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The Dark Inside (First MVA Fanfic!)

Date: 04/22/13 10:07 PM
From: horzana

Chapter 1
I kneeled above the warehouse. If I got my directions right,(for once) I would find him here. I swept down, my wings arching across the wind. I peered from the front. There was no entrance, so I made one. I punched a hole in the metal siding and went in.

My 'friend' in the warhouse turned to me. "Ah, Deemone. You always were terrible at using doors." I sneered. "I'm not playing games, doctor. I came to end this." "Very well," He said. "To bad you have to die."

Me and the other monsters had been sent on a mission to New York to identify a UFO sighting. BOB stared out the window of the plane. "Oh look! A car!" Bob said. Dr. Cockroach scoffed. "We are in New York. The chan-CAR!!!!" Me and Link looked outside just in time to be jolted by a flying car. After I got up, I looked around. "Everyone okay?"

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Date: 05/05/13 10:44 AM
From: s4stacy

good story
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Date: 05/01/13 8:07 PM
From: horzana

Chapter 7
I waited in the cement room for the other monsters to return. I ran out of things to do, so I sat down quickly, only to be reminded of my splint. Dr. Cockroach came around to see what happened. "Are you hurt?" "I smiled. "It's SO comfortable, I can't even feel it!" I looked back at the cracked splint. "I might need a new one..." Dr. Cockroach gathered up supplies for the new splint, while I pulled of the old one. He came back with the supplies and began wrapping my wing and then stopped. "What is it" I asked. "There are a lot of cuts right here. What happened." I froze and went dead silent. "Oh-sorry! I don't want you to-"It's fine, I'll tell you. I turned around to look at him. "When I was a little, I never knew my family. I had been raised in an orphanage. When I was seven, I was finnaly adopted. By... HIM..."
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Date: 04/28/13 3:32 PM
From: horzana

OH! not chapter 4, chapter 5, woops.
Chapter 6
It turned out Dr. Cockroach wasn't like any of the other mad scientists I knew. He got a splint set up for my wing, and said it would be better in a few weeks. I don't think Link trusted me. He never looked at me straight. Bob was pretty fun to hang out with, Susan LOVED to talk, and... Coverton. I try to avoid him as much as possible. The general called the monsters... and Coverton, into a meeting. "Monsters, there have been reports of an earthworm loose in this area. Susan looked confused. "What's so dangerous about an earthworm?" "Mutant Earthworm." the general continued. "I will also need someone to stay here with Deemone, so she doesn't go rogue like yesterday." Dr. Cockroach raised his hand. "It's unanimous. You'll stay here while Coverton will asist the other monsters. Link opened his mouth in aw. "Coverton!?!"
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Date: 04/27/13 8:44 PM
From: horzana

Chapter 4
I got up and brushed myself off. "I-I'ts fine. I guess I'm just not comfortable here yet." I flapped my right wing and winced with pain. "And I guess I'm grounded for a while anyways." My first day at area fifty-something, I met the aliens, learned the monsters' names, and got to eat in their caffeteria. Believe it or not, it was probably the best meal I had in five years. I had just finished eating with the monsters, and picked up the tray. I turned around and bumped into someone. "Oh, sorry about tha-" I looked at the freak top to bottom and snarled. "Coverton." He looked down on me. "Oh, the psycho. How nice to see you." Bob slopped forward. "That wasn't nice." "I wasn't talking to you, was I?" Coverton smirked and floated away.

Links POV:I still wasn't sure if we could trust 'Deemone'. Sure, she was a monster, and she hated coverton like everyone else, but something about her...
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Date: 04/26/13 10:39 PM
From: horzana

Chapter 4
I woke up in a room. It was... empty? No obvious exit, a concrete wall... looked better than my old home. I looked around the corner. Those others... the fish, the bug, the giant, and the bubblegum. The bug stepped behind the giant. "Please resist from hurting me this time." I hid part of my face behind the corner. "Sorry about that..." I mumbled. The girl stepped closer. "Do you have a name?" "Deemone." She smiled. "A real name?" I slid down the wall and hung my head. "I used to. But that was a long time ago." The fish looked cross. "What was that whole thing with the car about? And grabbing Dr. Cockroach?" " I wasn't aiming for your plane. And... I was scared." The blob slipped closer.
"Of what?" The terrible memories burned in my mind.My dream come true... becoming reality... and reality... became a nightmare... I collapsed on the floor and cried. The bug walked up to me. "I'm... sorry."
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Date: 04/24/13 9:51 PM
From: horzana

Chapter 3
Link had quickly revived from the crash, and came to only a few minutes after the monster was caught. We had been waiting outside a room where she was being held. When she escaped, Link quickly landed on her back. "Ha! Payback!" She looked confused. "For WHAT?!" The workers stepped forward and she pannicked.

They were all around me. White labcoats, little keycards... but one of them stood out. A cockroach? I didn't know what else to do. I slid out from under the fish and jumped to the bug. I gripped my arm around his neck and pointed my tail like a dagger. "STAY AWAY, OR THE BUG GETS IT!!" The worm in my arm squirmed. "Uh, could someone help me?" A little squid thing with a fat head and a floaty chair drifted forward. "I believe I may help..." He clicked a button on his chair. All I saw was a buzz, and then black. Today was not looking up.
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Date: 04/24/13 8:28 AM
From: horzana

Chapter 2 Crash
"Depends how you look at it." Dr. Cockroach said. "I have the immortality of a cockroach, BOB has no nerves, and in Ginormica state, that was only a 7 foot fall. Wich leaves..." We all looked over to see Link partially burried. "Dr. Cockroach, stay here with Link. Me and BOB will get that UFO and wherever that car came from.

It had become a frenzy of me hurling objects. I might have hit a plane with a car aimed for him...
All of the sudden, a blue blob stopped me from throwing another car in mid-toss. Then a giant hand curled me up. I couldn't breathe in the giant hands, and fainted.

The next thing I knew, I woke up to talking.
i was strapped to a table. all around me were scientists and doctors. But they failed to notice my tail, and I quickly pried off the straps.

All of the sudden, we heard a lot of noise inside. And then that red girl burst through the doors. She ran, lept, and flapped her wings, only to fall back to the ground.
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