Yay! It's back! Sorry for the ?'s, I can't fix it. Anyways, I will start now!
Chapter 1: The beginning
Tallest Miyuki?s POV
I stood on a high, floating platform in a huge theater. Cameramen surrounded me, I saw my face from many angles on a screen probably 200 feet long. Rows after rows of Irkens were sitting in rows after rows of seats. The theater was slightly slanted, but it reached very high at the far end. I was told the theater could hold 200,000 Irkens. After thinking for what seemed like a hour about the immensity of the crowd, I realized how loudly everyone was cheering. I raised my hand to symbolize silence. Then, I spoke.
?Most of you probably know what this about? I said, hearing my voice back from 100s of screens. Then I heard someone from the back of the crowd yell ?NO!!! I DON?T!!! MY TALLEST, WHAT IS THIS ABOUT!??. I responded how I had planned. ?We are all here to celebrate a historical event. This is arguably the greatest thing Irkens have ever done. This greatness will help us reach our goal of conquering THE UNIVERSE!!!? I said, pausing for dramatic effect. ?WHAT IS IT!?? The same person yelled. I sighed, and then continued. ?Irken scientists have unlocked the code to Irken modification? I said, waiting for it to sink in. I then continued. ?THEY HAVE FINISHED THE NEW RACE!!!? I yelled in excitement. I was the tallest in charge when this event happened. ME. ?So, I have the Irken scientists in charge during the event here to tell us about it? I continued. My platform lowered, and a group of 6 Irken scientists stepped out from behind the curtain. I stepped off my pad, and they stepped on. ?The new Irken will have the ability to hypnotize? The lead scientist started.
~3 Hours later~
?This? is how we will win.? he finished. The platform lowered, and they stepped off. The group of thousands upon thousands of Irkens started flooding out of the room. I then followed the scientists to see the developing smeet that was going to replace me in fifteen years.
~A long time later~
Zeter?s POV
A cold robotic arm pulled me out of my tube. Inside of the tube was all I?d ever seen. But, in a few seconds, a whole new world opened up to me. Before I could comprehend it, I heard a voice. It said, sternly, ?Welcome to life, Zestoria?. ?What?? I asked. ?You are named Zestoria?. I heard back. ?And you are going to be great?. ?I don?t like that name. I prefer Zeter? I responded. ?Oh, really?? The voice responded. ?Yes. I think Zestoria is a horrible name.? I responded as stern as he had been to me. ?Well, it?s yours? the voice said back. Before I could respond, I was shoved out of the room. Zeter
I will respond to comments and stuff here.
Chapter 2 coming... when this one is out!
Is it creepy if I mention I've had at least 4 dreams with Zetty in them? ._.
I have a lot of natural talent in being creepy, but I'm not trying.
~Mid the coin stealer
I actually look a lot like The Overly Attached Girlfriend.
"I'm sorry, lover...
You're sorry; I bring you down
Well, these days I try
And these days I tend to lie
Kinda thought I was a mystery
And then I thought I wasn't meant to be
You said yourself fantastically,
"Congratulations, you were all alone."
Your time will come if you wait for it, if you wait for it
It's hard, believe me... I've tried
Your time will come if you wait for it, if you wait for it
It's hard, believe me... I've tried
But the rain won't fall for the both of us
The sun won't shine on the both of us
Believe me when I say, that I wouldn't have it any other way"
Amsterdam, Imagine Dragons
Argh, I admit I must have slipped and messed up the homophone <.>
Also, whoa, you're way smarter than what I expect from a boards for children... There was already a hint when you used "acronym", but yeah, woo for disproving my own stereotype!
~Mid the coin stealer
...Sesquipedalian!
Also, sometime last week I saw a picture of Costa Rica and was like "that looks like an AWESOME vacationing place" and then remembered Zetty... you lucky.
"I'm a silhouette asking every now and then
"Is it over yet? Will I ever feel again?"
I'm a silhouette chasing rainbows on my own
But the more I try to move on, the more I feel alone
So I watch the summer stars to lead me home
I'm sick of the past I can't erase
A jumble of footprints and hasty steps I can't retrace
The mountain of things I still regret
Is a vile reminder that I would rather just forget"
Silhouette, Owl City
*headdesk* Gosh, you never had these hiatuses last time... Eh, there's plenty of reasons for them, but still. x.x
~Mid the coin stealer
"As I lye here in my anxious waiting
I wonder to myself, what will you be like?
Who exactly are you?
As I lye here in my anxious waiting
I wonder to myself, what do you think of me?
Have I intimidated you too much?
As I lye here in my anxious waiting
Maybe, on the darkest day
When I am down in the dark and rain
The screen will light up
And you will be there, back once again
And I'll take your hand
Lead you to a secret place
Where our world expands beyond
And I will see you smile, and welcome you home
But for now, that is a dream in my head
Or a moment in the future, I don't truly know
As I lye here in my anxious waiting
The only thing to do is hope"
PLOT TWIST! That was not a song, but a poem I wrote just now.
~Mid the coin stealer
"Plan foiled
The sirens pass by
Kids screaming
The longest public announcement
Reach check-in, finally got through
Running for a flight, shoes off
You're calling voicemail
In joke, group laughter
Closing scenes in a meeting
Angel, why didn't you tell me?
One second, someone needs directions
Can't you see I'm on the phone?
This is just so unlike us
Cut back to horizontalisms
If we could win just one small touch
Contact versus tele-miscommunications"
Telemiscommunications, Deadmau5 and Imogen Heap
Huh, it seems as if your (mind-tormenting) hiatus has made your audience disappear, leaving just me and i'm sure Vee is still here.
I don't know what to say about that, but I really want this attempt at your introduction story to work, because it's the third dang attempt. I mean at least I managed to get my introductory story through, and even though it still remains my only success, it's still one more than you, and that makes me sad Dx
Which makes me think of this question:
Has this lack of getting past the introductory story stopped Zeter's timeline from going forward? I'm sure you've written a bunch of stories with him that have never been posted, but i'm curious.
And if the audience is gone, I can ask another question without potentially spoiling anything...
I think I remember something back in our first generation implying this... Didn't Zeter have a brother?
~Mid the coin stealer
I bet about 78% of everything I say doesn't make sense.
"And I came home
Like a stone
And I fell heavy into your arms
These days of darkness
Which we've known
Will blow away with this new sun
And I'll kneel down
Wait for now
And I'll kneel down
Know my ground
And I will wait, I will wait for you
And I will wait, I will wait for you
So break my step
And relent
You forgave and I won't forget
Know what we've seen
And him with less
Now in some way
Shake the excess
But I will wait, I will wait for you
And I will wait, I will wait for you
And I will wait, I will wait for you
And I will wait, I will wait for you
So I'll be bold
As well as strong
And use my head alongside my heart
So tame my flesh
And fix my eyes
That tethered mind free from the lies"
I Will Wait, Mumford & Sons
Well, i'm not sure how much longer i'll have to wait for the regular schedule and all, but it can't be that much longer ^.^
Mostly dedicating this post to the song lyric signature, so there's nothing else here.
~Mid the coin stealer
5+ months waiting for 'the moment'... Hopefully it will be soon enough.
"I have lost my way
And you have lost your strength
How could you fail?
Mhmm
And I'll hold us up
We will be the sky
Captured in the light
We could count the stars
The jewels of your crown
Hold them in my arms
Do not be afraid
I'll beat inside you
Your heart is my sound
Mhmm"
Jewel, Solarstone and Clare Stagg
Dangit Zeter, you worried me so bad! As punishment, I will curse you with a horrible nickname! I'm going to call you Zetty for the entire month <.>
...Whew. Anyway..
Hah, Minecraft xD
Fun fact you'll approve of: Mary and I did do an iz minecraft rp (and by iz rp, i mean with just all our ocs and no real characters) with some romance and elements-not-even-in-the-game and Tobuscus...
When I play minecraft for real, all I do is domesticate all the animals around into a great animal kingdom 8D
Aww, you took the three seconds to reference TFM. This is why I take the time to find you on other sites and try to drag you to madness 8D
~Mid the coin stealer
And speaking of other sites, will still be waiting for that reply as well~
"Tonight we'll run away
Speeding faster than a midnight train
Somewhere to such a place
Where the stars come out to light your face
We'll leave behind a world in darkness
Go where no one's broken hearted
Take off without a trace
Neon angels, up and away
Ride my clouds
I think we're getting closer
Don't stop now
Off the ground
Higher than a supernova
Don't look down"
...Argh, it's been so long I don't remember if the title or the artist comes first!
Beam Me Up, Cazzette
OK wow...this has just been, forever. I feel so bad D:
I posted responces to the comments a bbit ago, but not a chapter due to WBD, but apparently it didn't pass the mod approval. Anyways, I'm back, A lot's happened, A lot is to happen...So it might be a while again after this. But after my trip to Costa Rica is over, it should be a better schedual. Again, I'm sorry this took so long but I was busy and then when I was no longer busy I got WBD.
My Robotics team made it to state and we placed... 43/80. Not too bad. Anyways, here is the much-awaited way-too-late what-took-so-long chapter.
Chapter 12:Mid's Base (A.K.A The Chapter That Took Forever)
As I walked in the base, it seemed pretty standard-line, however I could see quite a bit of a personal flare to it. I followed the path Mid had taken, in to the kitchen. Before going around the corner, I heard weird noises and Mid pulling. I turned around the corner to see a SIR unit with it's mouth wide around the fridge being pulled by Mid being pulled by the other SIR unit. "Flabz, come on. SURRENDER!" Mid said. The SIR, named Flabz apparently, screamed never and launched off the fridge. "Thanks Flabz" "Awww..." Mid turned back to me. "Well, this is my base. Here, I'll show you around". Mid directed me to the elevator, and we went in to the underground portion. This, on the other hand, was completely different then standard Saduqi. Mid showed me around the place. First Mid showed me her Video-Game-Reality creator first. She asked me to come up with a idea, so I just blurted out random thoughts. "What if there was a infinitely generated 3D world made out of blocks. You could mine the blocks and craft them in to different things, and you could place the blocks on the ground to make structures. And there are different biomes like Plains, Extreme Hills, Desert, Jungle, Mushroom etc. And there would be day and night, and caves, and there would be recourses you could use to make better things, but anywhere dark monsters could spawn that will take away some of your health. The way you get back health is if you hunger is full or potions you could get by brewing where you would need to grow plants and destroy monsters from a dimension you had to build a portal to. And you could also enchant tools with special powers using your XP from destroying mobs, but it would require a enchanting Table And?" Mid cut me off. "?Well, I think that's enough" Mid typed some things in to the computer, and a world appeared on the other side of the portal. A nice big mountain, with lots of Pigs and some cows below. But there was a big overhang, so monsters were under it. "Cool" I said. Mid then went to the reprogramming room, and showed me around a little bit. Mid mentioned how it had failed before, and caused triple madness*. As expected, it was Flabz' fault. I asked Mid about what was up with Flabz if her other SIR-Which I learned to be named Lyre-was fine. Mid explained simply that Flabz was a accidental clone of GIR. Mid then brought me through the rest of her underground base, but not much else very eventful happened. After the tour, she said "And last but not least?". We went back up the elevator to ground level, and went upstairs from there. She knocked on the door of a bedroom-style room. Another Irken came to the door and answered "What do you want?" Her eyes then focused on me. "AHHH! WHAT'S HE-Oh." "Gem, meet Zeter. Zeter, meet Gem. Gem's my sister who lives here with me. She get scared pretty easily sometimes." "I DO NOT!" "BOO!" A noise came from behind her and she yelped. "?I knew installing a noisemaker in to your room would help someday" Mid said, grinning while pulling a small remote out of her pocket. "Oh, come on! That's not fair! You'd be scared too!" "Anyways, Zeter just crashed here recently so I came over to say hi" "?So that's where the crashing noise came from" "You yelped when you heard it, didn't you?" "No?" Gem said slowly "I thought we were talking about something else!" "We were, but you brought it up again" "Cute" "Uh, what?" I said. "She says that sometimes" Mid told me. "W-Why?" "Conversation Changed Successfully"
*See What I did there?
Epic Minecraft Reference Is Epic Zeter
*imaginary yawn*
I know i've said this twice already, but what has it been, three weeks? I have to admit, I don't really like the "respond to comments when chapters come out" method, because it feels distant, for preeeeetty obvious reasons at this point.
Still alive over there, buddy? I haven't seen any signs of life orareplytomyplanDxyuno
Well, consider this a bump. Come back soon, will you?~
~Mid the calm brunette
Random self title from an rp.
"Waiting as I'm wanting to.
Speaking as I'm spoken to.
Changing to your point of view.
Fading as I follow you.
A boyish notion of false emotion.
These words are spoken despite my love.
A fool's devotion was set in motion.
My eyes are open now.
It's a glass cage so I can't pretend.
You hide beneath the physical.
I see it coming.
But I can't defend.
You go so deep,
My belief is gone.
My belief is gone.
My belief is..."
Looking Glass, uncited artist due to band name
I have only 4 Irkens, 1 made up alien, and 3 SIRS/GIRS out of the 17 or so OCs I have. And my main OCs is a human and a GIR unit.
Cat: Yep.
Nut: *makes random sounds* I like fries! *more random sounds*
Me: Anyway I like this fanfic! Nut and Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty
Cat: HEY! How come a Nut's name gets put in front of mine?!
Me: Fine! I'll change it! JUST this once... Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty and Nut
It's true, human ocs ARE uncommon
But I have all irken and sirs/android-sirs, so... xD
Well, I have this one human oc, but she's used so little it doesn't really matter.
Finally, people have realized Mid's message of truth! MISSION #2 COMPLETE!
I've noticed that about a lot of people's ocs for a REAL long time and now it just bothers me
Invader, invader, invader, on earth and hanging with the main cast. That's not an invader.
That's enough raging for now. But yeah.. my character universe has realized that for a long time.
~Alexa the coin stealer
"In this crazy world of choices I've only got a few
Either you're coming with me, or I'm coming with you
Cause I finally found, I finally found you
You never have to worry if what I say is true
I've been looking for you
And when I saw you I knew
That I finally found, I finally found you"
Finally Found You, Enrique Iglesias
(THAT. IS HARD. TO SPELL DX)
I AM STILL READING. ...I'm just bad about commenting ^^;
Oh WOW, that is one weird dream xDD Wish I could have dreams like that...
Last one I remember (which was like...several days ago) was that I was in some store with all these fancy princess dresses mixed with blue jeans and stuff. o_O And I was like "princesses CAN wear different clothes! :D"
What in the world was wrong with me.. xD
Oh my gosh, I am just now realizing that what Mid said is right (Mid in your fanfic). Almost everyone isn't an invader...
Also, anyone else notice the lack of humans 'round here? :\ Almost everyone's an Irken xDD not that it's bad, but I just find it weird o.O
~Vee
Zeter,
I would love it if you would like to participate in my fan fic! It would be so much fun, after all we're both Irkens!
Reply if you wanna participate! and don't forget to read Invader Kate by Ellebelly2! Invader Kate
I'd say you did Mid pretty well.
Just one little minor flaw, though. Lyre just says Mid instead of master/mistress.
And before you get your hopes up...
An invader*
The walk*
Not gonna bother if there's any others.
~Mid the coin stealer
"Oh brother I can't, I can't get through
I've been trying hard to reach you, cause I don't know what to do
Oh brother I can't believe it's true
I'm so scared about the future and I wanna talk to you
Oh I wanna talk to you"
Talk, Coldplay
11.Mid
I whipped around, frightened, to see a Irken with magenta eyes staring right at me. I looked in to the eyes for a brief second, before the Irken's eyes close and the Irken falling backwards. Oh drat, I did it AGAIN. I knelt down next to the unconscious body, and looked at it closely. I could tell, somehow, I don't know how, that this wasn't my enemy. So I started thumping my fingers on the ground, it was going to be a long night.
~1 Hour later~
After a hour of waiting, the Irken began to wake up. Remembering not to be too polite, as anyone can be wrong. I stood up off the ground, and waited for the Irken to fully regain consciousness. The Irken stood up, and dusted off her T-Shirt. "Well that was a nice way to say hello" "Sorry, I couldn't- Wait, who are you?" "Mid. You?" Mid stuck out a hand. I cautiously put my hand out to say it. She shook it, and I responded "Zeter. Sorry about that" "Oh, that stuff happens ALL the time around here" "?Well then, how'd you get here" "Well, I was a invader, and?" I stepped back. "Invader!?" "I quit. I quit because it's boring" "Uhhh?" "The thing is, Zeter. No one around here really IS a invader, no matter how much they think they are. Many have given up, or have failed, some even 'think' the still are. But they aren't. This is a planet to eternally 'chill out' with friends. You?" "?I was attacking the massive in a anirk mission, and I got shot down, and then I was here" "Well, that's nothing out of the norm. I've had plenty of parties interrupted by ship crashes" "I can tell. Dib says there are like a dozen failed invaders" "Remember, they aren't 'invaders', Zeter. They are just here, and might think they are" Mid's eyes went away from me and up in to the sky. "Void is watching. Void is watching?" "What? Mid? HELLO!?" Mid looked back at me. "What? Why were you yelling at me?" "?Well I do stuff like that sometimes, so I won't comment on how 'weird' that is" "Oh. What did I say?" "Void is watching" "?Let's talk about something else, Zeter. How'd you even do that to me?" "Oh, yeah? Well, they have the new race and they accidentally gave it emotions and somehow linked the emotions to the powers, so whenever they're in emotion one of they're powers will get triggered? and that's me. That was my hypnosis ability, the only one I currently know about" "Ah" "Where do you live?" "Want me to show you?" "Yeah" Well, this will be a long night, I guess now I'm going to go see Mid's base and all. As we walked, Mid would point out homes and say something like 'That's Ness/Tuk's house' The walked seemed to be pretty long, so I could guess Mid lived on the other side of the neighborhood from me. Eventually, we came upon a tall house. Mid pointed at it and said "That's MY house". We approached it, and Mid rang the doorbell. A SIR came to the door. "Hi master!" The SIR looked at me for a second "Hello!", then returned her look at Mid. "Flabz is trying to eat the fridge again" Mid face-palmed, and ran inside. I looked back for a second, hesitating. What if this was a trap? I thought for another second. No, it couldn't be. Mid just isn't that kind of person. Plus, she'd probably be terrified of me anyways. Then I ran in.
Zeter
Mid,
No order really- whenever I've written one, and when I've written several, when it feels 'ready' (Like a week). So I've just been bad about writing recently :/
AND I FOUND YOUUUUUUU!!!! (Actually, you found me)
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