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I'm Sorry Friend....(a fanfic)

Date: 01/18/13 12:54 AM
From: psychrules

There he is. Just..STANDING there. it's like he doesn't even see me! ok, I get he's mad at me, but of all people HE should understand! ok, I kissed Zim, but to save the world and HIM!! I did this for him!
J-I DID THIS FOR YOU DIB!!
D-what?
J-I KISSED ZIM FOR YOU! He told me he was going to kill you if I didn't! And I know you were yelling "no, don't do it!", but I...I love you. and...I can't live without you.
RK(random kid)-Wake up kid!
J-huh? oh. all just a dream.
why does he just keep acting like nothing!
Z-hellooooo HYOOOMAN!
J-look Zim, nothing happened between us.
Z-oh? really? this video says otherwise.
J-WHY WOULD YOU VIDEOTAPE US KISSING?! *hisses*do you ENJOY seeing me in misery?!
Z-misery? were you not filled with pure bliss?
J-NO!!!! no...my life is messed up. not ruined, no, but messed up.
Z-I'll come talk to you again when your spirits are higher!
J-gggrrrr.
all of the other kids are leaving.
it's weird that the exit is downstairs. and now I have to go down an elevator.
the other kids fill up the elevator, and shut the doors.
J-hey!
now it's just me and him. *sigh* *ding!*
the elevator comes back up, and Dib and Jillian are the last two left. they go in. Jillian starts to dream again...

J-I hear what you're not saying
It's driving me crazy
It's like we stopped breathing in this room
We're both last to be leaving
I know what you're thinking
I wish you'd make your move

It's much too quiet in here
I want to disappear
I'm hearing myself thinking too clear
It's too quiet in here
Make it all go away
Why can't we break this silence
Finally

It's like you know where I'm going
You follow me home but
I never invite you inside
I see what you're not showing
I've got you alone but
The air is so still it's weird

It's much too quiet in here
I want to disappear
I'm hearing myself thinking too clear
It's too quiet in here
Make it all go away
Why can't we break this silence
Finally

Don't stop don't stop
Telling me goodnight
Just promise you'll kiss me goodbye
What's taking so long?
Don't tell me you're not gonna try
The tensions building in my mind
I wanna scream and I know why

It's much too quiet in here
I want to disappear
I'm hearing myself thinking too clear
It's too quiet in here
Make it all go away
Why can't we break this silence
Finally

Make it all go away
It's so quiet in here.

*ding*
wow, that's some great elevator music.
J-*sigh*bye dib...
she watches as Dib walks away...

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Date: 05/17/13 5:41 PM
From: psychrules

PLEASE POST!!!!

*Jillian's POV*
I'm such a horrible person. I should have never kissed Zim! oh....I'm so conflicted! ugh!
she looks out the window and see's Dib coming home from somewhere.
he looks a bit happier. I wonder where he went....
*Dib's POV*
well, at least that made me feel a bit better. a bit.....
She had the nerve to break up with me! Isn't the innocent one supposed to get that decision?!

Keb's POV
(awesome SIR by the way!)
RIC flies in.
K-I'm not moving fast! Or slow! I'm not moving!
RIC-it sure doesn't seem that way.
K-Dib's my friend! I tried to comfort him. And I'd like to think I did.
RIC-Jillian's your friend too. Why don't you comfort her?
K-alright! I will!

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Date: 05/09/13 10:26 PM
From: psychrules

so sorry, i was gone for a while! AWESOME SONG CHOICE. I mean, I knew every song, and I like the Phil Collins one, but i like the Postal Service cover better.....anyway, I actually used Shooting Star in a crossover fanfic a while ago. With a scene with Dib! it was awesome!!!! Write more later, hopefully you are still here!!!! (on the boards I mean)
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Date: 04/12/13 9:52 PM
From: LunaDib

After they order their pizza, Keb and Dib sit down.

"Now, tell me what's wrong," Keb says.

"Jillian and I were at Zim's base and she- she kissed him! And now she dumped me. For him. There, now you know. Happy now?"

"No," she says, "I'm not. This is a huge mess, and I'm gonna get to the bottom of it, 'cause that's what friends do. And I'm gonna try my best to fix this. Okay?"

"Okay," he agrees.

"...After we finish this pizza," she says with a grin.

[LATER]
Walking home with Dib from Bloaty's, Keb gets a phone call.

"Moving a bit fast, aren't you? Geez, they just broke up!" a robotic voice reprimands.

"RIC, how do you- are you following me?" She turns around and sees an owl with glowing red eyes. Glaring at it, she whispers into the phone. "You're supposed to be following the alien invaders, not me!"

"I've already uncovered their plans. I had some free time before I report in, and I just found myself outside Bloaty's," the rebel SIR explains.

"Very funny," she says, and hangs up. Looking at Dib, she apologizes. "Sorry. Stupid robocall." She laughs.

He shakes his head. "Did you ask if it was following us?"

"Sorry, telemarketer, not robocall. Duh, Keb."

"And how did you not know what was going on?" Dib asks as she's almost home.

"It's summer; I was inside."

"Oh. Well, here we are..."

"Bye!"

"Bye."

She goes to her room and tries to find a song to listen to.

I am not the kind of girl
Who should be rudely barging in on-

"No..." She skips the song.

I don't like walkin' 'round this old and empty house,
So hold my hand, I'll walk with you, my dear
The stairs creep as I-

"As much as I love that song, no."

Some nights I stay up-
"Not the song for this moment."

How can I just let you walk away,
Just let you leave without a trace,
When I stand here taking every breath
With you
Ooh

"Maybe I'll listen to Phil Collins later."

See, I never thought that I could walk through fire,
I never thought that I could take the-

"No. No, no, no, no, no."

Close your tired eyes, relaxing them
Count from one to ten and open them
All these heavy thoughts will try to weigh you down
But not this time

"Here we go!" She sighs, and relaxes, listening to the song.

Way up in the air, you're finally free
And you can stay up there, right next to me
All this gravity will try to pull you down
But not this time

When the sun goes down and the lights burn out
Then it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Fill the darkest night with a brilliant light
'Cause it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Tonight
Whoa oh, whoa oh, whoa oh
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are
Tonight

Gazing through my eyes, when the fire starts
And fan the flame so hot, it melts our hearts
All the pouring rain will try to put it out
But not this time

Let your colors burn, and brightly burst
Into a million sparks, but all dispersed
And illuminate a world that'll try to bring you down
But not this time

When the sun goes down and the lights burn out
Then it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Fill the darkest night with a brilliant light
'Cause it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Tonight
Whoa oh, whoa oh, whoa oh
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are
Tonight

A thousand heartbeats beating time
And makes this dark planet come alive
So when the nights flicker out tonight, you gotta shine

When the sun goes down and the lights burn out
Then it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Fill the darkest night with a brilliant light
'Cause it's time for you to shine
Brighter than a shooting star
So shine no matter where you are
Tonight
Whoa oh, whoa oh, whoa oh
Brighter than a shooting star,
Shine no matter where you are
Tonight

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Date: 03/20/13 12:49 AM
From: psychrules

LunaDib, your turn!!!!!
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Date: 03/13/13 5:55 PM
From: LunaDib

1. Haha! My grandma would probably look at me like I was crazy.
2. Here... Having Internet issues.
3. Okay, here you go.
Name: Keb
Species: Human
Gender: Girl
Age: Same as Dib
Personality: Inquisitive, quirky, kinda random, but usually serious
Appearance: wavy light brown hair that comes a little below her shoulders, dark blue eyes, pale skin
Attire: purple tee with orange question mark and blue jeans
Other info: is friends with Dib (and has a secret crush on him), asks a lot of questions, can usually tell if someone's lying, and watches Mysterious Mysteries (mostly because it's interesting; she is unsure about all paranormal except the existence of Irkens).

~the Keb human~

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Date: 03/12/13 4:32 PM
From: psychrules

LunaDib. 1. The Dramatic song was hilarious! It makes me want my grandma to be foreign! 2.WHERE ARE YOU?!?!? IT IS YOUR TURN!!!!! 3. I need a bio for Keb please! Thanks!

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Date: 03/04/13 3:35 PM
From: psychrules

sorry so short...

Jillian's POV
Jillian stops walking to Zim's. what am I doing?! I mean, Zim ruined everything in the first place! No, not really. Who ruined everything?!!? I'm not sure.....
she starts running to her house and runs into her house and slams the door.

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Date: 02/28/13 6:58 PM
From: LunaDib

@PsychRules: That's good, because it is indeed Keb. Wow, my Legilimency needs work!
@Tanja: I'm working on it! See, here it is! Look below!


Keb walks down the street, "Dramatic Song" stuck in her head. She sees Dib sitting on his front porch.

"Hey," she says.

"Hi," he replies sullenly.

"Uh, oh... What's wrong?"

"I don't really want to talk about it."

"Talking about it is the first step to accepting it, getting over it."

"Are you just saying that because you're curious?" Dib raises an eyebrow.

"I said that because you can confide in me, because it's true, and, yes, also because I'm inquisitive," she says, looking a little sheepish as she adds the last remark.

"Well, at least you admitted it," he says, smiling for a moment.

"So, want to talk about it over pizza? Good with the bad?"

"Sure, I guess. Can you meet me at Bloaty's in half an hour?"

Keb nods. "Sounds good. See you then!" She walks off.

Thirty minutes 'til I meet a friend for pizza. Okay. Cool. Well, kinda. Not cool that he's so upset. Seriously, what happened?


~the Keb human~
Yes, "Dramatic Song." I love randomness.

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Date: 02/28/13 12:48 AM
From: tanjaserb

Less talking, more story time i wanna know wht happens

Tanja

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Date: 02/26/13 1:30 PM
From: psychrules

go on, write away! and no, that's not what i was thinking at all.
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Date: 02/20/13 6:17 PM
From: LunaDib

50+ installments? Okay.
You were thinking "as long as it's not Keb," weren't you?
And now... I shall begin writing!

~the Keb human, and Lyona... and RIC~

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Date: 02/19/13 3:21 PM
From: psychrules

LunaDib! yes!
Ok, how long? well. maybe at least until part 50 or so.
your oc? sure! as long as..........wait. maybe that would be a good twist.......sure! bring em in!
and that's all? ok! i guess it's your turn then! go on and go!
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Date: 02/17/13 10:43 PM
From: LunaDib

A double? I could do that.
But, first, I have a few questions:
1. How long do you think this should be?
2. Is it okay if an OC of mine enters the scene?
3. I actually don't have any more for now...

~the Keb human~

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Date: 02/14/13 2:30 PM
From: psychrules

yeah, I just can't get back into this fanfic. if someone would like to help me, and create this into a double, I'll be fine with that. or if you had some ideas, or songs. that would be great too. thanks.

~no5penguin

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Date: 02/12/13 4:03 PM
From: PSYCHrules

I'm sorry! I'm still writing!
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Date: 01/31/13 12:56 PM
From: psychrules

Jillian's POV
look, this wasn't your fault! Ok? This wasn't your fault. I can't believe Dib. How could he do this? Normally he's so reasonable, and listens before he jumps to conclusions. but not this time. This time.....this time he didn't let me explain. He listened to ZIM more than he listened to me! I mean, ZIM!!!! *sigh* you know what? I gave him a chance. I tried to explain, but HE didn't listen. I'm done. I did what I had to do, but.......
School won't be back until August. It's going to be a lonely summer. But I'll get over him. Eventually. Now it's time to change my mood! New song! That's it Dib, you had your chance! Forget the song, let's go talk to Zim! I'll give Zim a chance.

Jillian walks out her house triumphant, with her head held high. Off to see Zim.

Dib's POV
Dib decides to look out his window.
I wonder where she's going........Probably off to see Zim. Oh well, I won't let it get to me.

Jillian's POV
wait. We haven't officially broke up. This WOULD be considered cheating....
Jillian pulls out her phone.
D-Hello?
J-Look, I just don't want to be accused of cheating AGAIN, so we are officially over.
D-WHAT?! YOU have the nerve to break up with ME?!?!?
J-yes, and I realize that this looks really bad for me, but I wish you could see it from my point of view.
D-I NEVER wish that! Because your point of view see's something attractive in ZIM!
J-at least Zim never blew me off when I tried to explain. Goodbye Dib.
she hangs up.
J-wow, I actually feel better.
RK(random kid)-WEIRDO!
J-WHAT?!? I CAN'T TALK TO MYSELF!?!? whatever. off to see Zim!

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Date: 01/30/13 12:44 AM
From: psychrules

Jillian's POV

ok, time to do my thing. time to play my song, than pick a new one. *sigh* this is just sad.
Jillian pops in a CD. and before she blasts it.....
who is playing that music? It sounds like...........Information Society? Nah.
Now she blasts it.

J-Don't walk away like you always do, this time.
Baby, you're the only thing that's been on my mind.
Ever since you left, I've been a mess
(You won't answer your phone)

I'll say it once, then I'll leave you alone
But I gotta let you know

I wanna get back
To the old days
when the phone would ring
and I knew it was you.
I wanna talk back
And get yelled at
Fight for nothing
Like we used to
Oh kiss me
like you mean it
Like you miss me,
'cause I know that you do.
I wanna get back
Get back with you
ayaaa...

don't look at me that way, I see it in your eyes.
Don't worry about me, I've been fine
I'm not gonna lie, I've been a mess
Since you've left

Everytime I see you, it gets more and more intense.

I wanna get back
To the old days
when the phone would ring
and I knew it was you.
I wanna talk back
And get yelled at
Fight for nothing
Like we used to
Oh kiss me,
like you mean it
Like you miss me,
'cause I know that you do.
I wanna get back
Get back with you

You were the only one I wanted
You were the first one I fell for
You're the only one that I'm in need of
And I don't want to be lonely anymore

I wanna get back
To the old days
when the phone would ring
and I knew it was you.
I wanna talk back
And get yelled at
Fight for nothing
Like we used to,
Oh kiss me
like you mean it
Like you miss me
'Cause you know you do
I wanna get back
Get back, with you

(Get back!) Get Back!
(Get back!) Get Back!
(Get back!) Get Back!
(Get back!) Get Back!

Oh kiss me,
like you mean it
Like you miss me
'cause I know that you do

I wanna get back
Get back
I wanna get back
get back
Get back
Get back

Get back!

yaooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 01/29/13 5:13 PM
From: psychrules

sorry about not posting, will post soon!
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Date: 01/25/13 2:16 PM
From: psychrules

Dib's POV
I can't believe that she was cheating on me! With ZIM! I just can't believe it. I don't understand why she would do that. But that's ok, I'll get over her, right? Oh, I don't think I'll ever get over her! I'm going to do that thing that..........who taught me this? First you play a song based on how you feel now, and than a different song to change your mood. Who taught me that?!
he pops in a cd into his cd player in his room. and sings along as he blasts it.

D-Staring at an empty screen,
I can sometimes feel like dying.
Doing what I have to do,
I can almost hear you crying.
This is how it feels.
Funny how it's all so real,
This is how it feels to be free.
To be free, to be free
Figures slowly come to life,
Almost always they are having,
Minor problems, minor strife
I can almost hear you laughing.
This is how it feels.
Using up the time we steal.
This is how it feels to be free
To be free, to be free
So this is how it feels to be free
This is how it feels to be free.
This is how it feels to be free.
This is how it feels to be free.
This is how it feels to be free.

ok, next song. but seriously, who taught me this?! oh. that's right, she did. This is Jillian's thing.

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Date: 01/24/13 9:05 PM
From: Senthelf

Cat: Man! Zim's even MORE annoying in this fanfic, than in real life! He reminds me of Edgar a bit in this fanfic... Dib is AWESOME! Zim's EVIL!
Edgar: *messes with camara* I DID IT! I just reworded what Cat just said a few seconds later after filming her! *plays video*
Video: *an almost robotic Cat's voice* Man! Dib's even MORE annoying in real life, than in this fanfic! He reminds me of Zim a bit in real life... Edgar is AWESOME! Dib is EVIL!
Cat: *angry mode* *beats up Edgar for the video thing* NEVER DO THAT AGAIN!
Edgar: *chuckles nervously* I might have made... a whole bunch of videos that I edited to make it sound like you like me and put them on YouTube...
Me: Don't worry, Cat. I made a comic where you shot him out of a cannon... IT'S IN CHIBI! *shows Cat the comic*
Cat: Holy Gir! This is so cute! CHIBI IS AWESOME!
Nut and Agent Fuzzy Franken-Kitty
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