Vee sat on her purple bed, covered in a green blanket and was typing away on her computer, glancing up at the TV every so often. But it was Spongebob, a show she could not and would not watch. She flipped the channel and found that there was nothing on TV. At least nothing that interested her.
Bloo-med TV& She grumbled, switching to Avatar; The Last Air Bender. Now I gotta watch this&
Vee (And other children) lived in what looked and was like Earth, but it was different as well! She (And other children) is the only one who knows of this while everyone else just calls it Earth. She knows it is really called Tcefrep. Tcefrep, to avoid confusion, is pronounced Tick-Uh-Frep. It was created by the magical being from childrens minds. &Even though hers was slowly diminishing over the years, transforming into the most horrible thing ever known to children everywhere.
An adult mind.
Vee shook her head to free her mind of the feared thing, almost knocking her glasses off. She shoved them back up, laughing a second later about how she had acted like Jolene, a Toad on Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Old Door. Then laughed again, remembering Nastasia from Super Paper Mario. Yes, she was indeed crazy.
Why aint Psych on?! She exclaimed, flipping through the channels once again, hoping that a show she would be interested in would magically appear. She sighed and settled on Avatar: The Last Air Bender, rolling her eyes at Katara and her Mary-Sue-ness.
After an hour, Vee was surprisingly not on her computer. Instead she was in her brothers room, playing Super Smash Bros. Brawl with him.
Come on Nes! You just HAD to pick Marth, didnt you! She complained, furiously clicking her Wii remote buttons. Nes just smirked and continued to use his Smash on her, Luigi. SERIOUSLY, BRO?! Admit Luigi is the best!
No.
FINE. She then realized that she had to get working on Life In Zims House, or LIZH for short as she called it on Nick.com. Dude, this is the last one, kay? I gotta get to work.
Whatever&VEE! Quit throwing me!
Vee laughed and continued to throw Mario, and began to beat him up. She finally won. She got up and began to jump up and down, saying in a high pitched voice, What! What! What!
Yeah, yeah. Nes rolled his eyes. Bet you cant beat me again.
I know what youre trying to do and it aint working. She stated. I gotta go work on my stories! And I need to read some stories. Hopefully Loila, or Dee or even Melody has posted some new chapters&Even Zel!
Whatever.
Vee skipped into her room and plopped down on her bed, putting her laptop on her lap and began to click away.
She continued to type, every so often checking the message boards to see if someone posted, and because she got stumped. The Writers Block Dragon was right there, staring at her.
After a while, she began to think she heard voices! She closed her eyes and sighed. Nes, if youre still trying to get back at me for hiding from you DAYS ago, then STOP.
Oh great! She heard us! A voice hissed. This is all your fault, DIB.
MY fault?! How is this MY fault?! Another snapped. I thought we needed her to come!
Well&Argh! You know what I mean. And why did you have to bring me along?!
YOU were the one who followed me!
Vee thought she heard them from under her bed. Putting her computer on the desk beside her bed, she fixed her glasses then lowered herself upside down on the bed from the right side to see what was under it. Nes, I promise, if thats you, Ill She was cut off by being tackled by a green and red blob.
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To Be Continued&
Nexis: Don't worry, I am! You'll be in probably the next chapter c:
~ Chapter 22
"Ring around the Zimmeh! A pocket full of monkehs! Chocolate, muffins, we all pass out!"
Zim's eyes twitched from the annoying voices chanting. The SIRs had broken out and after attacking him and tying him to a chair, they began to dance around him holding hands and singing. Their masters did nothing to help him. Some even had the audacity to laugh at him. LAUGH! AT THE AMAZING ZIM!
And he couldn?t say anything because of EEV. That annoying earth girl had stuffed a disgusting sock of hers in his mouth and tied it so he couldn't spit it back out! Oh the pain everyone would be in the moment he gets untied. . .
BANG!
The door slammed open, causing everyone to look at who it was. Dib and the rest of the others were there. They all had leaves and twigs in their hair and clothes, and dirt was smudged on them. The Irkens and humans also were glaring at the paranormal investigator.
"Oh, hey, Dib's back," Someone said from the crowded couch. (WHY they all sat on top of each other was beyond Zim's AMAZING BRAIN.)
"Off course, he said. We're not lost, he said. Trust me he said," Starfett hissed, trying to get rid of some leaves.
"I'm going to punch you if you say that one more time, I said," Dib shot back.
"Hah! Like you can even get NEAR me. I--" Starfett was cut off when Dib poked his head. Starfett glared at him as the others snickered. "I wasn't ready."
"Sure you weren't." Dib rolled his eyes, though they brightened when they saw Zim. He laughed. "Gee, Zim, you gettin' rusty? Little SIRs taking you down is just sad."
Zim growled, glaring at him. Dib was still laughing as he took the gag out. Once the sock exited his mouth, Zim snapped back, "Yeah, well. . .WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?!"
"Yeah, it feels like it's been months since you left," Eev commented from atop Vee's head.
Giving her a strange look, Zim and Dib turned back to each other. "We were having some trouble," Dib finally said as Zel and Ariz began to untie the ropes that bounded Zim.
"Not to mention we got LOST," Bacon added irritably.
"Argh, FINE! We got lost, are you happy I said that now?!"
". . .Yeah."
Dib groaned and crossed the room to the kitchen, dragging Gir, Eev and Zim along with him.
"WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
"GAH WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"
"GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
After flushing Zim down the toilet, and stuffing Eev in the trash can, Dib calmly entered the fridge and went down in the elevator.
Several moments of awkward silence passed as the vigilantes and SIRs stared at each other.
Finally, Zim, Dib, and Gir emerged, this time with Gaz. Gaz shoved her brother roughly and stepped on his (giant) head as she got down from the refrigerator. They then walked over to the vigilantes and stared at them.
". . .O-kay. . ." Kel muttered along with some others.
"Since DIB. . ." Zim cast an annoyed look at him, "told us about what had happened, we--"
Dib cut him off, "We decided to give you an option."
"You all must realize that this is very dangerous," Zim said lowly. "We'll try to keep you safe, but even we are no match for the doppelgangers. Dib-monkey is proof."
Dib crossed his arms and gave Zim a glare, wincing at his bruises that were still sore from Annabelle?s beating and tree limb scratches.
Eev continued from where Zim left off, "You can all go back home if you want." She nodded at Gir. The SIR nodded and placed his hand on the wall, making a vortex appear.
Everyone stared at it nervously.
"If you want to head home, go ahead," Dib sighed. "We'll understand."
"But if you do, we will find you and make your lives miserable," Gaz growled. Dib nudged her, making her glare at him, but say to the Vigilantes, "Fine, we won't. But next time I see you, you will pay." Beside her Eev evilly held up a bus and a badger. . .
Dib looked up at the Vigilantes. "Up to you."
"You have ten minutes to think over it," Zim told them before ushering Gaz, Dib, Eev, and Gir out.
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o.o Whoa.
So, now we all realize that the IZ world is very dangerous. (Well, with the Doppelgangers and the Evil Guy)
. . .EEV. WHAT did I tell you about breaking the fourth wall?! >:U
Eev: Hey, this needs some humor in it, if you ask me. *shrugs* And since I?M the only one with humor now. . .
Me: Shut. Your. Mouth.
Fun fact: I actually wrote the last part (where it started off with Zim talking) like a year ago when I first started writing this story ^^;
~Vee
Starfett,
Yepadoodle! I'm continuing! :D Lol, I dunno about a huge fight xD I'm not too great at writing fight scenes. ...What's a curbstomp?
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Bacon,
YES I REMEMBER YOU! :D
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GREAT NEWS.
I finished a chapter, I'm changing the quotes now~ (Is that glitch ever gonna get fixed...It's been like a year already...) But I gotta do school (I'm home-schooled) soon so I gotta finish posting this
The chapter might seem rushed, but I need to add the other people in soon ^^;
OKAY. That's all! :D
~Vee
So you are still writng. Nice (grins.) Anyway there is gonna be a fight scence soon I guess. and Dib is gonna get Curbstomp or even ROTFLstomp. StarFett
Thank you guys for understanding
I won't go off on some long post since I gotta go to bed soon and I need to post this up before I forget again so..Thanks again
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I think I realized my problem. I'm dragging this out too much. ._. I had a talk with my brother and he agreed that I was dragging it out. SO. I'm gonna try to hurry this along so I can start on some new stuff! C:<
Chapter 21~
"You. . ."
Deb smirked cheekily. "Yep, it's me. Now let's get this over with. Try not to give in too much, we like a challenge."
"She looks just like Dib," Kel said, confused. "But a girl!"
"You don't say." Starfett rolled his eyes.
"Wait a minute--we?" Dib tried to look behind her. Deb waved her hand, beckoning the others to come out. "Oh. . ."
"Are we gonna do this, or what?" A disguised doppelganger asked irritably, twirling her blonde pigtails with her finger. "Cuz, I'm getting bored."
"Zaiya!" Deb growled. "Don't tell them that! It makes us less threatening!"
"Pfft, like you are with your weird hair?" Another smirked as he crossed his arms. He fiddled with his dark blue hoodie distractedly.
"One. More. Word. And I will tell Claw-Guy to get rid of you. Understand, Rike?" The female paranormal investigator hissed.
"Whatever," Rike rolled his blue eyes.
"DON'T WHATEVER ME!"
"Uh, Deb, they're getting away."
"What?!" Deb whirled around to see the last few of them running off into the forest. Enraged, she kicked a rock down the cliff and screamed, "After them!" before running after them herself. "DON'T LET THEM ESCAPE!"
Rike glanced at Zaiya who had stopped twirling her hair and was running off behind Deb. "Well." Rike looked over at the last one, Saan, who looked bored. "What are we waiting for?"
"What are you waiting for? I know a better way so I can head them off." After that he jumped down the hill, leaving Rike.
"Don't leave me!"
. . . . . . . . . .
Everyone was panting by the time they made it into a semi-clearing. Gasping for breath, Dib managed to say, "We?We gotta keep going. . .C-come on. . ."
"Wait just a minute!" Zel tried to catch her breath. "Why. . .why can't we take them? We have them outnumbered."
"And you have my awesomeness," Starfett added.
Bacon exclaimed, "And mine!"
As a chorus of 'and mine' rose, Dib groaned and leaned against a tree. "You?You guys don't understand. They're. . .they're horrible. You saw what just ONE of them did to me back at Zim's house!"
"Well--"
Yerp was cut off by some rustling in the bushes, followed by grumbled and murmurs. "I heard something. . ."
"Really?"
"Yeah, now stay quiet and lemme hear!"
Silently, Dib motioned to quietly speed walk off, grabbing Gir in the process and shutting him down.
"What did you do that for?!" Zel hissed once several feet away from the clearing. "He's really the only one with weapons, even if he isn't smart enough to use them!"
"Not true," Yerp whispered from behind the bright blue-eyed disguised Irken. "He rescued me from them, and he used his weapons then."
"Yeah, and like, he scared off Evil Shadow, too," Kel offered, glancing back behind them. "You sure we're far away from 'em?"
Ariz tugged at her black hair and bit her lip as she shifted from one foot to the other. "I'm getting tired. When we gonna get back to Zim's house?"
"Uh. . ." Dib drew a blank before slapping his head.
Starfett narrowed his eyes at him, crossing his arms. "Lemme guess. We're lost."
"No! We're just. . .off course. . ."
"Yeah, sure."
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Oigh, that's ok Brosiff! (don't ask xD) Buck up, bro! It's alright! Hohoho! I know, it just happens. >< When you get that writer's block, and then you write other stuff, and forget all about you're other stuff... Ok, I'm not making any sense >< You see, that's why I would make a terrible teacher 'cause I don't explain things, I would be like 'You gotta put the thingy with the thingy, then do something, then you solve world hunger!' Ok. Now I'm really off topic. Remind me never to type at 10:00 at night. Well, sometimes I post at 3:00 am. NEVERMIND. OK. THIS POST IS GETTING WAAAYY OFF TOPIC. So yeah, It's ok, bro. Don't let other people make you feel bad! It's just a part of life.
Trust me Vee, I feel the same way. I'm kinda not as obsessed with IZ as I was before, but I'm still obsessed. I KNOW THAT FEEL BRO. And I can see why you might want to leave. Sometimes you just don't have any motive anymore and you feel like hiding in the corner of shame. That's how I feel sometimes when I start a fanfic and then never update. Just do whatever you feel needs to be done. I will miss you when you leave and this was a great fanfic. And I won't be disappointed because I'm kind of in the same situation you're in.
Peace out Zimians!
true4you
Work it harder, make it better, move it faster, makes us stronger, more than ever, hour after, our work is never over!
Mid,
Argh, now I'm confused if I really want to do this.. >_<
Dagnabbit.
I DO want to continue this, I really do, but like you said, if I keep forcing myself to write it when I don't want to, the writing's going to get worse. I can already see it in the pathetic start of a chapter I have now. >_<
Now I'm doubting myself...
..What do you mean by "large cycle of people that I dragged off the boards"? The OCs in the story?
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Blast it...Okay. I'll continue updating this because I don't want to leave it unfinished. It ticks me off when people don't update their stories/comics for months on end so I won't do the same to y'all.
Time to watch the IZ episodes! I haven't seen them in months anyway!
...Now I feel like I'm some person who wants attention... ._. "Oh, I'm quitting! No, I'm continuing!"
Please no one think of me this way..
~Vee
I did not read this, I was just looking for any comments from Zeter and I saw Vee's new post.
It's harder to tell people the "sorry i'm not continuing this" message when you've gone viral and everyone is interested and excited and loyal and all those things that make people like me I admit indeed jealous
If you're uninspired, don't even bother. I mean, the quality of the writing is just going to go down if you're not truly into it.
I would vote for giving them the ending, just cause I would've done the same *cough*exceptididntatallwhentheopportunitycameuponce*cough*
If you do end up leaving (which I encourage) than make sure you're satisfied with that large cycle of people you've dragged off the boards and leave with an explosion.
After all, it's the cycle of people coming and leaving that is this place.
~Mid the coin stealer
"It took so long for me to speak up
It was the hardest thing to say
Taken right up to the entrance
At the last minute turned away
Just can't look you in the eyes
So let's dim the lights
Get a case out
Pack up your pride
It's over, we're out of time
Delete me
I'm on your side"
Encoder, Pendulum
I. . .I think it's time I actually say it. . .
I think I am gonna stop updating this story. . .
Why? Well. . . To be honest, I don't really like IZ as much as I used to. . .That must be kind of shocking, huh? ^^; *laughs nervously* I mean, it's a cool show and all, but I just...don't wanna watch it much. . .
So I think I'm just gonna quit. I'm stuck, and it's hard for me to write for it. It's like this huge fat Writer's Block Dragon is in my way of writing and won't budge.
So I have two options for this story.
1. I leave it for someone else to finish (It probably won't be in the way I was gonna make it)
2. I just tell everyone how it ends. . .
I feel SOOO bad for doing this, but I just don't want to continue this anymore.. I just can not get into it anymore. And if anyone was excited about it and all, I'm REALLY REALLY REALLY sorry! :( I remember how I felt when Dee didn't continue her fanfic "Cold" So I feel horrible for doing this..
. . .And really, the only time I really do anything with IZ is commenting on my friends IZ pictures and roleplaying with Rife on there, too. . .So, I think my IZ fangirl inside me is all tired out. It?s just "blah, whatever. IZ is awesome"
I will not leave. Well, maybe until some fanfics I am reading on here are complete. So I will comment some, but I will not update this anymore. . .
I am really sorry. . .
~Vee
Hah! I love how this fanfic uses things from the real world! Psych! (I love dat show...)And Avatar! (I love dat show too) And SUPER SMASH BROTHAHS! (Mee loves dat game...) And I can relate to it a little bit... YEAH! >w<
*:) Zoe
Herro! Sorry I haven't been around on the boards..^^; I got a Gamecube for Christmas and I've been playing it a lot! I really love how this fanfic is coming along, bro! :D
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StarFett
I KNOW THAT FEEL BRO. And I can see why you might want to leave. Sometimes you just don't have any motive anymore and you feel like hiding in the corner of shame. That's how I feel sometimes when I start a fanfic and then never update. Just do whatever you feel needs to be done. I will miss you when you leave and this was a great fanfic. And I won't be disappointed because I'm kind of in the same situation you're in.
true4you 
. BUT I WILL CONTINUE ON!!!!
Crystal Draculura 
