goat/deer jumped up whiping her tail on wanted's head. ''hmp! weak move.just for a girl like you!'' he taunted. I growled. this was going to be harder then it looks.TBC.
CHAPTER 14
Anna?s POV
?You won this time, but I can?t guarantee you?ll be able to find any of your friends,? Hina grinned evilly, her eyes not showing any sign of emotion. Panic flooded through me, and I couldn?t help but wonder if they had captured my friends or worse. I couldn?t help but panic, I mean, they had Dax and the others.
?If you?ve hurt them, even one bit, I?ll kill you and everyone you hold dear,? I growled, pure anger made my gut feel hot and my fingers feel numb.
?I can only promise where they aren?t, not their safety or their current location. See ya,? Hina waved as she ran gracefully off, disappearing into the trees.
?DAX! AARON! CHASE! BEYAL! BREN! JINJA! WHERE ARE YOU GUYS?!? I shouted, my throat sore and my voice hoarse from shouting for so long. I had gotten to where I had last seen AJ, but the entire place was abandoned. ?DAX-? My voice suddenly stopped and I began to cough violently. ?Dax! Chase! Aaron! Beyal, Bren, Jinja, where are you?? My voice was now so hoarse I couldn?t speak. I had been looking around for the past two hours and still there was nothing.
?Looks like the pest finally lost her voice,? A masculine voice spoke up behind me, causing me to jump. ?I was certain that my sis had finished ya,? A smug looking young man grinned, his dirty blonde hair was messed up.
?Who are you?? I managed to croak, my throat raw and irritated.
?I?m Marcus, and if you think your pitiful friends can beat us, you?re dead wrong,? His eyes glinted dangerously as he held a core up next to his cheek, getting ready to pull his arm back and spin out.

CHAPTER 13
Anna?s POV I?ll just have to risk it now! I thought, looking around through the smoke, trying to spot movement, something to aim for. ?Spiderclaw, White-starlight!? I commanded, and with a blast of light the smoke was gone. ?Now use-?
?Hazard, use Fire-blasts!? Hina called, and Hazard attacked Spiderclaw.
?Spiderclaw, use Poison-thorns!? I shrieked, hoping Spiderclaw could make it through one more attack. I swallowed, hoping to suppress the fear rising in my chest.
?Hazard, dodge,? Hina threw her hand to the side in boredom as she gave the command.
?Spiderclaw,? I was using a last ditch effort attack, ?Use Sacrifice-fire!?
?I?ve never seen you use that move,? Hina now seemed interested. Spiderclaw shot forward, fire surrounding her. She jumped at Hazard, crashing into her and sending her back to her core, and then returned to her core.

''alright blondie let's play!'' I said. ''hmph!'' hina said. ''sidper claw razor slash!'' I said. the large dragon sidper monsuno ran at hazard and sank her claws into hazard's back making hazard fall down. hazard got up whiping it's dragon tail around. ''it's that going to scare me? hazard black mist shadow!'' hina yelled. hazard shot out smoke from his mouth making the hole area black with smoke. I grunted. ''gah! I can't see!'' I said. ''thats the ponit red!'' hina said. ''now hazard destroy that trash with black star!'' she yelled. all I could was a blast of bright light hiting sidperclaw making her fall to the ground. ''NO!'' I yelled. ''sidperclaw get up!'' I yelled. the dragon part sipder monsuno slowly got up leting out a low growl. hina laugh. ''don't you see. that isn't going to get your monsuno any good. you can't see so you won''t know were to look for hazard. and hazard is black so he can perfectly wonder around the smoke. so your finshing kid.'' hina said. I grunted. ''stupid hina! why can't you just shut your trap!'' I though. I got one strong move that can knock her monsuno out. ''lets she I could use white starlight to block out the smoke then use poison thorns to knock her monsuno out. but when do I know when to use it?'' I thought.TBC.
CHAPTER 11
Anna?s POV
?You sound like you expect me to tell you,? Hina laughed, walking slowly over and picking up her scarf before I stepped on it.
?Yes, I do expect you to tell me,? I growled. ?And for your sake you should talk.? I added.
?Is that a threat, or a challenge?? Hina smirked.
?Both,? I tilted my head to the side cockily.
?Challenge accepted, I guess you had a reason for surrendering though,? Hina laughed.
?I did have my reasons, to keep my friends safe, didn?t want them caught in the crossfire. So I was waiting to send them away,? I grinned, now I could fight all out. I cracked my knuckles before getting out Spiderclaw?s core.
?Good plan,? Hina laughed, pulling out Hazard?s core.
?Spiderclaw,? I called.
?Hazard,? Hina called.
?LAUNCH!? We shouted in unison.

it's okay! I almost forgot about littlw theif. -_-.
hina laugh evily. ''I knew it! your so weak!'' hina taunted laughing. she pulled out the hand cuffs. ''well time to go! thats to you I may be a bigger part.'' she said. ''sidperclaw return.'' I said as it with back in its core. ''hazard return.'' hina said. ''I got to aidmitted red. you got alot pride.but that's all am giveing you.'' she said. steping closer. ''thats right hina.'' I thought. I soon as she got closer I grad her wist thrower over my shoulder making her hit bran. ''oops!sorry!'' I said as aaron sweat drop. hina got up taking off her scraf. ''how dare you lay a finger on my you little annoy BRAT!'' hina said throwing her scraf in the oppsite direction. ''well you look like your in your teens to so who is the brat.'' I asked.hina got up and but her hand on her belt. ''you will be sorry you ever mess with me.'' she said. ''aaron go north from here and find AJ!'' I said. ''bring everyone with you!'' I said. ''b-but anna...'' dax said looking shock. ''GO!'' I growled. everyone following aaron. ''so getting rid of your loser friends is going to help you?'' hina said. ''no. I just want to ask you some questions. first off...what did you do with my father?!'' I said.
CHAPTER 9
Anna?s POV
?Bring it,? I growled, getting Spiderclaw?s core out. ?Spiderclaw, launch!? I spun it out.
?Hazard, launch!? Hina spun out Hazard?s core. As the cores hit each other, there was a blinding flash of blue and yellow light as both monsuno appeared.
?Hazard, power drain!? Hina called.
?Spiderclaw, poison scratch!? I called, watching the two monsuno attack one another. This was a fight for more than just winning, this a fight for saving my friends. I watched as Spiderclaw?s health was drained, and I couldn?t think of any move to help. ?Spiderclaw, toxic bite!? I called, Spiderclaw turned on Hazard and sank his teeth into Hazard?s shoulder, toxins slowly leaking into him.
?Hazard, attack return!? Hina called, and Hazard turned the attack on Spiderclaw.
?This is looking bad,? I breathed.
?Do you give up?? Hina laughed.
?Yes,? I nodded. The others looked at me like I was insane, truth was, I wasn?t sude if I wasn?t.

Anna's pov
I ran. panting with stress and fear. ''poor AJ...I know how you feel....getting betrayed....loseing somone you care about....'' I thought my thoughts were stop when I bmp into dax. he grad my wrist and look at me. I look up to see that his face was inches away from my. I quickly move and blush alittle. ''watch were your going braids!'' I said trying to cover my red cheeks. ''s-sorry.'' he said turning his head. ''anna! where were you!?'' Aaron said. ''I...'' I said stop by the chase. ''wait! where's AJ!'' he said. I starting to get flustered. how could i explain that AJ was betrayed and my monsuno cores were takeing from me and AJ. ''I..I...'' I was once agian stop. ''looking for this?'' hina said throwing my cores. I grad the cores then look at the belt. the belt had one orange core on it.''whats this?'' I said. ''your new core. just a prize.'' hina said. ''what?'' I said. ''if you beat me. my boss just want to see your skills if you win you get AJ and her cores with it but i you lose you get to be arrest with your friends.'' hina said. ''.....find.'' I said.TBC.
YAY! sorry I took so long!
CHAPTER 7
Anna?s POV
?We?ll never give up!? I shouted, we didn?t have our cores, but we could still fight.
?You ALMOST sound threatening.? Hina taunted.
?Give it up, Anna, we can?t beat them.? AJ sighed shakily.
?But-?
?I can?t fight my friends, I just can?t.? AJ cried.
?Okay, if you give up, so will I.? I decided.
?We give up!? AJ called.
?Good, but we only have a use for you, your friend is another matter.? Marcus laughed. The quickly handcuffed AJ and led her away, leaving the S.T.O.R.M. agents to get rid of me.
?For AJ?s sake, I wan?t gonna fight, but this won?t affect her.? I growled under my breath, kicking a S.T.O.R.M. agent in the leg before running off, he chased after me, infuriated. I saw the exit, but I would be leaving AJ! What do I do?! I wanted to cry out, but I wasn?t going to, I was going to get out and bring help later.

AJ?s pov
I look around. I close my eyes then my eyes shot open. I turn to Anna. ??Anna?I have a dumb idea.?? I said as I pulled out the sharp dagger. ??were you get that!?? Anna said. ??S.T.O.R.M. they have tons of these.?? I said. I picked the lock on the cage then with over to Anna and open the cage she was in. ??tell dax am smarter and sly.?? I said putting the dagger in my belt. ??come on!?? I said pulling her around every tunnel. Every tunnel with to new darkest, I thought I saw the end of it when I saw a light. I smile. ??were free!?? Anna said. Then I was stop by my two best friends. Marcus and hina. My eyes soften. ??what are you doing!??? I yelled. ??we?re doing are job.? Marcus said. ?? your?your with S.T.O.R.M!?? how could you do that to me!? You betrayed me! You are my best friends I knew you when I was five how could you do that to me!??? I yelled. ??it?s a big job AJ. When we get you we?ll be living like kings and queens! From rags to riches AJ! I hope you understand.?? Hina said smirking. I almost cried but I couldn?t I just couldn?t cry not in front of Anna. ??find...you want battle down here?then you better get ready! Danger launch...huh!??? I said the core was gone! ??that?s right the core was off my belt to!?? Anna said. ??looking for this??? Marcus said moving the cores side to side. ??give it back!?? Anna said. ??turn yourself in AJ?NOW.?? Hina said as a demand. I fell to my knees. What was I going to do? TBC.
CHAPTER 5
I awoke in a small cell. I looked around, my muscles were sore from the cold, hard floor. I felt at my waist for my core clip, but didn?t find it.
?Anna!? I heard a familiar voice call.
?AJ, where are you?? I asked, my voice was a mere croak.
?In the cell across from yours.? She frowned.
?Where are we?? I asked.
?Lets just say it?s not somewhere we want to be.? She grumbled.
?Is there any way out?? I asked.
?Not that I know of.? She shrugged. I had sat up and was now looking through the bars of the cell door at her.
?We?re trapped. I?m trapped again.? I whispered, letting my head hit the bars with a loud thunk.
?It?ll be okay.? AJ reassured me nervously.

AJ whiped her head around to see us. I could see that red and blue hair of hers in any weather. ''wait? your core is freezeing? how is thay even possbile? my dad said that its impossible for a core to freeze. even in cold cilmates like this.'' AJ said. '' maybe I shook check danger.'' AJ said as she felted her core. she quickly whiped her hand away and moveing it side to side. ''ow!'' she said. then the fog got bigger. I couldn't even see AJ anymore.''AJ?'' I asked. I starting to get worry. AJ only been with us for a while and it feels like she's already liveing. then I hear a sream. but not any sream. AJ's sream. ''HELP!'' AJ yelled. I whip my head towards her voice. Someone had AJ by the neck. all I could see was blonde hair. Two blondes really. I ran away from the group. running towards AJ. I try to pull out Mayflower but her core was even colder! I shrugged it off I keep running. ''ANNA!'' I here dax yelled. I didn't care I needed it find AJ. Whoever that is or what it is won't get away. then I felted someone pulling at my hair. ''I knew I should have cut it!'' I thought. I look up to see one of the blondes. this one look female. ''so your one of AJ's firends? how shameful you have to meet this girl.'' she said. I rised a eyebrow. before I knew it I felted a strong pain in my neck. the next then I knew everything with black as I hit the cold ground. only hearing the girl laughting evily.TBC.
CHAPTER 4
?Where are we going?? I called after AJ.
?To meet some friends of mine who live here!? AJ shouted over her shoulder, hoping her voice would reach me over the wind.
?But I thought we were looking for your dad.? Jinja stated.
?Think of this as a detour.? AJ replied, turning around to face us. As we walked I could tell something was off, it seemed to get colder by the second. I gripped my arms, trying to warm myself up. Soon I started to shiver uncontrollably.
?You okay, Anna?? Dax asked.
?Just cold.? I shivered, trying to keep my voice steady. I stepped closer to Dax, trying to stay warm. As I started to shiver harder, I realized that Spiderclaw?s corer was freezing. This was odd. I reached down to the coreclip at my belt, and it was so cold it hurt my fingertips. ?Ow.? I whispered, rubbing my fingers to try and warm them up. ?Bren, is it normal for cores to freeze in unusually cold weather?? I asked.
?No, it?s actually impossible for a core to freeze because of the design.? Bren said.
?Then why is Spiderclaw?s core freezing?? I asked.
?I don?t know.? Bren shrugged.
I put my hand in my face. I could hardly see it. ''AJ you still there.'' I said. I could see her red and blue cap. ''ya you can hardly see anything.'' she said. ''you don't say flare?'' dax said. fl.I mean AJ rolles her eyes. '' am not as dumb as I look dax so don't start with me.'' AJ said. ''hey now no one said that.'' chase said. oh I could see it now. little chase holding hands with AJ. it was very easy to see. we gonna stay close.'' I said button up my jackect. but something almost bust my ears. I look up to see a large black dot in the sky. I rised an eyebrow. AJ on the other hand look scare which show she deal with that thing. ''uh hey guys I thing I know this place. Ya this is were hina and marcus live!'' she said. ''who?'' jinja said. ''hina and marcus come on!'' AJ said as she ran west while the rest of us follow her. something wasn't right with AJ? she was looking for john ace but she act like she was hideing something. I shrug it off and follow AJ.TBC.
oh and here are hina and marcus bios!
name:hina garica
age:16
qote:were doing this for you!(hint!hint!)
looks: blond hair to her shoulders with a red scaf on her head.with a jean jackect with red gems on the tips, blue derss with a ice claw on it, black leggins, black over size boots with a blue bucklet on it.
hina's traits: tuff,smart,sassy, wild,kind
monsuno:hazard
colors:red and black
animal traits:polar bear and a dragon
hazard's traits: tuff,evil,sassy,wild
name:marcus garcia
qote: you think you can beat us!?
looks: dirty blond hair,black jackect with a symbol of a dragon,black tank top,rip jeans,black and red sneakers.
marcus's traits:tuff,smart.sneaker,wild
monsuno:wanted
colors:red and black
animal traits:tiger and snake
wanter traits: wild,evil,tuff,sneaky.
I put my hand in my face. I could hardly see it. ''AJ you still there.'' I said. I could see her red and blue cap. ''ya you can hardly see anything.'' she said. ''you don't say flare?'' dax said. fl.I mean AJ rolles her eyes. '' am not as dumb as I look dax so don't start with me.'' AJ said. ''hey now no one said that.'' chase said. oh I could see it now. little chase holding hands with AJ. it was very easy to see. we gonna stay close.'' I said button up my jackect. but something almost bust my ears. I look up to see a large black dot in the sky. I rised an eyebrow. AJ on the other hand look scare which show she deal with that thing. ''uh hey guys I thing I know this place. Ya this is were hina and marcus live!'' she said. ''who?'' jinja said. ''hina and marcus come on!'' AJ said as she ran west while the rest of us follow her. something wasn't right with AJ? she was looking for john ace but she act like she was hideing something. I shrug it off and follow AJ.TBC.
oh and here are hina and marcus bios!
name:hina garica
age:16
qote:were doing this for you!(hint!hint!)
looks: blond hair to her shoulders with a red scaf on her head.with a jean jackect with red gems on the tips, blue derss with a ice claw on it, black leggins, black over size boots with a blue bucklet on it.
hina's traits: tuff,smart,sassy, wild,kind
monsuno:hazard
colors:red and black
animal traits:polar bear and a dragon
hazard's traits: tuff,evil,sassy,wild
name:marcus garcia
qote: you think you can beat us!?
looks: dirty blond hair,black jackect with a symbol of a dragon,black tank top,rip jeans,black and red sneakers.
marcus's traits:tuff,smart.sneaker,wild
monsuno:wanted
colors:red and black
animal traits:tiger and snake
wanter traits: wild,evil,tuff,sneaky.
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