Yeah, I know. It's a lame title. Sorry for my disability to title stories. Anyway, I absolutely LOVED this movie times 10! This will be my first and hopefully last Rise of the Guardians Fanfic. Once this gets on, I will post the info of the main character and the prologue. (Yes, there is a prologue)
Me: Yay Yuki's here!
Yuki: I've been here the whole time
Me: In the fic
Yuki: Oh! yea that makes sence
Katie: Nice!
Me: Love ur story I'm a total fan of urs <3
-Latias100
But, Kal ignored him. She jumped, lifting off with one powerful push on the ice. Kal spun gracefully in the air, toes pointed down, arms crossed on her chest. She started to descend, and she stuck one foot out for balance as she landed perfectly on the ice, gliding smoothly.
She turned that glide into a counterclockwise spin, first on both feet, then on one. The spin became faster and faster. Kal bent back and grabbed her lifted foot. She let go of it, putting her upper body in a horizontal position and grabbed her foot again. She let go of it and spun with both feet on the ice, ending her spin.
Jack slowly skated towards her. ?Kal?? He said. She didn?t move. When he was right next to her, though, she finally looked at him, a bit smile on her face. She jumped and hugged him, causing them both to spin.
?Whoa! Kal, that was amazing!? Jack said when they finally stopped. Kal smiled widely as she squeezed his neck in a tight hug.
?Uh?you?re?suffocating?me.? Jack tried to gasp for air. Kal quickly let go of him, looking at him apologetically. She smiled at him again and started to skate, spinning wildly until she landed recklessly on a mound of snow. Jack saw that she was still smiling.
?You?re that happy, huh?? Jack asked her. Kal popped out of the snow, sitting up. She smiled and nodded. ?Well, good thing is, we finished the job for North. We just need to get these skates back to him. Put on your boots. I think this trip?s over.? Kal pouted.
?Don?t pout, Kal. Come on. Maybe North will give you a pair of skates, too.? Jack said. At this, Kal brightened, and started to take off her skates. Jack chuckled at this, and started to take his off as well.
?Do you think I can help with the luggage?? a female voice asked.
Jack?s head snapped up. ?Wait a sec. I?d know that voice anywhere.?
A girl their age appeared in front of them. She had short, snow white hair and blue eyes. She wore a diamond necklace, and had a staff that looked exactly like Jack?s. She wore a light blue top that said Peace, a white shirt under that, blue jeans and black and blue snow boots.
?Yuki?Is that you?? Jack asked.
Thanks kolliwolli. Actually, any mythical creatures or people or legendary creatures or people (:P) that can haunt someone's dreams or bring bad memories? Even cause them to hallucinate and go haywire? Thanks. Your help is much appreciated.
I'm a big fan of the guardians and I really like what you are writing. I'm a writer too and right now I'm writing a story about the guardians. By the way if youl need some help with mitical animals or gods, ask me what you need
xjesse, I do like her, but... I'm trying to make it as close the actual movie as possible, and add as little fan-made characters as possible. I already added in someone's character, and that character already has a crush on Jack Frost, so it would be really difficult to add your character if she has a crush on Jack, unless you would let me put her in without the crush. I could try, but I can't promise. I am so sorry.
Hi could you add my character?
Name:Sandra
Legend Name:Sand Girl
Nickname: Sandy
Age:Same as Aquas
Crush: Jack frost
Appearence: Blonde sand hair that long and goes to back, some of her hair is on her right shoulder and the rest goes to the back. She wears a short sleeved teal shirt and a teal mini skirt, and wears teal sneakers with cute white socks that reach the bottom of her knees the top of her socks are three teal stripes and three teal bracelets.
Pet: A cat made from sand with a teal collar named Tabby.
Personality: Fun, Happy, Tries to keep peace.
Extras: Thinks friends are better than anything, can talk, loves to shop, can fly, is very brave, has a speacial talent for fixing things, is the best fighter.
Weapon: A sand arrow with teal accents on it
Hope you like her!!! Xjessie
Chapter 4: Dancing on the Ice part 6
Kal looked at him with wide eyes, and her jaw dropped. She snapped out of her shocked look and violently shook her head no. ?I told you that I was going to help you through this, and I am.? Jack said, determined. ?Now, put on those skates, or I?ll make you.? He had a serious and determined expression on his face. Kal reluctantly put on the skates.
?Good, now let?s go. He gently guided her onto the ice, holding onto her hands from behind, making sure she didn?t fall. They took little baby steps towards the center of the pond. When they got to the center, Jack started giving her instructions. ?I?ll be somewhere here.? He skated away from Kal until he was just a couple of feet away from her. ?Just take small baby steps towards me. The distance will gradually get larger so that you?ll get used to gliding again.?
Kal looked at him unsure, but started to skate towards him anyway. After the first few steps, Kal?s ankles gave in. Jack caught her in time, and helped steady her. ?That was good. You were only a few inches away from me. Let?s keep this up.? He said encouragingly. Kal looked up at him and smiled slightly.
Jack and Kal continued the whole process, changing skates every once in a while to finish the job for North. Kal slowly, but surely got better every time Jack widened the space between them. Her glides were smoother, and her balance was more even and in check. When Kal skated the whole distance across, the pond, Jack decided to try something new. ?Let?s skate around the edge.? Kal nodded, determined.
Kal started to skate around the edge of the frozen pond, Jack holding onto her hands from behind so that she wouldn?t fall if she tripped. Kal faltered a couple of times, but she easily made a comeback, catching her balance and countering her mistake with a strong glide.
Kal broke away from Jack. ?Kal, wait!? Jack called after her. He stopped skating, watching Kal glide across the ice with ease. His jaw dropped as he slowly skated towards the middle of the pond to give Kal some room.
Kal skated swiftly and skillfully on the frozen pond, pushing off her skates with power. Her glides her smooth and perfectly balanced, especially when she was on one foot. Kal bent her knees, and quickly jerked them up and spun around so she was skating backwards. She took long strides with her skates, skating dangerously close to the edge of the ice. But, she didn?t seem to care.
Kal started to glide backwards with one foot, and she bent her knee and jerked it up so that she could turn around and skate forwards again. She repeated this technique until she was spinning wildly while gliding on the ice.
Her expression turned serious as she started to skate with both feet again. ?She?s not going to?? Jack thought. Kal started to skate faster and faster. ?She is!? Jack thought, alarmed. ?Kal, you?re going to get hurt!? Jack screamed.
Kal grabbed a pair of skates, put them on, and laced them up as well. The two of them wobbled over to the frozen pond. Jack pushed off of one skate, and glided around the perimeter of the pond with ease. ?So far, they?re smooth.? He skidded to a perfect stop. ?I think this pair?s good.? He said. ?On to the next one.?
While he was busy fitting on another pair, Kal tried to skate. She pushed off with her left skate, and tried to glide with the other. Her ankle buckled, and she ended up sliding on the ice, her bare skin burning.
?Kal, are you alright?? Jack asked. He skated over and tried to help her up, but she just pushed him away. ?Kal?? Jack said. He noticed a hurt look in Kal?s eyes. But, there was another emotion hidden in there as well.
?Determination?? Jack thought. Kal got up on her own, ankles shaking, and tried to skate again. She strongly pushed off with her left skate, and she glided on her right longer than the last time, but she ended up falling again.
Jack tried to ignore her, trying on more pairs of skates and testing them on the ice. Kal kept falling: On her back, on her butt, hands, and knees until he couldn?t take it anymore. When Kal tried to glide again, he quickly skated towards her before she can fall. He grabbed her shoulders and spun her to a stop.
?That?s enough!? Jack yelled. ?I can?t stand to see you hurt yourself like this. Stop it!? He could feel Kal?s shoulders shaking under his tight grip. He had an apologetic look on his face.
?Kal, I?m sorry. I didn?t mean to yell at you like that.? She continued to look down.
?Kal?? He tilted her chin up so that he could see her face. His eyes widened as he saw it. Tears were violently streaming down her face, yet she wasn?t making a sound. She was crying, and he didn?t know it. ?Kal?? Kal took his hand and took it out from under her chin. She shook her head.
She made an effort to glide back to the mounds of snow, and when she made it, her legs gave in, and she collapsed into it. Kal crawled near the pile of white skates, and sat down by a nearby tree. She started unlacing the skates, and she took them off. Kal tossed them onto the tested pile of skates.
?Kal, are you alright?? Jack asked. He took off his skates, and sat down next to his friend. Kal just sniffed. ?I?m guessing that?s a no.? Jack sat, deep in thought for a moment. Then, his eyes glistened with the start of a new idea.
He stood up, and pulled Kal up with him. He pulled her over to the untested pile of skates, and threw a pair at her. Kal looked at him with a confused look. ?Well, if you want to know,? Jack said, grabbing a pair of skates for himself. ?I?m going to teach you how to skate.?
Nick:Stop singing!
Austin:There`s no way I could make it without ya,do it without ya,be here without ya!
Nino:All you need is a leather jacket,a girl with brown hair,and your like Ross Lynch!
Nick:Don`t give him ideas!
Austin:Man,bummer.You`ve gotta chill.
April:When has he been talking like he`s from Miami?
Terry:Since a week ago.And hasn`t stopped.
Austin:I`m gonna make,make,make you do a double take!
Nick:-___- STOP.
Terry:The story`s good anyway.
April:It`s nice.
Nino:Great.
Austin:Epic!
?Oh, Kal, I sorry I brought you into this.? North said. Kal shook her head and wrote something else. ?It?s not your fault.? It said. ?You didn?t know?I?ll try out the skates. It?s been 300 years, after all. Maybe it?ll be different this time.? Kal wrote with a smile.
?Are you sure, Kal?? North asked.
?Positive.? Kal wrote.
?It?s settled, then.? North said. ?Jack, take her to your frozen pond and watch over her while she?s skating. Bunny here will send the skates over.?
?Okay. Hey, Kal, have you ever traveled in air before?? Jack asked her. Kal shook her head slowly, backing away from the King of Fun.
?What? Are you scared? Or? is it that you don?t trust me?? Jack said, pretending to look hurt. Kal vigorously shook her head again, putting a hand on Jack?s shoulder. He suddenly smiled. ?Well, then,? He grabbed Kal?s other hand. ?Let?s go!?
Wind opened a hinged window and wrapped itself around Jack and Kal. Kal looked at Jack with wide eyes, and he just laughed at her look. He flew out of the opened window, whooping as he held Kal around her waist.
?I hope the lass survives.? Bunny commented. He patted the ground with his big foot, and a tunnel appeared. He started dropping the skates in.
?Jack is more responsible than he looks. I?m sure she?ll be fine.? North said.
The magic portal opened, and Jack and Kal crash landed into the soft mounds of snow. They finally arrived at their pond. Jack decided to give Kal a break after ten minutes of clinging to him and eyes being shut tight. He laughed as he sat up, and Kal glared at him.
?What? I just wanted to have some fun before you had your stressful ice skating recovery.? Kal stopped glaring and looked down. ?Look, I?m going to help you through this whether you like it or not. I?ll be here the whole time watching you, so don?t worry.? He assured her.
Kal smiled and nodded. A big whole opened up right next to her, and pairs of white ice skates started to gather in a pile. ?Bunny?s tunnels are helpful at times.? Jack commented. He stood up while pulling Kal up with him. ?Let?s start skating.?
Jack grabbed a pair of skates and started to put them on his feet. He laced them up perfectly, earning a surprised look from Kal, which didn?t go unnoticed. ?When I was ?alive? I used to go ice skating all the time. I?m sort of in a recovery as well. It?s been a while since I?ve felt real blades on my feet.? Jack said.
Yeah, I feel like I always make sad characters. Yet, they seem so happy on the inside at times.
P.S. I am still working on the next part of the story. It's still coming to mind.
P.S.S. Yuki frost will be on this soon. Don't worry. I think it was latias. (Sorry if I got the name wrong. I forgot numbers.)
Here's another one:
Chapter 4: Dance on the Ice part 3
?Ah, Kal, I?m so glad you could drop by. Haha! See what I did there?? North asked.
Kal nodded, a ghost of a smile dusting her face.
?Yeah, we did drop in. I?m sure you asked the Easter Kangaroo to do this?? Jack said. He waited.
?I, for the last time, am NOT a kangaroo!? Bunny suddenly jumped out from behind boxes of toys, and leaped for Jack. Kal stood in-between the two rivals, protecting Jack and stopping Bunny. She vigorously shook her head.
?I?m sorry, Kal. I kinda lost it.? Bunny apologized. Kal turned to Jack, hands on hips, left foot tapping the wooden floor.
?What?? Jack asked. Her eyes flickered towards Bunnymund. She took one of her hands off her hips and gestured towards Jack, then pointed to Bunnymund.
?You want me to?Do I have to?? Jack asked. This time, Kal crossed her eyes and gave him a small, yet deadly, glare.
?Alright, fine. I?m sorry I called you a kangaroo, Bunny. I?ll try not to do it again.? On his last sentence, Jack turned his face towards Kal and mouthed ?You happy now?? Kal nodded and slightly smiled.
?Anyway, that little argument aside, I did ask him to do it. I need your help, Kal.? North said.
Kal nodded her head as a response, and gave him a look that said, ?what do you need me to do??
?I need you to test some ice skates for me.? North said. Kal?s eyes widened, then she shook her head and started to back away slowly.
?Kal, what is the matter?? North asked.
Jack gently grabbed her shoulders and frosted the table next to them. ?Tell us what happened.? He said gently. Kal began to write in the ice with her finger, and the message was done in a couple of minutes.
It read: ?When I was 12 years old, when I was still ?alive? I was in a skating accident. I snapped my left ankle in two. It healed up, but the alignment is off by a couple of centimeters, meaning that it?s crooked. In skating, your whole body has to be in perfect form and balance. My left foot was the foot I used to do all of those tricks. When I glided, I kept falling. When I tried to land my jumps, I couldn?t land. I haven?t skated ever since.?
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