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Date: 05/08/14 4:43 PM
From: Andi1212

Ok I hope you guys like it!
Chapter 1: What have I done!
Alexandria: (Picks up her phone and calls Aletheia, Emma, Andi, Diego, Daniel, and Tony.) Guys I need you quick! (Everybody that she called comes to the house.)
Emma: What happend?!
Alexandria; Lets just say we got a little to close! (Alexandria quickly calls 911)
Diego: Oh yeah because of the dark magic!
Alexandria: (Alexandria finishs talking and hangs up.) They are coming.
Emma: Ok good!
Andi: Let me check his pulse! (Andi runs over to Mac.) Hes not breathing!
A guy: (911 busts open the door.) Ok is that him? (The guy points to Mac.)
Alexandria: Yeah!
A guy: Ok. (The guy ties Mac to a board and they carry him away and drive away.)
Alexandria: I hope he is ok! (Alexandria crys) This is all my fault!
Aletheia: No Alexandria its your powers!
Alexandria: Do you guys believe me? I am glad my birth sister believes me.
Aletheia: I have something to tell you!
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Date: 06/16/14 11:10 PM
From: witchgal12

water5456 maybe I could make a post where we could discuss who wins! Or you could tell me who youd like to pick and then Ill ok the character if I like it!

Also, I kind of already wrote it Andi1212, but maybe Jake broke Victoria's heart and then she got over it and got together with Logan, but the 2nd time was too much for her, causing the Victoria today

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Date: 06/16/14 6:34 PM
From: Andi1212

Not to mess this up or anything and you don't have to change it you can just act like I didn't write it when I was doing the fanfic but Jake was the one who broke Victoria and Alexandria's heart so.....................
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Date: 06/16/14 4:57 PM
From: water5456

Just wondering, could I help decide which character wins? I have an idea in real life who would walk in that door. If you don't want me to help then by all means I'm fine with that. Also, I know about that. Just curious, did you listen to the other songs?
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Date: 06/13/14 11:18 PM
From: witchgal12

(heres the next chapter yall!)
Aletheia: *rings door bell, Victoria answers* hey V.
Victoria: hey, come on in. *they go to her room*
Aletheia: *sees a door* hey whats in here..
Victoria: no-dont! *Aletheia opens door to see a music room full of instruments and mikes*
Aletheia: Wow.. this is amazing..
Victoria: Really?
Aletheia: yah.. wait, do you sing?
Victoria: yah.
Aletheia: *gasps* so do I! its like a way..
Both: to truly express my feelings
Aletheia: wow.. hey.. you know.. I do know one thing we can do at this sleepover.. you know, before the others arrive..* goes to the piano and starts playing it. Victoria recognizes the song.)
(two black Cadillacs by Carrie underwood, edited)
Victoria: Two black Cadillacs driving in a slow parade
Headlights shining bright in the middle of the day
One is for his girlfriend,
The other for the woman who loved him all night
Two black Cadillacs meeting for the first time
Both: And the friends said he was a good man
And his sister said he was a good friend
Aletheia: But the women in the two black veils didn?t bother to cry
Victoria: Bye, Bye Bye, Bye
Both: Yeah they took turns laying a rose down
Threw a handful of dirt into the deep ground
Aletheia: He?s not the only one who had a secret to hide
Victoria: Bye bye, bye bye, bye Bye
Aletheia: Two months ago his girlfriend called the number on his phone
Turns out he'd been lying to both of them for oh so long
They decided then he?d never get away with doing this to them
Two black Cadillacs waiting for the right time, right time

Both: And the friends said he was a good man
And his sister said he was a good friend
Aletheia: But the women in the two black veils didn?t bother to cry
Victoria: Bye, Bye Bye, Bye
Both: Yeah they took turns laying a rose down
Threw a handful of dirt into the deep ground
Aletheia: He?s not the only one who had a secret to hide
Victoria: Bye bye, bye bye, bye Bye
Aletheia: Yeah yeah *song over, both smile* that was fun
Victoria: Yeah, it was. A lot like my relationship with Logan.
Aletheia: Logan?
Victoria: My ex-boyfriend.
Aletheia: Oh. What happened?
Victoria: He told me he didnt like me in that way.. you know *pause, Aletheia nods* he liked me.. but he didnt like me as a girlfriend.. he liked Katie as a girlfriend..
Aletheia: you mean..
Victoria: yep, been dating her.. the whole time. Theres 1 reason I hate the panthers.. *Aletheia gives her a blank look* teen populars. Trust me, you hated them too.
Aletheia: Haha, surprise for me. All my friends at my old school were populars.. and I was one of them.
Victoria: well trust me.. they arent nice.
Aletheia: Note for when school starts again.
Victoria: haha.. sowhat about you and Diego?
Aletheia: we werent like that.. we liked each other.. but he liked Andi to I guess..
Victoria: yah.. *one of victorias friends enters*
(alright guys so Im gonna have a character contest for victorias friend. Ill make another post for this new character and hopefully you guys will wanna make a character, cant wait to see all your Ideas!)

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Date: 06/13/14 8:41 PM
From: witchgal12

thanks water5456!
Working on the next chapter now!
Also, thanks too you, I now listen to two black cadillacs ALL THE TIME!
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Date: 06/13/14 6:15 PM
From: water5456

Alright, here is the boy.
Logan
(at the time she was 16 and he was 15) Now he would be 18
He's intelligent, kind, quiet, and level-headed.
He's really pale, dark haired, and brown eyed.
Academics and hanging with friends
being bored and cruel people
He broke V's heart by not telling her that he didn't and never had liked her like that, she was crushed. Crushed and furious. V took revenge but her heart is still broken.
They were in class together and V took action on the huge crush she had for him. They dated for a few months until the heartbreak. Their seats were right next to each other so she used to talk to him and they became friends before she told him.
It was just like you would imagine dating I would think. Kissing, movies, ect. The only difference was that they never slow danced.
That would be the guy who broke her heart, there you go.
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Date: 06/12/14 8:46 PM
From: witchgal12

To: water5456

thanks for the ideas water5456! Ill update soon, I just need to know, who is the person who broke Victoria's heart.
Itd be great if you could make a character sheet for him, but if you don't wanna you can just tell me a name.

If you do make a form, try to include these things:
Name
Age
Personality
Appearance
Likes
Dielikes
How he broke Victorias heart
How he met Victoria
What it was like when they were dating

you can add more, but Id like to know that at least (or if you just wanna give me a name, that's fine)

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Date: 06/09/14 9:16 PM
From: iluvtv101

This is really good!!
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Date: 06/09/14 5:09 PM
From: water5456

I know you said it in the last post. I just thought I'd let you know. Also if I were holding a sleepover where the both were heartbroken I'd play songs like 2 Black Cadillacs and Cowboy Cassanova by Carrie Underwood and Ghost of You by Selena Gomez. The songs would be either heartbreak, revenge, or getting through things songs with an occasional get up and dance song. Just saying so you know some more ideas.
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Date: 06/09/14 10:45 AM
From: witchgal12

cool so does mine!
Thanks for telling me that, gave me an idea for the next part!
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Date: 06/08/14 7:00 PM
From: water5456

My character perfected. Just so you know my character sings too. I don't think I ever said that, but she does.
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Date: 06/08/14 4:22 PM
From: Andi1212

Continue!
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Date: 06/07/14 10:41 PM
From: dijour

yay girls night!
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Date: 06/06/14 10:35 PM
From: witchgal12

(and continuing with the interviews!)
Tony: Hi Im Tony, Im an awesome magician
Victoria: *sarcastic* sure you are
Tony: And Im smart, and you totally have a crush on me and-
Victoria: As her bodyguard and friend I advise you leave now
Tony: But-
Victoria: LEAVE! *tony leaves*
Aletheia: Did I really have a crush on him?
Victoria: What do you think?
Aletheia: Next!
Daniel: Hi, Im Daniel, captain of the swim team
Aletheia: which Im on
Daniel: Yah. I like to sing
Aletheia: hey me too!
Daniel: Really? Cool.
Aletheia: Yah I do it all the time
Daniel: Really, you never did it around us
Aletheia: Huh, I wonder what happened.
Victoria: You like to sing?
Aletheia: Yah, back at eclipsus me and Jake would.. *makes a sad expression*
Victoria: *comforts her* its alright, youll get over it. *looks at Daniel giving him a ?you can go- expression. Daniel leaves*
Diego: Hey.. Im Diego
Aletheia: Aletheia, but I guess you already know that
Victoria: Why are YOU here.
Diego: Look, I know I caused drama, but Im your best chance, Im the person she can most relate too.
Victoria: *glares at him* you broke her heart.
Aletheia: Wit a minute, were you my..
Diego: yeah, your boyfriend.
Aletheia: WHY THE HECK DID YOU BREAK MY HEART!
Diego: BECAUSE YOU BROKE MINE!
Aletheia: HOW?!?
Diego: YOU KISSED JAKE!
Victoria: Alright, this conversation is over!!!!!!!
Aletheia: HE KISSED ME! *they both pause*
Victoria: you remember that..
Aletheia: *realizes what she just said* yeah.. I do. *surprised that she remembers*
Diego: why did you kiss back though?
Aletheia: I didnt know what to do.. I was shocked. But.. I guess.. some of my memory came back then.. I dont know of what.. but something came back. But after.. I woke up, *starts to cry* and there was screaming, and you were yelling at me that we were over.. and I-I- I didnt know what to do!
Diego: Aletheia..
Victoria: Alright out
Diego: w-what?
Victoria: Out! I will NOT stand around while my best friend is crying her eyes out because of SOME BOY! Out!
Diego: But-
Victoria: OUT!
Diego: *takes one last glance at Aletheia, turns and leaves*
Victoria: *goes over to Aletheia and comforts her* its alright, its alright
Aletheia: *still sad, voice all cracked* I dont know what to do V. I love 2 guys, and both of them broke my heart and will never love me again.
Victoria: Boys are like that. They make stupid decisions, and it always turns out terrible. I think you need a break from boys. How about my house tonight, a girls night.
Aletheia: Really?
Victoria: Yah, me and my girls do it all the time. Alexandria used to join us, but now she has a boyfriend.. so..
Aletheia: Id like that *nods head* Id really like that.
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Date: 06/05/14 3:58 PM
From: water5456

That's so my character! Thanks! Continue!!
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Date: 06/04/14 11:32 PM
From: witchgal12

(alright continuing! Let the 1 on 1 talks begin..)
Emma: Hi, Im Emma
Aletheia: Aletheia
Emma: Well, we met as soon as you came here, you invited me over for a sleepover. Alexandria didnt exactly watch us very well, and the place got trashed.
Aletheia: *laughs* that definitely sounds like something I would do
Emma: Yah, your parents were furious! By the way, where are your parents..
Aletheia: Business trip, they took a boat there, their on their way back right now.
Emma: Well we better get your memory fixed soon!
Aletheia: Well I dont think they have noticed before.
Emma: Oh, well, anyways, you and my Best friend Andi both liked the same guy, but he chose you, so she got all sad, and Vicki comforted her.
Victoria: VICTORIA!! Doesnt ANYONE remember I HATE the nickname Vicki!!!
Emma: oops, sorry. *turns to Aletheia* now, try to see if you can remember anything about me.
Aletheia: Umm.. do you like glitter?
Emma: Yah!
Aletheia: Umm.. sorry, thats it.
Emma: Thats ok, I will get Andi *Andi comes in*
Andi: So, Im Andi.
Aletheia: Hi, so all I know about you so far is that we fought over the same guy, he chose me, but then chose you..
Andi: Yah.. not the best introduction.
Aletheia: Sorry..
Andi: Well, Im also an awesome tomboy, I was the only girl on the swim team, but then you joined.
Aletheia: I did?
Andi: Yep, youre almost faster than me, and Im the fastest on the team.
Aletheia: Well I was in a state championship this-well, last year.
Andi: Cool! You never talked about your past before
Aletheia: Andi, I didnt remember my past before. And now thats all I can remember, thats why your talking to me.
Andi: Oh, right. Well.. Ill go get Mac.. although he probably wont be very helpful..
Alexandria: Hey! I heard that!
Mac: Yah! And me too!
Andi: Well since you heard that Mac, hear this, your turn!
Mac: *comes in* so Im Mac!
Mac: I had a crush on her once, and we went on a date, and.. yeah *Aletheia just staring* umm.. Ill just get the next person.
Victoria: yeah.
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Date: 06/04/14 3:20 PM
From: water5456

That makes SO much more sense! Thank you!
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Date: 06/02/14 7:56 PM
From: witchgal12

oops!
Victoria: Wait, did you guys know about all the power stuff and.. *they nod their heads* SERIOUSLY! DID ONLY ME AND ALETHEIA NOT KNOW!! *nod their heads again* how long have you guys known?
Andi: since last year.
Victoria: AND YOU NEVER TOLD ME?!?
Alexandria: Calm down Victoria *turns to Andi and the others* what are you guys doing here!!!
Diego: Well we wanted to see if Aletheia was ok.
Emma: And we thought maybe we could help!
Alexandria: Help with what?
Diego: Getting Aletheias memory fixed.
Daniel: So she can remember who we are. And maybe if we each talk to her, she might start to remember things.
Aletheia: you know I may not know you all.. but Im right here, you dont need to talk like Im not.
Alexandria: would you mind if they talked to you?
Aletheia: Sure, but Im taking V with me.
Alexandria: Why?
Victoria: Do you not know what shes been through? Alexandria: Fine, you guys can talk. Whos first?
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Date: 06/02/14 3:45 PM
From: water5456

You have me confused on the last part. Did Alexandria say all that? Otherwise very good.
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Date: 06/02/14 10:48 AM
From: witchgal12

Victoria: Wait, did you guys know about all the power stuff and.. *they nod their heads* SERIOUSLY! DID ONLY ME AND ALETHEIA NOT KNOW!! *nod their heads again* how long have you guys known?
Andi: since last year.
Victoria: AND YOU NEVER TOLD ME?!?
Alexandria: Calm down Victoria *turns to Andi and the others* what are you guys doing here!!!
Diego: Well we wanted to see if Aletheia was ok.
Emma: And we thought maybe we could help!
Alexandria: Help with what?
Diego: Getting Aletheias memory fixed.
Daniel: So she can remember who we are. And maybe if we each talk to her, she might start to remember things.
Aletheia: you know I may not know you all.. but Im right here, you dont need to talk like Im not.
Alexandria: would you mind if they talked to you?
Aletheia: Sure, but Im taking V with me.
Alexandria: Why?
Alexandria: Do you not know what shes been through? The boyfriend she remembers thinks shes gone, and the one she cant broke up with her, if one of you guys makes her cry, someone has to be there.
Alexandria: Fine, you guys can talk, one on one. Whos first?
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