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The Chosen Ones' Destiny

Date: 09/24/11 11:11 AM
From: VeeTruLxi

Vee sat on her purple bed, covered in a green blanket and was typing away on her computer, glancing up at the TV every so often. But it was Spongebob, a show she could not and would not watch. She flipped the channel and found that there was nothing on TV. At least nothing that interested her.
Bloo-med TV& She grumbled, switching to Avatar; The Last Air Bender. Now I gotta watch this&
Vee (And other children) lived in what looked and was like Earth, but it was different as well! She (And other children) is the only one who knows of this while everyone else just calls it Earth. She knows it is really called Tcefrep. Tcefrep, to avoid confusion, is pronounced Tick-Uh-Frep. It was created by the magical being from childrens minds. &Even though hers was slowly diminishing over the years, transforming into the most horrible thing ever known to children everywhere.
An adult mind.
Vee shook her head to free her mind of the feared thing, almost knocking her glasses off. She shoved them back up, laughing a second later about how she had acted like Jolene, a Toad on Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Old Door. Then laughed again, remembering Nastasia from Super Paper Mario. Yes, she was indeed crazy.
Why aint Psych on?! She exclaimed, flipping through the channels once again, hoping that a show she would be interested in would magically appear. She sighed and settled on Avatar: The Last Air Bender, rolling her eyes at Katara and her Mary-Sue-ness.
After an hour, Vee was surprisingly not on her computer. Instead she was in her brothers room, playing Super Smash Bros. Brawl with him.
Come on Nes! You just HAD to pick Marth, didnt you! She complained, furiously clicking her Wii remote buttons. Nes just smirked and continued to use his Smash on her, Luigi. SERIOUSLY, BRO?! Admit Luigi is the best!
No.
FINE. She then realized that she had to get working on Life In Zims House, or LIZH for short as she called it on Nick.com. Dude, this is the last one, kay? I gotta get to work.
Whatever&VEE! Quit throwing me!
Vee laughed and continued to throw Mario, and began to beat him up. She finally won. She got up and began to jump up and down, saying in a high pitched voice, What! What! What!
Yeah, yeah. Nes rolled his eyes. Bet you cant beat me again.
I know what youre trying to do and it aint working. She stated. I gotta go work on my stories! And I need to read some stories. Hopefully Loila, or Dee or even Melody has posted some new chapters&Even Zel!
Whatever.
Vee skipped into her room and plopped down on her bed, putting her laptop on her lap and began to click away.
She continued to type, every so often checking the message boards to see if someone posted, and because she got stumped. The Writers Block Dragon was right there, staring at her.
After a while, she began to think she heard voices! She closed her eyes and sighed. Nes, if youre still trying to get back at me for hiding from you DAYS ago, then STOP.
Oh great! She heard us! A voice hissed. This is all your fault, DIB.
MY fault?! How is this MY fault?! Another snapped. I thought we needed her to come!
Well&Argh! You know what I mean. And why did you have to bring me along?!
YOU were the one who followed me!
Vee thought she heard them from under her bed. Putting her computer on the desk beside her bed, she fixed her glasses then lowered herself upside down on the bed from the right side to see what was under it. Nes, I promise, if thats you, Ill She was cut off by being tackled by a green and red blob.
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To Be Continued&
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Date: 12/23/12 4:16 PM
From: TheBHunter

HIYA!
StarFett
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Date: 12/16/12 1:15 PM
From: Zeterirken

Vee,
You can fix the ?'s!!!
Just go to File, Options, Proofing, Autocorrect options, and uncheek Smartquotes and things of the sort. Then rewrite all the things that get turned in to ?'s... DONE!!!
Zeter
"Admit it. You're procastinating the next chapter."
"No..."
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Date: 12/08/12 10:14 AM
From: Senthelf

Cora: Chaos... I LOVE CHAOS!
Edgar: Because you're a human version of the Cheshire cat... *rolls eyes*
Cora: Thanks!
Edgar: O_o That wasn't meant to be nice...
Alice: Well, my master finds it nice! *gets picked up by Cora*
Edgar: Is that thing dressed up as the Cheshire cat?!?!
Cora: Yup!
Edgar: I wish Dib was hanging from a tree...
Alice: *slaps Edgar*
Edgar: WHAT WAS THAT FOR, YOU STUPID LITTLE ROBOT?!?!
Alice: You're annoying...
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty
I like this story!
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Date: 12/06/12 11:04 PM
From: GIR201

can I join?

Night
gender: girl
race: irken
eyes:Dark blue
attire: blue invader suit, black gloves and boots
S.I.Rs: Dawn and Lilly
persona: mature, kind, careful
Crush: Zim
extra: She doesn't really hate Dib, but she tries to keep her distance.

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Date: 12/05/12 11:49 AM
From: Zeterirken

Oh, and you have almost 300 COMMENTS. WOW.
Anyways,
Zeter
"Sign-offs are useless. Why use them? Oh drat, I'm doing one right now..."-Zeter
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Date: 12/05/12 10:39 AM
From: VeeTruLxi

Chapter 18~
Dib gripped his head in panic, trying to figure out what to do. Ariz was still hanging by her hoodie on the tree branch, and the others were running around trying to make sense of the situation. Gir was sitting there, sucking his foot, Yerp was just beginning to come into the clearing, looking confused and Kel was still in a trance from that incident with the grass.
Suddenly Zel grabbed him by his shirt and began to shake him. ?THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!?
?MY FAULT?! How is it MY fault?!? Dib snapped, trying to wiggle out of Zel?s grip.
?If you would have just not let Ariz come then this wouldn?t be happening!?
?HEY!?
They turned to Kel who had just gotten out of her trance. Her eyes were narrowed at them, and said coldly, ?If you two are done arguing then. . .GET YOUR BEHINDS OVER HERE AND HELP US!?
Zel dropped Dib to the ground and ran over back to the cliff. Growling, Dib dusted himself off and followed her with Kel close behind.
?Okay, don?t worry, Ariz, we?ll get you, okay?? Sara promised, though not sure how they could fulfill it. She bit her lip in worry, wondering what they were going to do. ?DIB!?
?What? I?m right here.?
Sara turned and jumped at the sight of Dib beside her. He raised a brow at her before looking off to the woods. He could have sworn that there was some other noise. Dib paid no more attention to it and instead began to try and climb down the cliff himself.
?DIB! What are you doing?!? Sara exclaimed, becoming even more worried.
?What does it look like, Sara?? Shadow asked, rolling her eyes. A few seconds later, her ears pricked up. She turned to the woods, eyeing the dead trees and bushes as if someone was in it. ?Did you hear something??
?What??
?Nothing, never mind. . .?
?HAHA!?
?What in the--AAH!? Kel toppled over backwards to avoid getting hit by the flying object. When she finally cleared her head of the dizziness, she noticed she had landed on some more grass. ?Aaah!?
It continued on laughing, confusing and scaring some of the Vigilantes before it ejected. It flew through the air and finally landed, one knee on the ground and holding itself up with its hand. Its brown cloak surrounded him, as the others stared at him.
Dib rolled his eyes. ?Starfett, you can quit the ?cool? act now.? He air-qouted ?cool?.
Starfett just smirked and stood up to stretch before being crashed into by Bacon. Luckily, neither of them were injured, and Bacon had actually landed perfectly on Starfett?s outstretched hands, causing them to flip in cartwheels before finally jumping and land upright.
The others stared at them for a moment before Starfett made an awkward cough. ?Kay, we?re here, so now what?? He looked at Bacon who shrugged.
Ariz?s screams came again, though this was more frantic. ?GUYS! LOOK!?
Dib and the others looked up, then gave out short screams as an enourmous dragon appeared in the sky.
?It finally happened. . .? Kel stared seriously up at the sky as the dragon circled around once more. Starfett and Bacon who were standing beside her gave her an odd look.
?What?? Chief asked, popping up from behind his master as if he was behind him the whole time.
Looking back at him, Kel shrugged. ?I dunno. I just wanted to say that.?
~_~_~_~_~_~_~
I love picturing how Starfett lands xD And then Bacon comes and they do all this cool stuff xDD At least I think it?s cool. . . >.>
Lol, sorry, I dunno. I think it?s this lemonade. . . *glances at lemonade warily*
~Vee
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Date: 12/05/12 8:10 AM
From: TheBHunter

Myst is amusing evil leader that is pretty hard to pull off if your a ball of darkness and claws. Vee awesome job.
StarFett
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Date: 12/04/12 4:56 PM
From: TheBHunter

Hey (Man it feels like I am a spammer) I got a Fan Fic for the 3rd time *Victory Fanfare* Wow that sounded cooler in my head.
StarFett
Claptrap!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/04/12 4:40 PM
From: VeeTruLxi

Chapter 17~
Bacon walked back to the edge of the cliff and stared down it. It seemed as if there was no ground, just. . .a never ending pit.
?Alright, I?m going down there,? He decided, picking up a good size rock. He grunted with the weight.
?Are you crazy?? Chief exclaimed. ?What--?
?I?m getting tired of just sitting here!? Bacon replied as he turned to see them, almost stumbling because of the rock. ?You guys coming or what??
Starfett stood up and grinned. ?I?m comin?!? Before Chief could object, Starfett grabbed another rock and jumped off the side of the cliff with Bacon. The two placed the rocks under their feet, scraping the side of the cliff as if they were on a surfboard, or skating. Chief ran after them, sighed, and then jumped after them, activating his rockets. As long as he kept them in his sights, then they would be safe. . .Sort of. . . He didn?t know if the rocks would work or not.
. . . . . . . .
BREEEEE!
Rike kicked the door of the ERA off irritably. His eye twitched as he heard several feet stomp past his room. ?ALRIGHT WHAT IS IT THIS TIME?!?
He had become used to this for the past three nights, yet he never got over how irritating it was.
The first night, Evil Shadow had crossed over the lines, sounding the alarm. The second, Vik came and had also tripped the alarm. The THIRD night. . .
The alarm went off for unbeknownst reason. No one could explain it, but it really ticked everyone off.
Rike?s door whooshed open, revealing Saan. His black eyes were narrowed in a glare. ?What are you doing just standing around?! Get out here and help,? He ordered, running off again.
Rike stuck his tongue out at him before following him. ?So what is it this time?? He asked another doppelganger. It was Riken, and how his black hair looked, Rike knew that he was awakened too.
Riken rolled his eyes when he saw Rike look at his hair. Frustrated, he ran a black gloved hand through his hair and replied, ?I don?t know. Myst will explain, I guess.?
?For the love of carrot cake,? They heard Vik grumble behind them. They looked back to see the human slapping his head. ?WHY did she have to be like this?!?
?Uh, what?? Rike slowed down to run beside him.
Vik growled and looked at him, furiously pushing his hair out of his eyes. ?Vee! She has this weird obsession to say just what I said but instead of carrot cake, she says cheesecake! She just grates my nerves!?
?Uh, yeah, you probably need some sleep,? Riken commented before taking off down the hallway faster.
Vik waved his fist at him threateningly. ?I KNOW WHERE YOUR ROOM IS!?
?You know you won?t be able to do anything,? Rike said, giving him an odd look.
Vik glared at him. ??yeah, yeah, I know??
?Hey! Watch where you?re going!? It snapped, shoving him backwards. ?Jeez!?
Rike glared up at Lek before standing up and looking over her shoulder. Myst had gathered everyone to the battle room, the only room big enough for all of the doppelgangers to be in, and able to echo to be heard easier.
?I have just been informed numerous things,? Myst announced, looking very serious as he floated above them. ?One, is that Evil Shadow is not in his room, and two. . .? He glanced at the end of the room then back at the Irkens and humans. ?Vigilantes and Chosen Ones are on our property.?
This earned many gasps and anxious murmuring. Myst waved his hand to silence them and continued, ?Now our top priority is to get Evil Shadow back. First to punish him, but mostly because we need him to defeat the Vigilantes.?
?You don?t say,? Rike heard Antifett cough. This received a cold glare from Myst. ?Sorry.?
Myst slowly looked back at the doppelgangers, annoyance still shown in his red glowing eyes. ?I need two teams of three each to get the Chosen Ones and Evil Shadow.?
Everyone?s hands immediately went up. This was going to take a while.
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Date: 12/04/12 4:38 PM
From: VeeTruLxi

Starfett,
Ah! No, I'm sorry! I always keep forgetting stuff so it's my fault ^^;
Brain: NOT MY FAULT.
Me: What in the world! You're my brain! It IS your fault if I can't remember!
Brain: ...WELL.
~
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Fraken-Kitty,
xDD
~
I'll post the next chapter in another post. I'll add TWO chapters since I always take so long ^^; So sorry! :(
~Vee
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Date: 12/03/12 8:15 PM
From: TheBHunter

Oh wow SORRY!
StarFett
Thats mama Lugi to you Mario
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Date: 12/02/12 9:08 PM
From: Senthelf

Zat: So there is an other doppleganger with the almost the same name? Cool!!*Cat is giving Zat a wedgie*
Cat: DON'T EAT MY SUSHI!
Zat: So eating ONE piece of fish is enough for a wedgie that lasts an hour?
Cat: Yes! *hangs Zat on hook*
Cid: Debby is squished! Or she was squished a week ago... But now I have Devi!
Kit: MY computer! I just hope Devi doesn't end you like all Cid's old girlfriends! *flashback of many inventions getting broke*
Devi: I hope so too! And hugs to you Cid!
Cid: YAY! *hugs Devi*
Kit: O_o
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty
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Date: 12/02/12 3:40 PM
From: VeeTruLxi

Starfett,
I've been meaning to post more but whenever I tried to post, I had to close my laptop lid down for some reason or another and then when I open it, and try to post, I'd have to start all over again...Sorry DX
~
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Fraken-Kitty,
Thank you!
GASP. YOUR DOPPELGANGER HAS THE SAME NAME I GAVE ONE OF THE IZ CHARACTERS FOR THEIR DOPPELGANGER o.o Well, almost. It's sorta the same xD Not that it matters cuz I saw your post before I wrote the doppelganger chapter but it didn't click in my head that "Hey, this person has a doppelganger named Debby..."
xD I dunno my brain works weird sometimes~
~
true4you,
I dunno what happened to your fries....*hides hands behind back* xD jk
....EH...OKAY. I'll give you a hint or something: Yerp's okay and she's gonna be there soon! La~
~
Zel,
:D Thank you so much! Ayie, school DX
One Direction fanfics? People make those?? WHOA.
...I must listen to one of their songs--to find out if they sing good or not.
~Vee
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Date: 12/02/12 9:25 AM
From: TheBHunter

Once Again, alone....
StarFett
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Date: 11/24/12 4:08 AM
From: InvaderZEL

@Vee

I just got to read this now... BUT YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!!! I've had absolutely NO time to continue my fan-fic... Although I think I have another chapter or two I had already finished before... But I've just been so busy with school and all, and plus I've been writing One Direction fan-fics with my friends at school... lol But this is amaZAYN! xD Keep up the good work!

- Invader ZEL

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Date: 11/23/12 2:32 PM
From: true4you

@Vee
But I wanna find out what happened to Yerp? What happened to Yerp? Why am I typing so fast? Where are my fries?
true4you
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Date: 11/23/12 9:02 AM
From: Senthelf

Cat: I like this fanfic. *Nut pulls on sleeve*
Nut: Uh, Cid made a thingie name Debby, then Debby took your brush and pulled out a hair, and then it put your hair into it, and this dude came out! *points to dude that has glasses, a labcoat, a blue shirt with a black bunny on it, jeans and boots*
Zat: Hey!
Cat: So I have a doppleganger?! I don't know wheiter to be happy, or to be mad...
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty
If I turned into Cat, I would have blue and pink hair, like to disect stuff, hate Zim, and have a crush on Dib while being his best friend...
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Date: 11/22/12 7:21 PM
From: VeeTruLxi

WHY did my chapter not get posted?! DX *SIGH* I'll re-read it and change some stuff if needed...
~
Keb,
ARGH. GOODNESS. >_<
I'm not even that HUGE of a fan...can't even remember if I watched all the movies...(and here I am complaining about it I'm sorry if I sound like a hypocrite.. ) Gonna have to make a note of watching them again..
...well, maybe Disney won't make it that bad...
~
StarFett,
...I never really realized that before. o.o I guess, if you look at it in some way, though. I didn't really see that..
*Shrugs* Eh, I don't think they're "ripoffs". Then again, I haven't watched the movie in a while...So how would I know.
~
Goodness, I seem to not watch movies very much.. VEE. Take note of me to watch these movies: Star Wars, Nightmare Before Christmas, and 9.
Vee: We can't find 9.
Me: IS IT EVEN A MOVIE?!
Vee: I believe so.
Me: THEN HOW COME I CAN'T FIND IT?!
Vee: JEEZ STOP YELLING!
Me: Sorry...But seriously, how come I can't find it?!
Vee: I dunno. *shrugs*
~Me xD
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Date: 11/21/12 9:50 PM
From: SkarecrowS

I have seen Ruby Gloom.
Pretty good though Ruby and Skullboy seem like ripoffs of Sally and Jack Skellington the Pumkin King.
StarFett
READ MAH FAN FIC WORLDS COLLIDE PLEZZZ
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Date: 11/21/12 11:44 AM
From: SkarecrowS

Keb
Only 3. Ha I have a book shelve devoted to it. ?_? Did I say that....

StarFett

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