Hey,guys I'm gonna start a fanfic but in order to do that if you guys want you can make a charater but you have to specific ok? BTW you can't take this character because she's the main:
Name : Star
Age: (same as Yuma aka I don't know)
Hair: straigth, color: Black with blue highlights.
Deck: Fire and spellcaster deck
Number card: 87: Queen of the night atk/3200 def/2300
Acssories: (can't spell) Glasses,has a silver necklace with a star that has 3 small round green gems.
personalitty: Smart,outgoing,fun to be around.
Luna (me) : That. Was. AWESOME!!!!
Atsie: I hate to be a critic but my name is Atsie not Asite, but I love how you that when Star and I meet I had just kicked a guy's butt in a duel
Luna: it's just like you
Koonai: can I be in it? It's okay if I'm not I just thought it would be awesome
Atsie: yep yep!
~We will Mind Crush the world!
"The cake is a lie."
"I knew I shouldn't have let you play Portal all night."
Somewhere in Heartland
A man was in a chair in a dark room. The only thing that persevered light was the monitors on the screen.
Man: So, Asite there is another one of them?
Asite: Yes and there is another alien. But, this one doesn?t look like it came from Astral world, Mr. Heartland.
Mr. Heartland: Really? I shall report this to Dr. Faker. That?ll be all.
Asite: Thank you, sir. (Walks out the room)
Mr. Heartland: And Asite?
Asite: Yes, sir? (Stops and turns around)
Mr. Heartland: You have a mission with Kite today. And remember why you?re doing this job.
Asite: Ok and I know why I?m doing this. (Stomps out the room)
Mr. Heartland: Hm, why she so mad?
Izuna: So, I heard you dueled Riku.
Star: Yeah, I did.
Yuma: And it was so cool.
Annie: (~in head~ Hm, maybe if I duel someone tough it?ll impress Yuma. But who?)
Star: Hey Annie you listening?
Annie: Hm, what?
Yuma: I said do you want to go to the mall with us?
Annie: (~in head~ Yes, Yes) Sure.
Yuma: Great, I?ll invite Tori too.
Izuna: Well, you guys are lucky I?ve got to work with my mom today.
Izuna: Uh-oh, got to get to class. See ya guys. (Runs to class)
Star: See you I guess. See you in swimming Yuma.
Yuma: Yeah bye! (Runs to class)
Annie: Better get going I don?t want to be late again.
Star: Mm-hmm. (Nods head)
Annie and Star runs to class.
After school (At home)
Star: Hmm, what should I wear? (Looking through dresser)
Galatina appears out of Star?s necklace
Galatina: What are you doing?
Star: Oh, hi Galatina I haven?t seen you since the duel. And I?m getting ready to go somewhere.
Galatina: Sorry I haven?t been out because of Astral.
Star: What do you have against Astral?
Galatina: Oh nothing. Just forget what I said.
Star: Ok. Oh, I found it. (Finds a blue t-shirt)
Galatina: (~in head~ If I tell her what happened between me and Astral she?ll hate me. So, It?s better that she doesn?t know.)
Star: (After she changes out her uniform to her blue t-shirt and jeans) I better get money. So I can get more cards. (Goes in closet and gets $20 out of a brown cardboard box.)
Galatina: Smart thinking then your deck will be stronger.
Star: Well that?s the point.
Mom: (From downstairs) Star, your friends are here!
Galatina: I?ll be in the necklace. (Goes in the necklace)
Star: Coming you guys. (Goes downstairs)
At the mall
Tori: I can?t believe how many cards you got with $20.
Star: It was on sale. (Holding a shopping bag full on card packs)
Annie: Aren?t you going to open them?
Yuma: Yeah I want to see the cards.
Star: Naw, I rather open them at home.
Annie: (Looks at clock) 5:00? Man time flies. Me and Star got to get home. See you guys tomorrow.
Star: Bye. (Walks with Annie)
Yuma: Tell me the cards you got when you open them.
Annie: I can?t believe it?s almost dinner.
(A whistling sound travels through the air. Everyone stops moving except Star.)
Star: What?s going on?
Galatina appears from the necklace.
Galatina: It appears that everything has stop moving. Huh? (Looks at Star?s hand) Your hand is glowing Star.
Star: What? (Looks at hand, her hand was blinking bright purple) Oh it is. But why?
Galatina: It might have to do with this occurrence.
Man in distance: Please I?ll give you anything!
Galatina: What was that?
Star: It came from over there! (Runs to the cry)
Man: Help me!
Asite: No one will help you. The only people that are moving are us two. If you didn?t have a number card, this wouldn?t have happened. (Takes the man?s card along with his soul) Man, I hate doing this job. But there is a reason I?m doing it.
Star: (Just got to the scene) What happened? (Seeing the man lifeless and rushes over to help) What did you do to him?
Asite: I just took his card. Wait, why are you moving?
Star: I was about to ask the same thing.
Asite: The only reason I?m moving is because I?m a number hunter and only people with numbers can move. So, that tells me you have a number card. So, let?s duel. (Earpiece buzzes) Huh? (Speaks into it~ Ok, uh huh, got ya) It?s your lucky day I have to go. But remember this name?s Asite and don?t you forget it. If I see your face, I?ll duel you. (Disappears)
Star: Who are you Asite? (Hand stops glowing) The mark stopped.
Star: We have to find help.
Annie: There you are! I was looking all over for you! Who?s that?
Star: Annie get help.
Annie: Uh, ok. (Runs to find help)
Galatina: Um, Star I?ll see you later. (Goes in necklace)
Star: Sigh, why is this all happening to me?
Somewhere in Heartland
Asite: Kite, here?s the numbers. (Hand Kite the cards) I know you need them more.
Kite: Thanks, Asite.
Asite: Kite, there?s another kid like Yuma. But her alien is different. I?m gonna duel her.
Kite: I?m gonna do the same with Yuma. Care to join?
Asite: Yeah, then we?ll have both of their numbers.
End of chapter 3
Me: that was awesome!!
Koonai: yeah that was so cool!
Me: I like that girl at the end
Koonai: because she's you!*flicks my head*
Me: thanks bro now everyone knows I have an account
Koonai: no problem!
Me: we can't wait until the next part!
"Let's blast this duel to pieces!"
"Dueling isn't just a game, it's life."
Me: remember when i used to steal Luna's computer and use her account?
Koonai: yeah that was funny
Astral: ~in head~ Why did she disappear when she saw me?
Izuna: ( who was watching the whole duel) How did she get those numbers? All well as long as I get to duel a strong duelist. ( rides her duel-runner)
Riku: (gets up) Agh, I can't believe I lost to you.
Star: I can't believe I won.
Riku: (scoff) Whatever. (walks home)
Star: What's up with her? (walks home with her friends)
That's how Star met Galatina,an alien. What other adventures await her?
???: (A girl about 18 with shoulder length brown hair with side-swept bangs that have blue highlights hides on a tree top and looking through a pair on binoculars) Another Number holder? I have to report this to Mr. Heartland. ( disappears)
As the story continues.
End of chapter 2.
Hope you liked it
Riku: So? It's still not enough to win against me.
Number 87's attack is 3200 while Riku's life points are 4000.
Star: That's why I activate the spell card Blustering winds. Blustering winds boosts my monster's attack by 1000!
Number 87's attack is now 4200.
Star and Galatina: Number 87: Queen of the night attack! Night blast!
Riku: AAHHHH! (falls on the ground and the number on her face disappears) Ugh.
Galatina: ( grabs the number card from Riku and gives it to Star) Now you have two Xyz monsters.
Everyone runs towards Star.
Galatina: (~ whispers to herself~ Astral.) Uh, Star I have to go now, bye. ( disappears on Star's necklace)
Yuma: That was awesome.
Annie: I thought you were going to lose.
Tori: Great duel.
Cat: That was perrrfect .
Star: Thanks, but I couldn't have done it with out Galatina.
Tori, Annie and Cat: Who's Galatina?
Star: What do you mean? She was right here.
Yuma: I saw her.
Star: At least someone believes me.
Tori: I wonder what she'll do.
Cat: Go Star!
Riku: So what if you have 3 level 8 monsters that doesn't mean you'll Xyz summon.
Star: She's right I don't have even one Xyz monster.
Galatina: On the coterie you do have one.
Galatina: Look in your coat pocket.
Star: (looks in coat pocket and finds a card) Huh, what's this? I can't read it.
Galatina: It's Number 87: Queen of the night. Now you can Xyz summon.
Star: Ok, I overlay Gagaga girl, Princess Blizzard, and Blue-eyes to build the overlay unit and Xyz summon Number 87: Queen of the night!
Queen of the night appears on the field while the other monsters disappear.
Yuma: Annie I thought you told me Star never had an Xyz monster.
Annie: She didn't.
Astral: ~talks to himself~ Number 87.
Galatina: Now activate Gagaga girl's ability.
Star: I activate Gagaga girl's ability. If I use it to Xyz summon, your monster loses all it's attack points.
All of Queen of the elves attack points got lowered to 0.
Star: I have 1 card in my hand.
Riku: I have 4.
Star and Riku discard all their cards in the graveyard and drew new cards.
Star: Now I activate Pot of greed on my field. It can make me draw 2 more cards.
Star drew 2 more cards.
Galatina: Now use Call of the hunted on the field and special summon Princess Blizzard. Then activate ancient map to also special summon Blue-eyes white dragon.
Star: Riku your not the only one with Call of the hunted. I activate my face-down, Call of the hunted, I bring back Princess Blizzard from the graveyard. And now I activate the spell card ancient map from my hand. Ancient map let's me special summon a monster 5 or higher from my hand. I special summon Blue-eyes white dragon.
Everyone except Star and Galatina: Blue-eyes?!?
Princess Blizzard and Blue-eyes white dragon appear on the field.
Yuma: Star has 3 level 8 monsters. Astral you don't think?
Astral: I believe she's going to Xyz summon.
Annie: But Star doesn't have an Xyz monster.
Grim reaper here Animefan13 let me look on her computer.
Animefan13: No I didn't you pushed me off!!:0
Grim reaper: Ok fine I pushed you off. So what it's not like you were doing anything.
Animefan13: Yeah I was I was typing!!
Grim reaper: Oh well I was doing something too.
Animefan13: Like what!?!
Grim reaper: Like finally typing something. I barely get any spotlight.
Animefan13: Sigh. My friend everyone -_-.
Grim reaper: I wish Yu-gi-oh 5Ds was on nicktoons.
Animefan13: Yeah, me too. I LOVE that show. I have a crush on Yusei.
Grim reaper: Ugh gross. I like Jack Atlas better.
Animefan13: (scoff ) I doubt you can even bet him in a duel.
After 15 seconds
Grim reaper: Want to duel?
Animefan13: Heck yeah!
Grim reaper/ Animefan13: Duel!
Animefan13: Hope you liked me friend's introduces. She's basically on the wild side.
How long have I been gone? AH! Almost a month?! Ugh, I remember my laptop broke. (I'm using my friend's laptop) I'll finish chapter 2 part 2 next Saturday. I finally got spell check so I can't misspell (which I often do -_- Don't judge me (talking to my friend she's laughing right behind me) So I have been working on chapter 3,4 and 5. Asite will be in it along side Kite, where Star first meets Asite face to face, Sorry this is the longest review I ever did. I'm going to do the idea that someone gave me, so I can do the story longer. Thanks someone! So thanks for reading. Oh, I forgot. Thanks Izuna, Asite, and Annie for making the story come to life.
Galatina was a female version of bad Astral, except she had hair all the way down to her feet, her right eyes was black and her left eye was purple.
Yuma: Astral, are you seeing this?
Astral: Yes indeed I am. (~in head~ Galatina who are you?)
Star: You look like kind of like Astral except your all black.
Galatina: Astral? (~in head~ It can't be him) Don't we hae a duel to win?
Star: Oh yeah, I forgot. But how?
Galatina: (looks at Star's hand) Hm. You have the cards to win.
Star: I do?
Galatina: Yes, I'll tell you what to do, but first you have to draw.
Riku: Hello I'm waiting!
Star: I draw! (draws a card). (talks to Galatina) Now what?
Galatina: Summon Gagaga girl and change it's level by 8.
Star: Ok, I summon Gagaga girl and chande it's level by 8.
Galatina: Now use card of destruction.
Star: From my hand I activate the spell card Car of destruction, this card makes us bith to discard all the card in our current hand in the graveyard and we draw the same number of cards.