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~*Girl of the Snow*~ Please Read!

Date: 02/13/13 5:55 PM
From: linawish

Prolouge

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As early snow was created, guardians took their place.

300, years ago, the man on moon created Jack Frost.
One year later, he also created another Snow guardian.
Naya, Snow.
She lived in the clouds, painting snow falkes and sending them down to earth.
She creates snow flakes.
Naya, has never been down to earth.
She yearns to go and explore.
All, she wants to do is paint the world in her vision, as a memory.
Nobody knows about her.
I guess now you do.
You know me.
The guardian, with the paintbrush.
Guardian of Snow.

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Date: 05/03/13 7:55 PM
From: djdtexasv

awesome girl I loved it
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Date: 05/03/13 3:29 PM
From: redlove014

@linawish:
Your wellcome! :)
I just think your profile name is pretty and i really like it and i really like this fan fic its really well writen.
Friend me?
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Date: 05/02/13 9:54 PM
From: linawish

@RedLove:
Thank you! I've never gotten that comment before. I find my profile name quite boring.

Chapter 5-Stranded

"Let me go!" I yelled at the white haired boy. I shrieked of anger as I prepared to freeze him. He wouldn't freeze. The big giant funny accent creature behind me snickered. "A real charmer" he said sarcastically. The boy laughed along with him, as in the distance I heard a sound of tinkling bells. "Great! North's here! He'll know what to do with her" the creature prodded on. I rolled my eyes. A big giant red sleigh came into the distance. Santa?

::~::WiSh::~::

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Date: 04/30/13 1:33 AM
From: redlove014

@linawaish
before i say any thing i have to tell you that i LOVE your Profile name! :)
Any way i REALLY like your fic it`s REALLY good.
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Date: 04/19/13 10:04 PM
From: linawish

Skipped_
Naya gazed over her shoulder at the children that played around her.
They all were in strange clothes of puffy fabric and throwing her snow around. 'Her snow'.
The snow that Naya made was just being thrown around like a toy! "Stop!". They didn't notice. "Stop!" she called again.
They didn't notice. What am I invsible?.

"You know they can't see you right?" a voice called from behind her. A trouble making voice. Like a thousand snowflakes pounding.
Naya flipped her head around to see a face she oddly felt familier too. The boy from the roof? Before she could speak or run away a big paw picked her up in a lock. "Got her!" it said in a funny accent.
Naya screamed and kicked her legs trying to get on the ground. "Let.Me.Go" Naya said struggling. The boy infront of her smirked. "Looks like you've been caught by a giant bunny. So pridley". Naya glared at the boy.
In a similar way he looked like her except had blue eyes. Psh, he'll regret that comment. The funny creature who was grasping her laughed "Yep....HEY!". The boy laughed again, not at her but at the thing called a 'bunny'.
A sound of tinkling bells was heard.

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Date: 04/16/13 6:43 PM
From: gcli4613

good in put it is relly good
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Date: 04/16/13 12:14 PM
From: kolliwolli

Wow! Not bad, I say
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Date: 04/14/13 5:04 PM
From: linawish


___~_Chapter 3-Escaped~_

"Jack?" North pondered as he looked through his megascope, out through the clouds.

"What's he doing here?" he asked one of his elves, who shrugged and offered him a cookie.

North shrugged it off as Jack came sailing torwards him.
"North! I saw a girl!" he screamed.

North didn't hear. "You saw a squirrul?" North questioned.

Jack shook his head and race torwards him.

"I saw a girl!".
North rolled his eyes as Jack stepped infront of him.

"Speak up, Jack Frost" North said.

Jack nodded, out of breath. "I-I saw a girl....she raced torwards me in a hurry of snow flakes".
No....it can't be.

North frantically ran from Jack to one of his elves.

"Get the other guardians! We need a meeting! Naya Snow is out of the clouds!".

Jack raised his eyebrow. "Who?".

North turned for a second.

"Naya Snow, the most powerful guardian I know, and the most dangerous".

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Date: 04/02/13 12:09 AM
From: Latias100

this is really good keep it up!
-Latias100 on iPad!
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Date: 04/01/13 7:35 PM
From: loop566

come on come ON this story needs to go on
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Date: 03/09/13 11:25 AM
From: zuko380

nice story keep it going.

KEEP THE FIRE!

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Date: 02/24/13 3:10 PM
From: linawish

No its not that hard, but it is fast!


Chapter 2- The girl on the snowflake

That fateful morning Jack frost had been on a rooftop about to frost a pipe.
"Winter's coming" he said quietly.
It was true Winter had been coming the tomorrow of that day,
and North had to do many things to prepare.
Jack frost was just expected, to stay out of his way,
while North worked. He raised his palm and a gust of coldness came out from it.
He sighed had sat back. The sky that morning was as pale as
his skin and a promise of snow was coming from it.
Then snowflakes fell. A drop of bitter snowflakes came onto
Jack's nose and he laughed.
This lasted for a minute before he saw, a
burst of a white thing come his way.
"What...." he breather then he was blown aback by a gust of wind.
Jack frost got up quickly and looked behind him, to see a
pale girl laughing as she landed on the roof.
"I escaped!" she yelled. The girls white eyes sparkled like fresh snow.
Jack frost ruffled his hair and glared at the girl.
"Who are you? And what are you doing!" he asked.
He was sure she was a guardian.
Then girl just stared at him for a minute,
and she got out a stick with
some kind of wool and waved it as another snowflake rushed her off.
Jack frost was confused from then on.

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Date: 02/20/13 1:24 PM
From: 3174ever

beautiful and undescribable. Is it hard to write like that? It makes me want to read more!
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Date: 02/17/13 12:31 AM
From: linawish


Chapter 1-Naya

"Just over the city!" a girl who was waving a paint brush in the air said.

Her white hair and white eyes glimmered as she layed on the clouds.

"No! Naya, its dangerous out there!" an owl with white feathers scolded.

Naya, breathed harshly as she waved her paintbrush across a piece of paper, and a snowflake came out.

"It's not fair!".

"The man on the moon...." the owl started.

"I know, doesn't want me to come in contact with humans, because im a not known guardian" Naya mimicked.

The owl nodded and ruffled his feathers.

"I, have to get back to my haven....will you be okay?" he asked Naya.

Naya looked away and nodded.

Obviously wanting to be alone, the owl flew off.

Naya sighed and flopped back down on a cloud.

She took her paintbrush and threw it out of the cloud.

It immediately bounced back.

Naya sighed again, and made another snowflake.

This one eight sided with two holes.

She saw it bounce off the paper and go out of the cloud.

"Magic" Naya snickered.

Then she noticed something.

If the snowflakes could get out....

maybe she could jump on one and go out with it!

Naya smiled to herself.

Getting a big piece of paper, she drew.

It would take all night, but it was worth it.

It was worth her freedom.
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Date: 02/15/13 6:19 PM
From: RoxasFly

Whoa,just no words.Like,wow.It`s way better than I could ever write!

RoxasFly

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