Hey guys the reason this post says part 2 is because this is like the season 2 of my fanfic this season will focus more on Atsie?s and Yusei?s friendship so here ya go!
*Atsie is fixing her Barian Dragon (Runner) and Kite is helping*
Kite: so who?s Yusei?
Atsie: an old friend
Kite: but your uncle said something about him being a criminal
Atsie:*comes out from under Runner* well we?re both criminals
Atsie: well when I became a criminal I had to live in Satellite I didn?t know anyone there I met Yusei when I was creating my Barian Dragon I was 11 at the time but he said that he knew I was there because of his Mark of the Dragon
Kite: what?s a Dragon Mark?
Atsie:*rolls up sleeve showing him Mark (hand)* this is a Dragon Mark
Kite: interesting but what about your criminal marks?
Atsie:*wipes off face show him the marks* you mean these?
Kite: you must?ve done a lot of bad stuff
Atsie: ya think? Now let?s get back to work!
#flashback to Atsie?s life at 13 meeting Yusei#
Atsie:*is creating Runner* Why didn?t I switch out the decks!?*has small mark above right eyebrow (dot) and from her left eye to her chin (line)* now I have to live here in Satellite
Yusei:*is 14* this place looks like a ghost town ? huh?*hears Atsie talking to herself* I wonder who that is*walks over to Atsie?s condo*
Atsie:*takes off jacket revealing Mark of the Dragon (hand)* now I can?t get back to Heartland without getting another mark
Yusei:*walks over next to Atsie* uh hello?
Atsie: BWAH!*hits head on Runner* ever heard of knocking?!*slides out from under Runner and stands up*
Yusei: sorry about that I?m Yusei Fudo
Atsie: I?m Atsie Kaiba so what are you doing here in Satellite? You don?t have any criminal marks
Yusei: my friend Crow told me to find him here what about you?
Atsie: I?m a criminal in case you didn?t notice
Yusei: you must be that girl that tried to steal that deck
Atsie:*crosses arms* that was pretty fun the cops still can?t believe an 13 year old pulled it off*chuckles*
Yusei: wait you?re a Turbo Duelist?
Atsie: yeah or I will be as soon as I finish making my Runner
Yusei: do you want some help?
Atsie: sure that?d be nice
Yusei: I think I have some parts that you need in my garage I?ll be right back*runs over to garage gets parts and puts them in a bag*
Crow: hey Yusei there you are!
Yusei: hi Crow what?s up?
Crow: wassup!? You were supposed to meet me here at least an hour ago!
Yusei: sorry Crow I?m helping a girl make a Runner
Crow: did you say you?re helping a girl?
Yusei: yes she?s a Turbo duelist and she?s a signer
Crow: can I come?
Yusei: if you really want to
*they walk over to Atsie?s condo*
Atsie:*has jacket on* hey
Yusei: hey this is my friend Crow
Crow: sup the name?s Crow - Crow Hogan
Atsie: hi - so let?s get started
#hours after working on the Runner#
Crow: we?re finally finished!
Atsie: what do you mean we? Yusei and I did all the work
*they all start laughing*
Yusei:*Dragon Mark starts glowing* whoa
Atsie:*Dragon Mark starts glowing too* what the?!
Crow:*same thing happens* w-what?s happening?!
Atsie:*takes off jacket and the mark glows even more*
Crow: you?re a signer!
Atsie: so are you guys
Yusei: ~I knew it! ~ But then you?re ?
Atsie: yes I?m a signer and yes I?m a turbo duelist and yes I?ve been looking for a syncro
Crow and Yusei:*stare at Atsie*
Atsie: what? Look I?ve heard about you 2 and we?re a lot alike so stop looking at me like that
Crow: but it?s like you read our minds!
Atsie:*spittakes* what? That?s impossible
Yusei:*fake cough* so Atsie do you wanna hang out sometime?
Atsie: sure that would be cool
Crow:*whispers to Yusei* Yusei you should tell her about team 5Ds
Atsie: ~team 5Ds? What could that mean? ~
Yusei:*nods* by the way we have a team ?
Crow: Team 5Ds
Yusei: right it?s a team of Turbo Duelist and Signers like us
Crow: and we want you to join!
Atsie: but I?m not a Turbo Duelist yet and I?m a criminal and I?m not that good of a duelist
Yusei: Crow and I could help you duel
Atsie:*sigh* okay I?ll try it
Yusei and Crow: yes!
Atsie: so where should I go to find you guys?
Yusei: we live in New Domino but we sometimes come here because we have a garage
Crow: we?re actually around the block from here!
Atsie: hmph small world
Yusei: well see ya around Ats
Atsie: later guys
*Yusei and Crow leave*
That?s it for part 1 season 2! (Please approve.)
Okay I bet you're wondering what Atsie was talking about in this scene:
Atsie: I was mean? I don't know-
Trey: you need to stop beating yourself up
well when Atsie and Trey started hanging out more they kind of fell in love, so they got together when Atsie was 14 (and Trey was 13(don't ask)) then after awhile Atsie broke up with him and totally broke his heart so she was wondering if he still sad about that.
#Morning of the World Racing Grand Prix#
Atsie:*is still asleep*
Clock:*alarm goes off* 8 AM wake up Miss Kaiba
Atsie:*turns off alarm* alright I?m up I?m up*gets up and stretches*
*Bruno knocks on the door*
Atsie: come in
Bruno:*walks in* morning beautiful
Atsie: morning Bruno
Bruno: you ready for today?
Atsie: as soon as I get my clothes on yes
Bruno: waffles today?
Atsie:*wraps hands around his neck; kisses him on the cheek* you know me so well
Bruno: I try*leaves*
Atsie:*puts on pit crew outfit* wait how did Bruno get in? O_O eh whatever*walks out into dining room*
*Koonai and Bruno are arguing about Duel Runners*
Atsie:*chuckles* oh Ra
Koonai: I disagree! The shorter the Runner the faster it goes!
Bruno: but if it?s longer then it has more aerodynamics but if it?s shorter it tends to be a lot larger
Atsie:*sits down next to them* not always Bruno
Bruno:*gives her a plate of waffles* how so Ats?
Atsie: well Koonai?s Runner is very streamline considering that it?s shaped like Blue-Eyes
Koonai:*shrugs* I never thought of that
Atsie: hmph*finishes waffles* I?ll be right back*goes outside onto Runner and rides to Heartland*
Atsie:*walking towards Kite?s lab* hmm I wonder where they are*knocks on the door*
Orbital:*opens it* m-Miss Atsie! Welcome back!
Atsie: hey Orbital where?s Kite?
Orbital: the finals of the WDC
Atsie: patch me though to his duel*runs inside*
Orbital: o-of course*patches her through*
Atsie:*watches the duel* Kite needs help! Orbital you ready to take a little trip?
Orbital: W-what are you t-talking about?
Atsie:*eye mark appears and left eye turns gold and has snake pupil* say hi to Kite for me*eyes glow and Orbital disappears* I hope that worked*a hurt Trey walks in*
Trey: hope what worked?
Atsie:*shocked* Trey! I thought you were recovering
Trey:*is leaning on the wall* everyone else was at the finals
Atsie:*walks over to him and helps him stand* but how are you awake?
Trey: I don?t know I guess Vetrix helped me
Atsie: but he?s in the finals as well and so are your brothers
Trey: that?s great*smiles*
Atsie:*sits him down on a chair* so do you wanna tell me when Quinton got number 9?
Trey: number 9? I don?t know
Atsie: neither does Kite
Trey:*looks at the video screen of Kite and Quinton dueling* what?s going on?
Atsie:*rests hands on table* I wish I knew- so are you still mad at me for what happened?
Trey: of course not Atsie*puts hand on hers* why would I?
Atsie: because I was a fool? I was mean? I don?t know-
Trey: you need to stop beating yourself up about everything
Atsie:*blushes* why do you think I do that?
Trey: because I know you
#flashback to when Atsie was 12 in Heartland#
Atsie:*is still waiting for Koonai to come back* what?s taking him so long?
*a 11 year old Trey walks over to her*
Trey: who are you waiting for?
Atsie: my brother Koonai
Trey: how long has he been gone?
Atsie: why would you care? It?s not like you would care about some girl waiting for her brother who?s been gone for 2 years!*eyes glow*just leave me alone*crest appears*
Trey: y-you have a crest?*crest glows*
Atsie:*looks at flame crest* what is this thing?
*a younger Quinton walks to them*
Quinton: that young lady is a crest you now have special powers- come with me I can help you master these powers*grabs her arm*
Atsie: no!*burns his arm and runs away*
Trey: wait!*chases after her* come back!
Quinton: Trey no!
#back alleys of Heartland*
Atsie: stop following me!
Trey: I don?t wanna hurt you!
Atsie:*stops* but everyone wants to hurt me
Trey:*is next to her* well I?m not like them
Trey: for 1 thing I just met you- I?m Trey by the way
Atsie: ~maybe I can trust him~ I?m Atsie
Trey: well it?s nice to meet you Atsie- so do you wanna hang out tomorrow?
That?s all for part 16! (Please approve.)
Atsie: why would I care?
Quinton: isn?t he like a brother to you?
Atsie:*bursts out laughing* pfft him? Yeah right just because I helped him a bit doesn?t mean anything
*Kite is standing behind Atsie frowning*
Atsie: plus if he was anything to me he would be just a friend or rival
Quinton: then tell him that
Atsie: he?s back in Heartland- oh Ra he?s right behind me isn?t he?*turns around* Kite! I-I didn?t mean-
Kite: it?s fine Atsie I understand
Atsie: no you don?t I was just lying to-
Kite: you don?t have to protect me anymore I accept what you said*flies off in Orbital glider*
Atsie: Quinton you jerk! You brought him here knowing that I?d do anything to get away from you!
Quinton: what me? I?d never do that
Atsie:*grabs his shirt collar with left hand and holds him against a wall* I can?t believe you?d do that!*right hand starts to glow and get warm; eyes get snake pupils* you?re as bad as Vetrix!
Quinton: how dare you insult Vetrix!
Atsie: you come here expecting my help in a fake mission make me insult my only friend and you say I?m insulting you?! You?ve got some nerve pal!*holds now flaming fist to his face*
Quinton: no please! I was merely playing around
Kite:*hears them shouting* what the?*turns around and flies back*
*Koonai runs up onto the roof to them*
Koonai: Atsie!*crest glows*
Atsie: what now?!
Koonai: I really hate doing this*shoots water(!?) at her fist and puts out the fire* Atsie valance isn?t the answer
*Kite lands behind them*
Quinton: please get this crazy girl away from me!
Atsie: you have nothing to say blue boy!
Koonai: Ats what did he do wrong?
Atsie: first he ruined my life then he made me insult my friend without me know he was here
Koonai:*shocked; breaks Atsie?s grip on Quinton* get out of her dude or else you?ll have to face both of us at once
Koonai:*hugs Atsie* I?m sorry Ats
Atsie:*cries on his shoulder* I?m sorry you should never see me like that
Koonai:*puts hands on her shoulders* do you regret saying those things about your friend?
Atsie: yes of course
Koonai: then I?m sure he?ll forgive you
Koonai: yeah- Kite? Is that you?
Kite: yeah it?s me long time no see Koonai
Koonai:*they shake hands* where have you been?
Koonai: you still in the Number hunting biasness?
*Quattro walks up to them*
Atsie:*eyes dart to him* no
Koonai: Atsie this is-
Atsie: Kite Tenjo I know he?s the friend
Koonai: ohh man you messed up bad Atsie
Asie:*flicks his forehead* looks I know alright and I?m sorry for what I said I thought Quinton wanted me to go on a stupid mission with him and hurt you which I would never do but when I noticed that you were behind me I regretted saying everything
Kite: apology accepted
Koonai: glad that?s over- well night guys I?m heading in*leaves*
Atsie: so uh Kite are you doing anything tomorrow?
Kite: no why?
Atsie: well the Grand Prix is tomorrow and I was wondering if you wanted to come
Kite: I?ll see if I can make it
Atsie: cool night Kite*kisses him on the cheek; goes back inside*
Kite:*blushes* uh bye*leaves on Orbital glider*
#Inside the condo#
Atsie:*walks into room and puts on pjs* I still can?t believe I?m back*goes to sleep*
Kite:*is sitting next to Hart* don?t worry Hart I got more numbers to help you so you?ll be fine soon
*Heartland walks in*
Heartland: good evening Kite did you get anymore numbers?
Kite:*glares at him* yes*gives him more number cards* by the way Hart and I have our day off tomorrow
Heartland:*confused* day off?
Kite: I?m taking Hart to a race tomorrow he needs to get out more
Heartland: o-of course but Nistro shall come with you to make sure nothing happens
Kite: fine as long as he doesn?t get in our way
Heartland: I?ll make sure to tell him good night Kite*leaves*
Kite: you too Hart*leaves*
That?s it for part 15! (Please approve.)
????: can I help you?
Atsie: uhh I?m looking for Jesse Anderson Kaiba
????: and you are?
Atsie: uh I?m his daughter Atsie Kaiba
????:*smiles widely* well look no further Ats
Jesse: I see you go my message
Jesse:*hugs her back* that?s my little spark
Atsie:*lets go of him* are you gonna come home?
Jesse: of course as long as your mother doesn?t smother me
*Suki rides up to them in her Runner and gets off*
Suki: of course I?ll smother you I haven?t seen you in 18 years
Atsie: come on dad do we have to drag you home?
Jesse: nah I was just joking
Suki: thank you for helping Atsie and Koonai Yusei
Yusei: no problem
Jesse: so you?re the famous Yusei Fudo I?ve heard so much about?
Yusei: uh yes sir
Jesse: don?t yes sir me- I?m not that old
Atsie:*checks gazer; nods at Yusei* tomorrow
Yusei:*nods back* tomorrow
Koonai: what?s tomorrow?
Atsie: grand prix
Koonai: I?ll be there- as soon as I get a ticket
Atsie:*waves a ticket in front of him* you mean like this?
Koonai: how did you get that?
Suki: I?m in the pit crew so they gave me a deal
Koonai: you?re in the pit crew for 5Ds?
Atsie: yep*gives him the ticket* sometimes during the race I can get you into the pit
Koonai: why so I can cool down the Runners?
Atsie: partially plus you?re my favorite brother
Koonai: I?m your only brother
Atsie: well you?re my favorite only brother
*they all start talking about the WRGP*
Jesse:*walks over to them(he was talking to Suki)* what?s going on tomorrow?
Jesse: come on you can tell me
Atsie: we have a race tomorrow: Yusei?s racing I?m in the pit crew and Koonai?s gonna watch
Jesse: the World Racing Grand Prix?
Atsie: yeah are you mad?
Jesse: why would I be mad? My kids are going to New Domino city!
Atsie: well we better head back to the hide out so Bruno and I can fix up the Runners before the race see ya tonight dad
*Atsie Koonai and Yusei ride back to Satellite*
Atsie:*is cleans Jack?s Runner Koonai is with her* man I can?t believe dad?s been hiding in mom?s old condo for 18 years
Koonai:*is cleaning Crow?s* yeah our family?s back together it?s pretty hard to process- oof!*is hit in the gut with 1 of the wings extending*
Atsie:*chuckles* you okay Koo?
Koonai:*is dazed* uh 3 times 6 is 36?*falls on the floor*
Atsie: O_O yep he?s fine*walks over to him and slaps him* wakey wakey Koonai
Koonai:*wakes up* what happened?
Atsie: I slapped you
Koonai: ok well I finished Crow?s Blackwing next up Yusei?s
Atsie: ok I still gotta finish Jack?s*walks over to it and starts cleaning it*
#20 minutes later#
*Atsie is at her condo on the roof*
Atsie:*sits down on roof and lets feet dangle* this is my home I was born here now I?m back
*someone walks up behind her*
????: I thought your home was Heartland
Atsie:*turns around; eyes turn gold and get snake pupils* what are you doing here Quinton?
Quinton: I can?t say hello to my student?
Atsie: what do you want?
Quinton: your help
Atsie why would I help you?
Quinton: I took you in and showed you how to contain your powers I he-
Atsie: you really think I?d believe that lie?
Quinton:*shocked* how did you-
Atsie: I played along for awhile but we both know that I lived here for my childhood
Quinton: it involves Kite
That?s all for pant 14! (Please approve.)
#team 5D?s hideout the following morning#
*Atsie is on top of the roof looking outside*
Koonai:*comes up and sees her* morning sis
Atsie: morning Koonai
Koonai: everything okay?
Atsie: yeah just thinking
Koonai: what?s wrong?
Atsie: I was just thinking: what if he actually didn?t make it?
Koonai: of course he did*takes flash drive out of pocket* you have your D-pad with you?
Atsie:*takes it out of vest pocket* yeah why?
Koonai:*plugs the drive into her D-pad and types something* you?ll see*a picture of Jesse Anderson(GX) appears on screen*
Jesse on the screen: hello kids by the time you?re watching this video I?ll have disappeared and you 2 would?ve found each other *it fuzzes* I?m sending my coronets to your D-Pad now I?ll see you soon Atsie and Koonai*screen goes black*
Koonai: I got this a year after being in the facility
Atsie: he-he?s alive! We should go find him
Koonai: but isn?t the WRGP in 2 days?
Atsie: oh yeah I forgot I guess we?ll have to wait
*Yusei walks up to them*
Atsie:*turns around and sees him* hey Mr. cool and confident
Yusei: morning you guys you gonna come down and eat?
Atsie: of course
*they all go down and eat*
Atsie: no I don?t wanna duel yet
Jack: leave her alone Leo
Koonai:*whispers to Yusei* is this normal?
Yusei:*whispers back* yeah you better watch out though Leo might challenge you next
Koonai:*chuckles* well I left my deck in Domino so he can?t
Atsie: what you left your deck back at home?
Atsie: I can go get it if you want where did you leave it? KaibaCorp?
Koonai: well yeah but-*Atsie runs out the door onto her Runner* and she?s gone
Crow: she can?t leave the Satellite without Sector Security seeing her
Yusei: I?ll go with her*leaves and follows Atsie*
#on the way to Domino#
Atsie:*sees Yusei coming; he comes up on her screen* what now Yusei?
Yusei:*pulls up next to her* you?ll get caught if you keep going
Yusei: you?ll go back to the Facility
Atsie: who said I was leaving?*stops*
Yusei:*stops too* what do you mean?
Atsie:*takes off helmet* I?m gonna go through the tunnels 1 of them leans right into the center on Domino
Yusei: at least let me come with you
Atsie: I know you?ll come even if I say no*rides into the tunnels*
Yusei:*follows her* yep
*they park their Runners outside of KaibaCorp*
Atsie: my mom?s back from Heartland so she?ll help*they walk inside*
Lady at front desk: welcome back Ms. Kaiba
Atsie: hey Kate where?s my mom?
Kate: her office
Atsie: thanks*her and Yusei go up to her mom?s office*
Yusei: you sure about this?
Atsie: what?s there not to be sure about?*knocks on the door*
Suki: come in
*Atsie and Yusei walk in*
Suki:*smiles* what are you 2 doing here?
Atsie: I?m looking for Koonai?s deck he said he left it here
Suki:*takes it out of drawer* it?s right h- wait did you say that he told you? He?s okay?
Atsie: yep he?s back in Satellite with the rest of the team
Suki: where has he been?
Yusei: the facility
Suki: well Koonai always was a trouble maker as a child*gives Atsie his deck* any luck on finding Jesse?
Atsie: would you call his coronets an answer?
Atsie: Koonai had a flash drive from dad with where he is
Suki: may I see?
Atsie: sure*gives her the D-Pad*
Suki:*looks at the map* it looks like you?re gonna see him very soon
Atsie: where is he?
Suki: my old condo
Atsie: then let?s go!
*Koonai walks in*
Koonai: hey don?t leave without me
Suki: Koonai!*hugs him*
Koonai: hi mom
Yusei: I better go back to the team
Suki: well actually I have a meeting coming up soon so you could go with them if you?d like
Yusei: you can count on me
Suki: ok you 2 give Jesse a big hug for me
Atsie: you got it mom
*Koonai Atsie and Yusei go out to their Runners*
Atsie: any idea where the old condo is?
Koonai/Yusei:*anime sweat drop* nope
*someone walks up behind them*
???: maybe I can help
Atsie:*turns around* oh hi Soul you know where the condo is?
Soul: yep*gets on Runner* follow me
*they get on their Runners and ride to the Condo*
Atsie:*knocks on the door* hello?
*Someone opens the door*
That?s all for part 13! (Please approve.)
#the next morning in 5Ds hideout#
Bruno: you mean she left in the morning without us?!
Akiza: and you didn?t stop her?
Yusei: look she?s in the hive and we need to get ready for the next part of the plan
Jack: that?s where I come in isn?t it?
Yusei: yes and you know what to do?
Jack: ask for anyone named Kaiba or anyone who knows the Kaibas because I have questions for them
Bruno: well I hacked the system so she?s in the cell with Koonai
Ricky (dog) : woof!! (I wanna help!)
Crow: what?s up Ricky?
Ricky:*turns towards Atsie?s Runner* ruff! (I can help!)
Bruno: I think he wants to help Atsie
Ricky: woof! Woof! (yes! Finally!) ~no wonder he?s Atsie?s boyfriend he?s a smart 1~
Jack: well it?s time to bust some people out of jail*leaves on Runner*
Yusei: I think Ricky could actually help us*writes something down on a piece of paper and puts in a capsule then puts it in Ricky?s collar* Ricky I need you to go find Atsie and give this to her
*Ricky runs off*
Bruno: what did you give him?
Yusei: a note for Ats telling her that she?s in the cell with her brother
Crow: smart thinking Yus
#Atsie and Koonai?s cell#
Atsie: so Chris you a duelist?
Chris/Koonai: I was until I was arrested and they took my deck
Atsie: well*takes deck out of boot* wanna duel?
Chris/Koonai: how did you sneak that in?
Atsie: they never checked my boot*hears barking outside* huh?*looks through the bars and sees Ricky running towards her* Ricky!
*Ricky sits down in front of the cell*
Chris/Koonai: who?s that?
Atsie: my friend Ricky*takes the note out of his collar and reads it* very good
Chris/Koonai: what?s up?
Atsie: you tell me Koonai
Chris/Koonai: what? My name isn?t K-
Atsie:*opens card locket showing a picture of Atsie and Koonai when they were kids* you?re lying and you know it you have the same hair attitude and I just knew you were him
Chris/Koonai:*looks away* fine you caught me little sis
Atsie:*hugs him* I missed you
Koonai:*hugs back* I missed you too
*a guard walks toward their cell*
Atsie:*lets go of him* Ricky go find Yusei*he runs away; puts deck back in boot*
Guard: all right Satellite scum get out*opens the door and they walk into a large room where all the other prisoners are waiting*
Atsie:*whispers to Koonai* when Jack asks if anyone is a Kaiba raise your hand and I will too
Koonai:*nods* got it
*they go to their places*
Jack: now I?ll get right down to business so you all can get back to whatever you were doing I?m looking for anyone with the last name Kaiba or anyone who knows the Kaibas if you apply to any of these please raise your hand
*Koonai and Atsie raise their hands*
Jack: you 2 come with me everyone else dismissed
*the prisoners and guards leave*
Atsie: nicely done Jacky
Jack: so you?re Koonai?
Jack: we better get going before they come back
Atsie: then come on!
*Jack and Koonai follow Atsie outside*
Jack: where did they put your Runners?
Atsie:*takes something out of pocket and presses a button* you might wanna stand back*her Runner comes over to her and stops and Ricky chases it* Ricky go find Koonai?s Runner!
*Ricky runs off again*
Koonai: I didn?t know your Runner looked like Blue-eyes*it looks like BEWD is climbing on top of it*
Atsie: well you left before I got this 1
Jack: I?ll contact Yusei so we can all meet up*calls him on Runner*
Yusei:*rides over with Bruno Akiza and Crow* no need for that Jack
Atsie: Yusei this is my brother
Yusei: nice to finally meet you I?m Yusei
Koonai: Koonai*they shake hands*
Ricky:*far away* WOOF! (hey I found something!!!)
Atsie: coming boy!*runs after him*
Koonai: ~she?s so different from the Atsie I knew when we were kids she?s a lot stronger and smarter~
Atsie:*from far away* hey Koonai does the Dragon Lord look like you?re riding Blue-eyes?
Koonai:*walks over to her* yeah why?
Atsie:*is standing on top of a crate opening it* I think I found it*the lid flies open revealing Koonai?s Duel Runner; Atsie jumps down and sees it* whoa
Koonai: nice find Ats
Atsie: Ricky found it I just opened the box*shrugs* well it looks like it can run just fine*checks engine* nothing missing or broken- why don?t you try it out?
Koonai: okay*gets on and starts the engine* it?s good to be back
*they all ride to 5Ds hideout*
That?s it for part 12! (Please approve.)
#Atsie?s room the day of her plan#
Atsie:*is wearing book2 outfit (see my characters bios)* don?t worry Koonai you?ll be home soon
*Yusei knocks on the door*
Atsie: come in Yus
*he walks in*
Yusei: you got a package*gives her a large box*
Atsie:*shocked* i-it?s from Koonai*opens it* oh Ra*it?s his duel disk*
Yusei: what is that?
Atsie: the Dragon Lord- err his Duel Disk
Yusei: I wonder how he sent it while in prison
Atsie: yeah*mumbles* this makes me want to go even more*puts on the disk*
Yusei: you?re no leaving tonight are you?
Atsie: what gives you that idea?
Yusei: you care too much about your brother to wait
Atsie: you can read me like a book can?t you?
Yusei: don?t tell Bruno that
Atsie:*chuckles* you would?ve liked Koonai he?s a lot like you
#the hive (prepare for your first look at Koonai Kaiba!)#
Koonai: I hope Rose (Atsie?s fake name) got my package
His roommate Jake: who?s this Rose you keep talking about Chris? (Koonai?s fake name)
Koonai: a girl I knew really well back before I was a criminal
Jake: was she your girlfriend or something?
Koonai:*spittakes* Ra no! She was more of a family friend
Jake: well get this: Atsie Kaiba just came back from Heartland
Koonai:*shocked* oh really?
Jake: yep I hope they catch her she?s 1 of the most coolest criminals ever!
Koonai: I guess it would be cool
#outside the prison#
*Yusei and Atsie are doing a fake duel with Atsie?s new Runner*
Yusei: you ready for this Atsie?
Yusei: well here they come*speeds up* good luck Ats
Atsie: make sure you don?t look back
*security Runners chase Atsie*
Trudge: get back here Satellite!
Atsie:*acting* oh no I?m running out of gas*slows down* I need to get away!
Trudge: no chance of that!
Atsie: ~good they?re not paying attention to Yusei (he rode away) ~*stops* fine I give up
Trudge: get her Runner and take her in!
*Atsie is sitting down across from Armstrong*
Armstrong: I?ll ask you 1 last time: where is Yusei Fudo?
Atsie: and I?ll tell you for the last time: I don?t know
Armstrong: fine then*presses a button and Atsie is shocked*
Atsie:*groan* that won?t work on me
*10 minutes later*
Armstrong: you were wrong girly*Atsie is passed out on the floor with smoke coming off her* hey boys! *4 men walk in* give her the mark!
*the men drag Atsie away*
#after Atsie gets a new mark (triangle under right side of lip)#
Guard 1: don?t worry Satellite you?re gonna go back to somewhere you were a long time ago
Atsie:*is being dragged into a cell; sarcastic* oh goodie
Guard 2:*opens the door* Jake it?s your lucky day*drags him out and takes him away*
Guard 1:*throws Atsie inside the cell* welcome home Satellite*closes the door and leaves*
????:*helps her sit on a bed* you okay?
Atsie:*weakly* my arm- I think it?s broken
????: I?ll help*wraps bandages around her arm* the name?s Chris by the way
Atsie: thanks I?m Atsie*notices his white hair with black streak* you look like someone I know
Chris: I get that a lot
Atsie: I mean really familiar
#meanwhile in Heartland#
*Kite is waiting for the WDC finals to start*
Kite:*is kneeling next to Hart?s bed* don?t worry Hart you?ll be better soon- I promise
*Dextra is watching from a doorway*
Heartland on a speaker: oh Kite you still have a job to do
Kite: yes Mr. Heartland*leaves*
Dextra:*walks out from behind doorway after Kite leaves; sigh* poor Kite he?s so worried about his brother
Hart: w-who?s there?
Dextra:*leaves quietly* that was close
Hart: hmm I thought I heard someone*goes back to sleep*
#back to our main plot point#
Atsie:*takes pieces of Koonai?s duel disk out of boots and puts it back together* Chris must be Koonai no one else I know has that necklace
*Chris/Koonai listens to her*
#the next morning#
That?s all for par 11! (Please approve.)
I use my Word document then I copy and post it onto here but there is a side effect: the 've 's and 't turn into ?ve ?s ?t but that's a small price to pay, I usually make them 3 to 4 pages long and it takes me 2-3 days to write 1 part.
Jack: I?ll get us in*talks to the guard and they all sneak inside*
Leo: I didn?t think you were gonna show- wait where?s Atsie?
Jack: she?s busy
Leo: then why are you here?
Luna: to talk to you
Leo: I don?t want to talk I want to duel!
#a rooftop in Satellite#
Atsie:*is crying* I miss you dad
*Yusei walks up to her*
Yusei: may I join you?
Atsie:*wipes tears* uh sure
Yusei:*sits down next to her* is everything okay?
Atsie:*holds card shaped necklace*
Yusei: it?s the anniversary isn?t it? You can tell me Atsie
Atsie: when I was a couple months old my dad put my brother and I in capsules like you and sent us to Domino when mom couldn?t take care of us she sent us to Heartland when we were 5(and 6) bu when my brother was 13 he went to find dad and I haven?t seen him since
Yusei: you have a brother?
Atsie: yeah Koonai
Yusei: what do you think happened to him?
Atsie: well I know he came here to find dad
Yusei: maybe he?s in the jail!
Atsie: you really think so?
Yusei: well what does he look like?
Atsie:*opens necklace and show him a picture of him* this is Koonai
Yusei: I think I?ve seen someone like hat in the hive
Atsie: really? Is he okay?
Yusei: from what I could see yes
Atsie: I need to go after him
Yusei: how will you get in?
Atsie: how fast is your Runner?
Yusei: pretty fast why?
Atsie: I?m gonna need a duel scooter
Atsie: you?ll see
Yusei: well come on you?ve got a duel with Leo
*they go to Kaiba Dome*
Leo: for the last time I don?t want to duel any of you!
Atsie:*is very serious* you don?t need to
Leo: took you long enough
Atsie: are we gonna talk or duel?
Leo: I?m waiting for you*gets on Duel Board and starts riding away*
Atsie:*follows him on Runner*
(sorry guys I can?t do the duel scene or else I?ll run of room but Atsie won)
Atsie:*puts up next to him* you okay Leo?
Leo:*is back to normal* w-what happened?
Atsie: yet you?re okay*helps him stand up* so you don?t remember anything that happened tonight?
Leo: nope why? Did I do something wrong?
Atsie: of course you didn?t*helps him walk over to the others; whispers to Yusei* he?s back to normal
Luna: well come on Leo let?s go home*they leave*
Akiza: so what happened to him?
Atsie: no idea
Yusei: so are you ever gonna tell us about this genius plan of yours?
Atsie: I?m going to sneak into the prison
Atsie: I made a slow Runner for my plan: I?ll be dueling Yusei they?ll see us dueling and try to catch us Yusei will speed off and they?ll catch me
Jack: what?ll you do after that?
Atsie: once I?m in they?ll put me in the hive that?s where you come in Jack: you?ll call a meeting and ask for anyone with the last name Kaiba or someone who knows the Kaibas and then Koonai might show up
Yusei: here?s 1 problem with that plan: you?ll get another mark
Atsie: I know but that?s a price I?ll have to pay Bruno do you think you could hack into the mainframe and make it look like I don?t have half of my marks?
Bruno: I can try
Akiza: when are you gonna try this plan?
Atsie: tomorrow night
Yusei: but it?s 4 days until the grand prix what if you don?t get back in time?
Atsie: I have an escape route all mapped out I?ve planned for every possible problem
Jack: well it sounds foolproof
Bruno: I?m guessing none of us are gonna go with you on this mission?
Atsie: I can?t put any of you in danger I know Yusei can make it away from them as long as I?m a distraction
Bruno: well you can talk more about this plan later it?s already 1 a.m.
That?s it for part 10! (Please approve.)
Looks up. Shakes head, face covered in tears. I grab my phone, since my phone record calls i out it on and gives it to them. - Wolf, you should of been the one to be hit. You just had to stop. - Says Wolf's big brother. - Huh? - says wolf. - It's your fault! - says the voice. - What do you mean?- says Wolf. - You were there. - He says. _ yes, I was there. - Wolf answers. - I didn't know it was coming. - - Yes, you did. - Hisses the voice. - You did all of this. You destroyed your own parents! - - What? - says Wolf. - IT'S YOUR FAULT!!!- screams the voice. _ IT ISN'T MY FAULT!!! - Yells Wolf into the phone. The recording stops. Wolf has her head in her palms, crying harder.
*Atsie walks out with the fixed Runner*
Atsie: are you okay Wolf?
*Bruno walks over too*
Bruno: well the break are a little strong but-*Atsie covers mouth*
Atsie: what happened Wolf?
Bruno: is everything okay?
Wolf's phone rings. She answers it. - Huh?..... What do you mean?............. - Wolf says into phone sounding uneasy. - Yes, I was there.............. I didn't know it was coming............ It's not my fault. - She says her eyes tearing up. - What?........ IT ISN'T MY FAULT!!!! - Wolf screams into phone. She hangs up. She sees a dark corner to hide in. She runs over there, she sits down and covers her face with her hands crying.
*they?re all in disguises*
*Yusei Jack Akiza Bruno and Luna are waiting*
Atsie:*criminal marks are covered with makeup* hey
Akiza: hey guys
*Atsie and Crow sit down with them*
Jack: so why are we here Yusei?
Yusei: well it?s 5 days until the WRGP and I thought we could celebrate
*waitress walks over*
Waitress: what would you all like?
Waitress: 7 ramens coming up*leaves*
Akiza: so you?re really gonna duel Leo tonight Atsie?
Atsie: yes Luna said that he been acting odd so I?m going to fix that
*Carly walks in looking for them*
Carly: I wonder where they are- huh?*sees them all talking; walks over* hi I?m Carly have any of you seen Jack Atlas or Crow Hogan?
Atsie: I thought you didn?t talk to strangers
Carly: well I?m looking for someone so I do
Yusei:*chuckles* nope haven?t seen them sorry
Carly: then who are you?*takes off his cap* Yusei Fudo!
Atsie:*covers Carly?s mouth* can it! Do you want all of Satellite to know we?re here?
Carly:*pulls off her hand* and who are you missy?
Atsie:*takes off hat* answer that question yourself
Carly:*fixes glasses* A-atsie Kaiba?
Atsie: in the flesh
Carly: can I interview you?
Atsie: why would you need to? Jacky?s right over there*points to him*
Carly: well right now you?re as famous as Jack for coming back here
Atsie: fine you can interview me tomorrow
Carly: awesome! Bye guys*leaves*
*waitress gives them their food*
Waitress: who will take the bill?
Atsie: I got it guys*pays*
Waitress: enjoy*walks away*
#after dinner in the tunnels*
*Atsie is doing test laps around the tunnels and Rally is timing her*
Rally: man she?s fast!
Crow: I could?ve told you that!
Rally: no I mean she?s as fast as Yusei when I gave him that new chip!
Yusei: but she doesn?t have 1
Rally: she doesn?t? Wow that?s even cooler
*Atsie stops in front of them*
Atsie: how was that?
Rally: 2 minutes!
Atsie: a new record? Sweet*pulls Runner into garage and takes off helmet*
Rally: so what kind of chip do you have?
Atsie: I?ve got an old 1 my dad made for me
Jack: this place is such a dump I don?t understand how you can survive down here
Atsie: it?s no giant skyscraper (like his) but its home
Crow:*gets on Atsie?s Runner* ~heh-heh she?ll never see this coming~*starts up the engine and rides away*
Atsie:*takes a FOB out of pocket and presses the button*
Crow:*the Runner goes back to Atsie?s garage and it throws him out onto the ground* AHH!!
Atsie: trying to take a little ride Crow?
Crow: uh maybe?
Atsie:*helps him up* that was my theft protection system
Crow: I can tell*rubs forehead*
Rally:*is laughing* good joke Yusei
Yusei: it?s no joke Rally
Rally:*stops laughing* what?
Atsie:*walks over to them* what now?
Rally: you?re 1 of the most wanted criminals in the world?
Rally: but you look only 15!
Atsie: I?m 18 actually and you look good without your hat*twirls hat in hand*
Rally: how did-?*takes it and puts it back on* I guess you are Speed Runner
Jack: Speed Runner?
Atsie: that was my codename when I was a criminal
Crow: hey isn?t it the anniversary of your d-*mouth gets covered by Bruno*
Atsie:*frowns* I?ll be right back*gets on Runner and rides away*
Crow: what did I say?
Bruno: why did you want to bring up the anniversary of her dad disappearing?
Crow: it?s important
Bruno:*sigh* I better go find her
Yusei: no I?ll go you don?t know where she went plus I know how she feels
Akiza: maybe she went to duel Leo
Yusei: you?re right! We better go to the Kaiba Dome and watch
*they all go to the Kaiba Dome*
That?s all for part 9! (Please approve.)
Atsie: uh what do you think Bruno?
Bruno: easy this'll probably take about 24 hours
Atsie: then let's get started!
*they take the Runner into garage and start fixing it*
~We will Mind Crush the world!
"I summon Kuriboh in attack mode!"
"it's time to blast this duel to pieces!"
"Gimmie back my Buster Sword!!"
"my dragons are ready for action!"
Wolf- Well.............. It's a long story.
( Flash Back Time!)
Is riding on duel runner. All of a sudden I am thrown off it. Shard of glass and metal flies and lands deeply into my back. Duel runner is crushed.
( Flash back ends. )
Wolf- So, you can fix it?-